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Darker shades added to create contrast between contents inside and outside the bottle. Simple geometric shapes were rendered before, to visualize the shape of Listerine. Also, to draw the lid and body.
1. Background should have been added to support the subject of the drawing, so that the object is not "floating".
2. Surface of the object seems a little light overall, darkening the lines of the label ( to show the contents inside better) was needed.
To show a source of light di shining on the items, lighte of pencil were used.
Extra lines added to presen surface (using soft strokes)
rve appears distorted, since s to be more round than adow is inaccurate because ion shouldn't be visible. e and the neck of the vase n shown.
1. More contrast in shading is needed in order to make the drawing clearer.
2. Better to draw from a different perspective. This could be done by choosing to focus on smaller details.
Use of cross-hatching technique to create tonal effect.
Use of regular black p details necessary, to l realistic.
1. Although details wer have been better if the t colored (to increase real
2. Background could be natural touch.
ghter shades of navy blue e used at the edges in order resent a difference in planes
o much Ink was used in the final m box, as details of the perfume really showing.
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1. Too much ink was drawing a bit too hars be used for large spac added to give more de
2. Blocks on the right, in the drawing which life.
3. More details after th added in order to mak more realistic.
Several shades of markers and ink were used to make this effect.
n a couple of other corn kernels er give contrast.
is part was done by using cross ching as the main technique.
1. Brick walls look distorted that they do not align with th perspective.
2. More neutral colors are ne
s on the floor are not drawn ly according to the laws of ctive. more Ink to the cabinets/ island to ention to small yet important s and the fridge needed to be ed to give a more realistic view to wing.
1. The shades are very dark, m more water should be added, decrease the intensity of color
2. Balcony needed to be smalle it's distance from the campus
Darker shades of brown are placed to contrast the beige in the drawing
1. Not much contrast is made between the arc and the buildings behind. To improve such, darker shades could be placed at the back.
2. Additional objects could have been added to make the drawing realistic.
1. Shadow of the circle is dr inaccurately. To improve it, must be smaller and drawn d the circle.
2. Source of light is drawn in direction, as it seems like the of the wall which is not the c
Different shapes were drawn to practice all types.
Drawn from an angle to make the scene less basic
1. Source of light could have appeared to be more natural, by using watercolor.
2. Background needed to be darker to differentiate between the marble ground and wall.
Drawn from an angle to make the scene less basic and Grey colors are used
e drop shadow is needed in the on view, especially for the couches ats. e colors from the color wheel were to further increase intensity.
Assignment: To draw perception of Sultan Hassan Mosque via sketches and keywords on an A2 board.
1. Much negative space exists making the project seem empty.
2. More scenes of the mosques could have been used to contribute to the keywords.
3. Darker shades within the project were needed.
Media: Watercolor and regular coloring pencils
Rooms at the end of the hotel will be placed last
Layers will also arise from here.
Inspired by the hotel, the project will have parts that will open and close The journey begins with the steps.
Assignment: Present a walking in experience of your choice on A1 board or an equivalent.
Represents the architecture of Marriott Hotel in Zamaleks
The project will open to reveal the internal aspects and begin the journey of walking through it
Main entrance which takes visitors to both the left and right wings
1. It would have been better to add details in Aida's foyer's drawing, to make the scene a little more realistic.
2. Plants could have been added to the hotel entrance (stairs).