Detective Stories Written by: 4A
In the following pages, you will find detective type stories from your sons in 4A for your reading pleasure. There are few students missing, but they will be published soon. Enjoy!
Santiago N. The Stole Of The Hydrogen
This morning I heard a notice on the TV it said that ”Yesterday some thieves stole the Hydrogen Investigations and destroyed the laboratory, they also stole all the Hydrogen. The name of the boss is John Richards, the reward for the one who knew something about him is 4,000,000 of dollars. He is very short, he has black moustache and dark hair. Thanks”. People think that they stole it because they were trying to call our attention. They were very angry because the governer didn’t pay them attention. Police, soldiers, firemen, bodyguards etc. Are going to look for them and the Hydrogen, the search starts today afternoon, if they catch the thieves, they’re going to pay 45 years of their lives in jail. But we need SHERLOCK HOLMES to help us to catch them with some clues, and we have to find the Hydrogen. It’s very important for us. ¡If we don’t find it, we would DIE! lO3 persons are sick an l3O died. That’s why they have to be 45 years in jail. I recived a message from
@santinibo, he said “ Hi I live in
Minnesota-U.S.A, I know something about the thieves, they are in the street N°68 of Minnesota, they are in a blue gigantic house, thankyou ”. So, that is the almost unic information about the band.
Two days after this… We are in an airplane traveling from New York to Minnesota, we’re almost done, 3O minutes more to get to our destiny. We’re going to meet with Santiago Niño to visit the blue house. We are 3OO people and they are 15 thieves, they have guns, but we also have, we are going to wait until tomorrow to surround them, then like at
1:3Op.m we’re going to attack, we have to be very fast. First kill the bodyguards, like 1O and then the other 15 persons.
“The next day in the afternoon…” Now is the moment when we are going to attack, said the journeylist whispering. Thy attacked the house and they did it very well, they killed all the bodyguards and arrested the thieves, in that moment all the people policemen, soldiers, firemen etc. went to the airport, the airplain took off with them, they flew from Minnesota to New York. When they landed in perfectly mood, they were in the jail NYJ New York Jail. All the thieves were going to live the rest of their lifes in jail, the thieves were very angrys. But we got the Hydrogen so they were more angrys. Then after that they were in their prison celd. When they go there they got sleep. After 40 years, the 1O died, they were sick and very old men. They became bad spirits, The H.I Hydrogen Investigations, had a good segurity, and they constructed back the laboratory and got back the 1OO% of the Hydrogen that they lose. Then the city was very happy and also calmed. New York also became very, very clean and they came very careful with the nature. The laboratory men were very happys. After 15 years the Hydrogen was free in the air and HI got closed.
THE END.
The secret of the deadly disease” By: Felipe V. One day the super ninja detective Billy Joe saw that a meteor was falling from the sky, he ran and hide. When the meteor touched the street a disease started affecting people, the people that was near
the meteor started losing their heads and after 30 minutes they died. When Billy Joe saw that the people was died he run to the house of his parner Bob. Some minutes later Billy Joe toll Bob about the deadly disease. They started thinking about the cure but they do not find any clues. Billy Joe remember that his cousin was a scientist. Then they get to the lab of the cousin of Billy Joe maximilliano.
When we were in the lab of Maximilliano he said what are you doing here I am here so you can help me on a case what is the case the case is that the people is losing the head, it only could be a radioactive disease, but what is the cure the cure is an antidote of an radioactive element, some radioactive elements are Ac,Th,U,Np.
The cure is what is inside the meteor but we need some antiradioactive suits.when we open the meteor the cure was uranium.
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The revelation of the elements By: Jeronimo A. It was like 5 or 6 in the morning when my cellphone rang, It was a C.I.A. man that called me for solve a case of a gigantic metallic robot that hazed been born by an explosion of elements. He was telling me that if I didn’t help him it could be the apocalypse of the world. He told me that it was an element revelation. Then silence invades our conversation, and after that a scream sound and the cellphone hang off. In that moment I took my car and I went to look for it.
When I was there I didn’t find nothing only a little of metal that have been ripped by someone, Then I heard a scream and I follow the sound until I get in a room were the robot was, I was scared but I started thinking of all that people that can die and I went there. In that room the robot attack me but then I thing about something and it was to give the robot money or call the marines, I said the robot if he want money, the robot said yes I give the money to the robot but I said the robot to don’t kill more people and he said yes, he went out and me 2.
Last time I knew about the robot was in the news and it said that it help a constructors to build a building of cars, a days after that I talk with the robot and he said me that he have a car for me and it was a Ferrari so I said thank you for this and all us were happy.
Juan Andres G. The Pool Party Destroyer There was a pool party. The host juan felipe invited his friends. The guests were enjoying the party. Then some intruders came under covered and came to pool pump the intruders poured liquid nitrogen on it. Some guests haved horrible wounds, some were frozen and they didn’t breath well they were so scared because they haved serious diseases. Juan felipe called the police The polices brought the forensics. The forensics used the coloful paper to idenify the chemical used in the pool. It was the nitrogen that caused that catastrphic thing Juan Felipe gived a guest list to the police. The police identified responsibles on the finger prints on the pool pump.
The police looked to the criminals and found that they maded other deliquencies and the police wanted them ; they were famous criminals: valle was arrested by murder of Stevie and Dr House Nava and trepo were arrested by terrorism in Carrefour and robering in Banclombis and murdering poor people.
Arturo A. The phony mayor In Caotic city, there was a warning. I mean that all the population was scared and worried because there was a rumor that all the water in Caotic city was contaminated by mercury. And we know that mercury is very toxic, so that meant that anybody could use water to drink it or to take a shower because they could die or suffer from a disease. Because of this, the government called Jack Myler that was a very good detective to investigate if the rumor was true or false and to investigate who was the responsible of that. Effectively, Jack Myler began to search for clues and to investigate the case. He interrogated every person that seemed to be guilty and he observed every strange thing that he found. 3 days later, the elections to choose the mayor began. Myler watched the mayor´s debate carefully and he noticed that a candidate named James Terry was so nervous. Because of that, Myler suspected of him so he interrogated Terry. Myler asked him many questions but Terry didn´t answer any of them. Myler told Terry that if he didn´t answer the questions, he would call the police to arrest him, but it was impossible that Terry said even a word. Effectively, Terry went out of Myler´s office without saying a word, but Myler had a plan.
His plan was that he was going to track Terry´s calls to see if he was the responsible of all of that. So, he set his plan in motion and he began to track Terry´s calls. In one of them, he heard that Terry was talking to his partner about his plan. His plan was that he was going to invent the rumor that the water was contaminated by mercury but really, it wasn´t. Then, one of Terry´s proposals was that he had the solution for the contamination of the water, and when he magically solved the problem, all the people were going to choose him and he was going to be the new mayor of Caotic city. Instantly, Myler recorded that call and went to the police to show them the record. After the police saw the record, they demanded Terry and took him to jail because he was an impostor and a phony man.
THE MYSTERY OF THE MINERALS By: Samuel F. Hello my name is Michael. I am the best detective in the world, I have a big mustache and I am very tall. I am going to tell you the adventure that I had last week. One day I and my partner Alexander were in my house. When someone arrived that said “you need to stop him, he have the minerals”. Then we saw that he have a bullet in his heart and then he died. Then I said Alexander “a case begins”.
He started observing the man and he saw that he works in a lab located in the other side of the street. They entered the lab and they found 3 experiments were not there. We watched the door, the windows and every entrance but everything was closed by some protection that uses the military but Michael found a door in the floor that connected the street with the lab, so Michael said- he would return and we would be here to catch him-. But how do you know he will return. Asked Alex-. – Because he stole 3 of the most precious elements in the world, he forgot 1 so he will return.
That night they brought their beds and slept in the lab. At 12:00 Am the criminal arrived to the lab and we catch him. Alexander asked “how did you know he was coming” “because he stole only 3 metals and they are 4 so he nets the other one to complete his collection and if he dint return he nets to close the door and camouflage it. That´s the case I solved last week. Now I´m going to check everything is good in the lab to return. When I arrived I saw a cadaver and the d opened and I started to investigate the floor door, then someone knocked me out, when I wake up I saw the criminal and the minerals. Then knocked him but I went away with the elements, then I go to the lab to leave them there. I return home and slept. The next day I started with breakfast without a crime to solve. Then I start analyzing: who knew that I was there, how and where. So then I finished so I concluded that the criminal was my partner, my friend Alexander. He was the only one that stole the minerals and only him knew all my plans so when he arrived home I killed him with a gun and my conclusion was right, he had the minerals with him, from the begging he was the person that stole the minerals but he needed some people to help him to cover the real clues and me to discover him and send him to jail and then I went to the general barracks of the criminals and stop them by taking the minerals that appears of the periodic table. Then I return all the minerals to the lab and then I concluded that all of those minerals were to make a missile to destroy the world and thanks to me the world is ok of destruction.
The explosion of the barrier By: Juan Sebastian F. In Alaska a barrier controls water pressure also it is very important to the city that is located down of it, after when the barrier dint exists the city was full of water. At 8:00am Shaggy and Phantom were walking through the barrier, when someone trough two things to the water and then he ran faster than the light. Seconds later they saw fire in top of the water and then a BOOM sound the barrier was broken
When Shaggy saw this he said: What was that? Then Phantom answer: It was Potassium the thing of the fire but what was that Boom, we need to ask Freddy in his laboratory. When they ask
Freddy, he answer that the boom was Francium. We need to evacuate the city, go and find the criminal. Shaggy found a card when the man was running it say John alkali metals he was sitting in a hotel but he was going when he see them he try to scape but ¨Phantom trap him and he go to prison. The city was evacuate with no deads.
Juan Esteban G.
THE BIG STEEL!!!
One day I was in the military base, we were protecting the source of energy . the new element that we discovered in the middle of the universe with the last rocket we invent. That element comes from the molecules from water and gold, with that element we keep the water fresh, the trees with live, all electricity, the food in good shape. Two days later I went to visit my friend Steve. I talked to him like for 3 hours telling him how fantastic the new element is because he is a sciencetist. 1 day later the captain Jones called me, and told me the element was steel. He gived me the mission to investigate . I only found one thing that was a button that said Ray street two meter underground. I decided to tell to my friend Steve analyze the button an if he could discover or knew something. But there were anything more. I investigate all the base again for see if I coul find something else.
Then I cleaned the button and by hours of thinking got the secret of the button it said the location of their cave. Then I went to Ray street two meters underground. I found the plan for them to conquest the word it says I would black mail them with the element and they would let us govern the world for get the element back. So I put a tramp. I traped them with a little jail and taked them to the jurge of New York and they had 60 years o prison.
Juan Pablo M.
The mistery of the nobelium It was 4:30 a.m. when my friend henry walked me up telling me that we had a visitor. When I walked up from bed and enter to the principal room I saw a beautiful woman dressed with a pink dress. I notice she was very sad because her eyes were black and she was crying. Just then our visitor talked. And she said: mi name is EMMA DOSSEN and I need your help MR. Henry. In that second my friend answered this: What do you need? He asked. The woman started talking about a strange that happened to her father. She said: Yesterday I was with my father in the SHEREN MONTAIN whene we saw a very bright object it was like a very bright green light. Then my father walked to the light,and he died. When the woman finished telling her story, Henry said that the case wasn´ t the first, and he took out of his poket an old paceof newspaper. When he opened it he showed us an underline article that
25 deads by a strange animal in the SHEREN MONTEIN. And he continued, I really don’t think it was an said:
animal. I suspect it was the bright element.so when henry finished he told Emma that we would meet there at the mountain at 7:00a.m. of the next day. So the woman went out, the next 5 hours Henry and I investigated about
the brightest elements on the world, but we didn’t found anything. So then he said to me that tomorrow we will investigate the case. The next day Henry walked me up at 5:00a.m. for me to get ready to go. We went out like at 6:30a.m. so that we could be on time at the mountain.When we arrived we found Emma sited on a chair waiting for us.When we arrived she warned us about the danger of that element, so when she finished we started going up the mountain. When we arrived to the exact point we saw the dangerous light. It was the same light Emma described just then my friend Henry started to go near the light. In that second Emma took him and pull him back to the place we were. Henry was very sacared. What was very strange because he wasn’t scared never. We came back to the car and went home again, When we arrived I saw he had a solution to the problem.5 hours later he strangely search for an element named NOBELIUM the computer do not found anything just then I asked about that strange name. He answered with an explanation, he said that when he was going to that element in my eyes I saw the name NOBELIUM so I decided to search for it but I coud not found anything. So tomorrow we will go again to the mountain, I have a plan. At the next day we went to the national investigating laboratory asking for help. The lab borrow us 3 investigators with special clothes for the not to die. So we went to the mountain but Henry told us to go from the back to take it and to bring it to the lab for them to investigate. When we arrived the scientists investigate the element and have the conclusion that killed that innocent people, so then in the newspaper the first announcement was about the element and then from that day the NOBELIUM is a element of the periodic table almast very reactive and now it is from the actanides group of the periodic table.
ALL PEOPLE WANT GOLD! Alejandro M. One day a man named Albert bought some things for his breakfast. Then he went to the bathroom of the mall. When he enters he saw
a secret door, so he enters through the door. When he entered he saw GOLD, so he take the pickaxe and chop the GOLD. Then he went to his house. (There was the only piece of the world)
Then some gangsters mugged Albert and stole the piece of gold. Then Albert called me (carlitos the detective). Then when I arrived he told me the story. Then he finish tolling me the story I called my assistant Javier . then when he arrived we went to look for clues. When we finished we went to Albert’s house to told him what we found. Later we found Oscar, a lazy person who told us where the gang went. Oscar told us that the gang went to my house. So I called Ricardo the police to went to my house and arrest the thief. When He arrived. He entered and arrested the thief. So albert said thank you to me and Ricardo.
A PHOSPHORUS FERTILIZER TREE By: Simón L. Daniel Gonzalez, a young chemical from a Santiago the Chile University, was worried about the environmental pollution of his city. He investigated in the university lab looking for a solution to help to decrease the levels of pollution.
Soon, he discovered that the chemical element called phosphorus was used in fertilizers and mixed with other element. Phosphorus is a very reactive element, so he take care of not create an explosion. One day he saw that his fertilizer work very well in his lab tree because it was growing strong in cold season and his leaves doesn´t fell. He shows the investigation to some important scientists. All scientists’ agreement that was a great idea to help the environment of Santiago, especially during winter. Daniel Gonzalez fertilizers became famous in his city and decrease the pollution. One year later, someone took the bigger part of the fertilizers, then the man contaminated the fertilizer with a toxic liquid and he threw again with the liquid. The trees became contaminating. Daniel Gonzalez talk with the police to have a solution and criminal of the problem. The police don´t do anything, so Daniel create another fertilizer and now Santiago is a better city.