Model3
SWIMMING POOL
Analysis:Dominante,subdominant,andsubordinateare placedthroughdifferentsizes.. variousofaxisgivesdynamic flow.
Reflection::Inordertoimprovesuchamodel,should'veused connectingtechniquessuchascradlingandpiercing.Add moreverticalvolumesoitdoesn'tseemlinear.
Feedback:Avoidinggettingalinearmodelthroughcreating moreaxises.
D Y N A M I C F L O W Y
S U B D O M I N A N T M o n u m e n t
P A G E 2 9
L i n e i n s p a c e
CW: A-
HW: B+
19.3.2023
05.
Line in space
Createacompositionusing5to7 curveswithawireto portraytwocontrastingfeelings.
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P A G E 3 2 Hierarchy
Axises
Classwork
Thismodelwaseryhardtocreatesince thematerialofwireswasthefirsttimeto useandwasn'teasy.istartedtopresent theorderfeelingthroughcreatinga systematiccirclesofcurvesandtheni maderandomcurvestopresentchaos throughdifferentsizesandtypesofcurves.
FEEDBACK
themodelhastobigerandmoreneatand accuratebutitwasn'tbecausethetypeof materialwasn'tthebest.
inordertomakethemodelbetter,better typeofwirehastobeusedandneatness isneeded.
wires MATERIALS ANALYSIS 01 02 P A G E 3 3 03 REFLECTION
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Homework
wearesupposedtodesignacom linesinspace.Theinspirationisa (animal-object-fig
Theconnections,material(s)and choice.
P A G E 3 4
Icreatedmanycurvesinmanysizesthat helpedtorepresentbeachwaves.Ithas manyaxisessincebeachwavesareflowy inalldirections.inadditiontothedifferent sizesofCurveswhichcreatehierarchy Thecoloroftheboardaddedtheeffectof thesandaroundthebeach..
Themodelneedsmorevertical componenttoemphasizeallthe directions.
Inordertomakethemodelbetter,verticle curves willbeaddedandmayuselighter bluecolor.
03 INSPIRATION MATERIALS 01 02 P A G E 3 5
REFLECTION
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FEEDBACK
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ANALYSIS
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06.
HW: B+
26.3.2023
HeadpiecePlanar system Homework
Youaresupposedtodesigntwoheadpiecesforthetwogroup members.Eachoneistobeinspiredfromthecharacteristicsof theperson.Theonlyrequirementisthatthecompositionshould beaplanarsystem.Becreativeasmuchasyoucantocomeout withnewandinterestingideas.
My partner's name: Lina Helal
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P A G E 3 8
Theinspirationforthemodels
Lina:
1. likes to read and observer.
2. Classic person
3. Gets Anxious quickly and overthinks.
Me:
1.Oragnaized
2.Analytical
3. Balanced.
Cardgame Wood Spraybottle Newspaper Blackcansonsheet 1 2 3 4 5 MATERIALS INSPIRATION 01 02
isourpersonalities P A G E 3 9
Done by Lina Helal
HEADPIECE 01
Analysis
The model has many axises which creates hierarchy but it doesn't have many sizes. piercing technique was used. this material is used to symbolize fun, being analytical and balanced as the model is balanced.
Reflection Feedback
The model needs more sizes and decrease the cards on the bottom cause it seems flat from down.
In order to make the model better, more connecting techniques are needed and more sizes should be created.
P A G E 4 0
HEADPIECE 02
Analysis
The model has many axises and sizes which creates hierarchy and tension. piercing connection technique was used. Newspaper is used to symbolize observation, curved lines for overthinking and mesh material for being a nature lover which all reflects her personality.
Reflection
The model needs more positive spaces to be better and may add more curved lines.
Feedback
In order to make the model better, more connecting techniques are needed and more sizes should be created.
by Me
Done
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Grade: B+
2.4.2023
07.
1.Createaplanarcompositionusingpaper
2.Createacompositionusingwiresandtheeggtray.
Model 1 Model 2
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Mid-term
P A G E 4 4
Model1: usingpapertodoamodelisnotthe easiestwayformesincefixingthis materialongroundishardthat'swaythe modellackcreativitybuttheinspiration helpedalottoreachdifferentaxisesand createherarichybetweendifferentsizesof curves.
Model2: wireshaverepresentedsuccessfullythe movementintheinspirationpicasmany curvesaredonewithdifferentsizesthat addedtensioninadditiontothecatchy eggtraypiecethatrepresenttheplottwist thathappeninbetweenanymovement.
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REFLECTION
Model1: Themodelneededmorenegativespace andbelargerinsizetoseemmorefree.
Model2: Themodelhasundefinedcurvesthat needstobemoreneat
04 FEEDBACK
Inordertomakethemodelsbetter:
mayaddsomecolortothefirstmodel andnegativespaces.
thesecondmodelneedsmore neatnessandbemoreaccuratein curves
01 02 P A G E 4 5
Model1: el2: Paper ay
INSPIRATION MATERIALS
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ANALYSIS
P r o j e c t 1