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Detective Stories Written by Students in 4B

These stories have been written throughout the quarter. Each student used all the steps in the writing process. Several hours during the quarter were used to revise and edit. Many students took advantage of these opportunities and used their time wisely. Enjoy these creative stories that integrate English and Science.


THE MYSTERY OF THE BLACK WITCH Alejandro H. I don’t remember all the story that my stepfather told me in 1749, but I remember the beginning of the story, it starts like this. In 1716 the uncle of my stepfather was investigating a case, with his old partner Blackwood. After a few years Blackwood have enough money to buy a lot of things. My stepfather uncle was Watson, but he preferred to call him Dr.Watson. Whatever, another detective was in scientific alliance, but this alliance due to their experiments were too risky so every week, month, year or evenly a day, some allies of this group die. This alliance know the periodic table very much, and the basic elements that they use were: Magnesium, Potassium and Aluminum, but they also rob every year to the mathematical James Moriaty. Well, one day the police enter to the house of Watson in Paris to arrest Blackwood, because of killing people with black magic. Watson was worried because with no help he couldn’t answer all the cases, so he want to be in the scientific alliance. When Watson went to the scientific place, a dusty man entered to the apartment 21 of Baker Street and when the man was going up stairs he fell down. Watson wanted to help him but before he was getting inside the man said to him see you up stairs and the man start to run to the room. When Watson entered the room the man look completely different and he introduce himself, my name is Sherlock Holmes I am part of a scientific alliance. Watson ask him, are you a detective? Yes, and I am investigating a man that just entered jail in Paris and… Before he continue to telling me a man of the alliance said to him that there was an explosion because someone had put the magnesium and potassium in the same glass and the fire appeared….. Blind, It could not happened that said the man he was using special glasses. Maybe someone has blind him said Holmes. In that moment a man yell, I have been robed!

OLD FRIEND

Holmes told Watson to stay in his house until he come back. Watson did it so he was in his living room, standing in front of the book shell seeing if he can’t distract himself reading something. Holmes had his book shell very disorganized, some books of science were in


the math some books of explorations were with animals books , the only books that were in the same place were the ones of James Moriaty. So Watson decide to take a book of Moriaty the dynamic of an asteroid, but when Watson pulled the book to read it a strange sound come from the kitchen, and he so a secret room but this one was a laboratory. Watson enter and he so to a big glass that say! Hydrogen watch out! Before he opened a man enter from the dark of this room and Watson yell! Blackwood you were the one that rob Moriaty! Of course Watson, but you can’t stop me and going to make an explosion with Hydrogen in this moment so is better that you run with Sir Holmes your new best friend, and I am doing this because one thing, what Watson ask, revenge said Blackwood.

THIS METHOD

When Holmes enter hen so that all his house was in a complete mess, so he tell his partner to check the upstairs floor and that he will check the one that is down. Holmes will not dude that Watson could found his secret laboratory so Holmes go very fast and pull the book he can’t believe what happened in there, someone has kill Watson all this laboratory was in fire. Holmes have no hope to look for Watson until he heard a yell! Save me, that sound come from the laboratory so Holmes go in there. He so Watson, and he getting outside.

AND THIS IS THE END OF THE STORY I HOPE YOU LIKE IT BUT THIS STORY HAS NOT FINISHED WE HAVE TO SOLVE WHI BLACKWOOD WANT

REVENGE!

THE REAL STORY

Well I think that something in the story is wrong, now I will have to ask my brother if my version is wrong. Hello brother, hello Rene how are you, I am fine I am here to ask you


something , what , the one who want revenge in the story that our stepfather told us was Blackwood or‌ You are completely wrong, the one who want revenge was Moriaty.

Luisa the killercrock woman around the world Alejandro M. In 82000D One day a woman was walking normally on a radioactive plant made of hydrogen uranium uup etc. And she falled down


with a crocodile and they fusioned and she was called Luisa the killercrock and she started to kill and destroy everything and everyone. But one day the army and the government tried to kill her but she destroyed all of them and she ran away so they called Sherlock Holmes to search for her and he deduced that a crocodile had attacked them in a


radioactive plant, that the crocodile escaped, and that Gollum was spying them. After that they discovered that Luisa had evolved to a baby Godzilla. A day after she evolved to a giant Godzilla, she putted eggs and she feed them after that they born and control the world but after a Godzilla´s size atomic bomb the few humans that survived grow giantly


and throw fire and they destroyed all the Godzillas except for one but after that the Godzilla started to put eggs in different places and Gollum started to eat them but when Gollum died the humans had to find the eggs, otherwise they Will grow and control the world again. So Sherlock Holmes started to deduce where the eggs were but he didn’t knew so Luisa the


killer crock arrived and say that she could use her mighty and horrible nose to find the eggs and destroy them so they traveled the world and destroy the eggs. But there was a letter from………………. Sherlock Holmes in his jacket it was written recently because the ink was wet but the letter said that he died but they still needed to search Luisa.


After that Sherlock appeared and took his jacket and go apparently to his house but when they could no longer see hem he turned and go search Luisa she’s killer-crock half personality woke up and destroyed the city so Sherlock Holmes was in a hurry so he decided to call the police that was in the nest of the eggs but they arrived too late because when they arrived there


was no city just ruins but they found Sherlock Holmes scared so they putted Sherlock Holmes in the helicopter and they chased Luisa that was on the sea trying to destroy the world and return the godsillas to their control of the world. The police mans throw fire from their mouths trying to burn the ocean but they knew that it won’t work so they tried to shoot Luisa


and they killed her and lived happy for ever, or not it doesn’t mater.

The

End

? The stolen hydrogen

Camilo I.


Hi my name is Camilo isaza I have 2 sons the little one is called James and the other is called Michael, my wife is Sarah. One day in 4088 in august 24 a robber called Nicolas and best recognized as n.d.c he don’t like to work and one day he go into to work of the elements of the periodic table and I all the time I speech of him am called spurs dolled and my partner Mr.jeam.at September 23 the hydrogen is despaired and I can said that the robber is will be Nicolas dim collar. At the other day the police called me and I start to search clues in the scene of the crime I went to the house of Nicolas. Nicolas looked at me with his sharp, keen eyes and greeted me with a smile. He seemed relaxed with his long bunny body stretched out on his favorite old sofa while I ask some questions like what he was doing the last September 23. Then I gave the notes that I got to the police. And the police to do me that when they find the robber they are going to give me a very good reward.so much money all the money that I can buy a glove of iron and tis iron cannot rust on any option. And I will to save with a lot of elements to make steel I love the steel it is my favorite element because when it oxide it turns a yellow. Is like orange yellow combined with red. But the bad news is that the police don’t found


the robber doom. but in the last day the police found the robber and I have the money I don’t buy an glove of iron I buy a super system to the laboratory that is the man rob an element it is condemned all the live. So in that day in adamant all was so sure in the laboratory and in the planet and today am I a trill nary and I not a detective am the owner of the systems of security in almost all the united states, so I have a very good moral because if I will be shellfish I buy the glove, but not, I buy the security system. Today I have the money of 1098 gloves of iron so I learn to invest the money. And Nicolas was in the jail 24 years. And I am happy in liberty with my family. And this story is based in the story of Sherlock Holmes of the chapter’s scandal in bohemia, the read hared leag, blue car bungle and Greek interpreter.

Revenge But I need to put a save in my house because the man said that when he gets out of prisons he is going come for revenge. 24 years later


So Nicolas said me that he is going to do something to my family so I buy a body guard and Nicolas can’t touch my family.

One day Nicolas was checking all the newspaper, to see if is a case to resolve. And in a minute saw that a man robbed is an element from the science lab it is called mercury. It is

poisonous, she look the newspaper and is the year 3000, day 13 Friday ,and month December, The next day he woke up and went to the car and went for clues for the robbery of mercury. He investigate about mercury but he do not understand what the man take mercury. The next day Nicolas go to uranium factory and a scientist give him a special gun

that detects everything like mercury The next day Nicolas visit her friend polo the best friend of Nicolas ups say Nicolas. He watering a potion of dynamite and


all the laboratory explode. The man did said Nicolas they put together an element radioactive and produce an explosion but the man return and do another explosion, booooom another exploding of the man. We go to a zoo to get information and be funny for minutes. We see seals, snakes ,whales, and many things but when we see the snake the man that steal mercury was there we get closer but when we get closer he broke the glass of the snake and all people began to run. The next day whe sleep and go to

bought one I buy a

sniper with sleep darts and polo buy a revolver we go to the

man location that is in his house with the chemical element mercury the man escape we run to get him but he is so fast we get a car and get him to the jail but he trick us he put a toy like him and escape from the window. We go to the laboratory

and eat the lunch is pork and a delicious beef we said to everyone that if they see this man call me or my friend polo. The next day we got a call from Mr.goilo is a man that have a family with little boys he said I see the man running all this morning to give an element to his chief and steal all elements

to create a mechanical machine. We invent a character of


mercury is an element that when we are sick they put a thermometer to see how hot you are. We put mercury in a man

and transforms in a mercury man is very dangerous because is poisonous Nicolas and polo go to the astronomy lab they see titanium. The titanium is an element that have 22 protons and electrons. Is like dangerous but is not more dangerous like

other elements like the noble gases. Nicolas and polo go to a place called Orlando and first we went to Orlando and 2; to Mongolia we see TV and go to sleep. In 12 o’clock the alarm songs we went outside and and is a spider

The next day we go to a place secret that is in Mongolia they

say that the fishes have mercury. First the factories and mines throw mercury to the

ocean, 2: the krill eat the mercury, 3: the salmon eat the krill and have more mercury, 4: then the tuna eat the salmon and have mercury, 5: the last the shark eat the tuna and humans eat fish and get

mercury in her body.


One day we wake up and we saw in the TV that is a robber in Mongolia in the bank of boron and sodium the man robber

more elements and more but he don’t now that we have traps in everywhere also lasers but he escape and go to California to take hydrogen and helium we go to California and he already robber he is going to give all the elements to her chief to

create a machine that is going to destroy all he wants also me and polo but my other friend Marco stop the machine and save the world because that machine is going to explode all things. The next day we go to play billiard with a couple of persons. When my father dies inherit me and all he have goes to me. The

next day I decide to go to Vegas to take little vacation to rest. When I got 20 years old I buy a house to rest all day and founding very good cases to resolve and be happy all my life being detective.

The end of the story mercury.


One day, in a town a boy saw Sherlock Holmes solving a case and then said I like. Then he went to the house of a man to go talk to the parents of what the boy said is that he wanted to be a researcher in all the life (35 years ago).A friend and are very good friends of all his life. They both are researcher and the names are Jack and Nicolas. Nicolas said I have a case to solve a case in Spain that there are three thieves of diamonds. We go to Spain to solve the case of the carbon. Jack went to a factory of radioactive carbon and became in a man that can convert in a diamond man and a “mine” man and that is benefits to solve the case that Nicolas decide to go and Jack is thinking if it going to go to Spain. Jack decide to go but can’t go in the plane and think he can convert in normal man I am going to try to convert in a normal man. Jack can convert in a normal man to go in the plane to Spain. Jack convert when decide to convert in the moment that need to covert. Nicolas is waiting for Jack in the airport to go the hotel of five stars. The other day the bank is robbed and Jack and Nicolas go to investigate the case of the bank. In the bank is a gun and Nicolas have a Fingerprint detector and the gun and has a fingerprint of a sought of Spain that robbed bank to have money, jack is going to convert. Jack went to an alley to convert in carbon to go to fight in Spain chase hit the footprint and the footprint go to abandoned house that has all the carbon that is stolen of the same thief that Sherlock Holmes arrested then he knew how to be a detective but I think that go to the shell all the live. Then he said” I escape from the shell”. I am not alone and then a thief hit me in the head. Then I am with chains in the arms and then they do like 10 questions of how I found this house and I said whit a footprint that lead to this house and the same footprint that is in the bank, then he got out a smoke grenade and the called the police officers to come and arrest the 10 thieves. Then they went back to their house. Then he found fire in the house of Jack and the fire is with fault and not accidental.


THE MURDER IN THE TRAIN AND THE MISTERY OF THE MISSED ALUMINUM Juan Daniel C. One day Sherlock was going to go to his house when he look to the train station. A train was going to France he buy some tickets and he go with Watson they look that some mans were caring. Some aluminum to France when they were in a tunnel and the lights turn off. The police mans were dead and the aluminum was lost. He looked every were but he didn’t find anything when he was walking he see a piece of aluminum in the floor he went to the room and he find a dead police with a gun he check his suit and he have piece of aluminum that he have in his hand. Sherlock see that he have some carbon in the suit he went with Watson to the train engine and ask to the train driver if he have seen someone walking around there. He said that now when Sherlock was going to the restaurant he fin some little pieces of aluminum in his plate so he go to ask some questions to the chef but he didn’t know anything. He went and ask a question to the train guard Sherlock asked if anyone carry a gun but he said that no one except from you and me so they kept searching till Sherlock had an idea he ho to look at the policeman suits and a suit didn’t have the gun and the knife He investigate and find some plutonium in the train so he heard a strange voice said you never solve this case because before I will kill you so a man ,made of metal and plutonium appear and took Watson and kill him so he fight with Sherlock and when the train was going thru o lake the man made of plutonium and aluminum took a knife and throw it to Sherlock it Sherlock got hurt but he still fighting till the aluminum plutonium man take the knife throw it to another man for distracting Sherlock and wen Sherlock go to help the man the plutonium aluminum take a part and throw it to a part of the train and it explode and then he take a drop of plutonium and make that Sherlock touch it Sherlock get burn a part of his arm and then the plutonium and aluminum man hurt him with a sword and burn him alive.


The police man come to help but all of them die when the army help some other nuclear mutants get to help the plutonium metal man then they had a bloody fight but the nuclear man’s won they take all Europe and make more of them then they take all of the humans and make them servants but there was some people who didn’t like that so they make a war between them so they fight and kill all the world was in danger of them so they make a secret military gun made of all the nuclear elements they so they make a secret military gun made of all the nuclear elements they throw it to Europe and destroy all when the world think that the y won they appear on Oceania and killed everyone there the world were in trouble they throw the second missile to Oceania and destroy it they do it until the finished the continent Asia so the elements went America

They had a bloody war but the humanity won and the world get saved by the intelligence of the Scientifics

Pablo A.

Chapter 1: The kidnapped element . One day in the Periodic City, a little atom, Hydrogen, was walking by the Reactive period, and it found it-self in Carbon´s house, he heard a crying, he entered and found him holding an electron. Hydrogen asked him what happened, Carbon answered “My sister disappeared. After several minutes of crying, Carbon said… “She has 11 electrons” said holding one electron that was lying on the floor. “She is Sodium, very hyperactive, and loves the countryside.” Carbon gave Hydrogen a picture of Sodium. She was an older atom, about 35 years old she was married with Silicon, who disappeared when The Halogen Band threw a bomb that made an explosion on the Westminster palace.


“I can find him” Hydrogen said. Carbon continued crying, and minutes later, Hydrogen took Carbon to his house an ordered to stay there, “Carbon - Hydrogen said-, I need to inspect your house without you… May I? He asked”-“Of course” Carbon said.

Chapter 2: The Halogen band. At six´o clock, Hydrogen began its investigation. Was a rainy night at The Periodic City, every single atom was with an umbrella. All atoms were entering to their houses. When Hydrogen arrived to Carbon´s house he went upstairs, he cross the hallway and he found himself in Sodium’s bedroom. It was cold and dark, when he turned on the light he found some strange things.

In the floor down the bed there was a kind of secret gate, which Hydrogen inspected, he also found a little powder, and when he smelled it, he fainted. When he woke up he found it was Chlorine-faint power, used by The Halogen Band. After these he inspected the secret gate. Inside there was a little house which had an announcement saying: The Halogen Band. There was also a tunnel that conduced to the direction of the center, where all atoms where going to celebrate New Year the next day. When he went out of the tunnel he found that there was an atom in the end of the hallway. He was big, about, Hydrogen was silent so he tried to catch the atom, but that atom was very attractive so the only thing he could do was to stay in the bedroom a couple of minutes. After a half an hour, Hydrogen was save, he thought the atom was a Halogen so he ran into the living room, and he was wright, he saw a piece of paper saying…“We know who you are … The Halogen Band”…

Chapter 3: The deadly tunnel. At the next morning, Hydrogen took a police man, named Neon and he also took Carbon with him. After hours of walking, all of them found themselves below the center of Periodic City. The hole below the center there was a big whole with red columns connected to a kind of tower. “Its dynamite” Carbon said. For Hydrogen these was illogical, because Halogens used reactive atoms to explode the Periodic Table. After seconds of fear, they heard an atom yelling… HELP! The three atoms were searching for a signal, just then Carbon noticed a jail in the middle of the dynamite columns. There was him, Sodium. She was holding a ring, and after him was Silicon. Carbon was crying, and Neon had to take Carbon some periods away. Hydrogen asked to Sodium what had happened. Sodium answered “It had 17 electrons” He put a powder on my nose and I fainted. Then he took one electron from me and he took me to these place. It was horrible. Just then Hydrogen found the jail was made of galleon. “Call my two brothers an Oxygen, Hydrogen ordered to Neon.


While the atoms arrived, Hydrogen inspected Sodium´s nose. He found the same Chlorine-faint powder. And the only atom who can produce these substance was Chlorine. Minutes later, all of the atoms arrived and, they formed a water molecule, which melted the jail letting Sodium and Silicon free. “Let’s go outside” Hydrogen said. We have to stop a catastrophe.

Chapter 4: New Year´s Eve. It was 11:44 and all the team was running throe the tunnel. And when they arrived to the center it was too late… it was 11:59.30 and the dispositive to activate the bomb was moving to the top… But Neon flew throe the sky and stopped the dispositive just in time, but then, a voice told all the city... Periodic City the “bomb” you supposed to deactivate was a trick, I have in my power 100 Unupetiums, who are going to disintegrate all the Periodic Table, and only the Halogen Band will survive. Just then all the Alkali Metals arrived and searched for the Unupetiums. When they founded them, they interacted with them saving the lives of every single atom in The Periodic Table.

Chapter 5: The god of elements… That night, Hydrogen, Carbon, Neon, Sodium, and the Major, Zink, celebrated a new year in the history. But Hydrogen was confused, that Halogen outsmarted him. He seemed very confused. After having dinner in the mayoralty, Hydrogen went to the church of the fallen atoms. There, in the middle, was a big statue of Hydrogen´s mother. She died because she stopped The Halogen Band and they killed her. The statue was a picture of a gas floating into heaven. She died at January the 1rst at 2:00 a.m. She died because the Halogens filled her with electrons and she disintegrated. Hydrogen was scared thinking he will be the next. Behind the statue was the god of all atoms: THE CHEMIST. He hold on its hands two jails with diseased atoms inside. On its feet he had a bunch of careless smashed atoms, who were the atoms that tried to explode the periodic table. At 5:00 a.m., atoms where in the streets singing the periodic hymn of the Periodic Table: In period and groups is divided, all atoms are unique, we love our Periodic Table, no-one can destroy it… Oh periodic table You are so big, Oh periodic table You are so big. We need to live in elements, which we are so much. So Dmitry organized us, while he has pacing on his room… Oh periodic table You are so big, Oh periodic table You are so big. After hours of songs and dancing atoms builded a monument in memory to Hydrogen, who was very happy.

Chapter 6: The end of The Halogen Band...Until now.


The next morning, all Halogens were detained and send to a high-security jail. All the city said thanks to Hydrogen, which went back to home. That night a Halogen escaped from prison, and the next rainy day, Hydrogen found on its table these message:

There are five atoms. The first was Beryllium… he died, next was Gold… he died, after him Plutonium… he died, the next Iron… he died, next was Sodium… you didn’t let mi kill him, so these is my revenge…You are next… The Halogen Band

…To be continued…

A ROBBERY In VENICE BY:ESTEBAN C. Characters:peter delin,jhon gosgos,osan glover(giampaolo),hydrogen danny,boss of the pólice.

One day on Venice at 2003 on sunny day at autumn I was with no good mood. I AM a man tall, black hair, brown eyes and I like a lot sports. Me John Gouges decided to visit my best friend and assistant as a detective and also expert on chemistry, no one beats him in chemistry also in math he can round any number. well, so when I got to his house, he seemed very worried so I asked him:?why are you so worried?.its a new case” he said” ”and what happened””well “my friend started “here in Venice a formula that contained a beauty gem and a new element that is only found 120 km underground or on Colombia at the Amazonas, so it was stolen from a lab in Paris “ then I said “ but what it contains that is so important” “ well my friend “ he said “it contains a new element found called EROKILO that its also mixed with HYDROGEN,MERCURIUM,and,BORON, all that in only one element¡”” then I answered “ what are we


waiting for, lets go “then he answered “ its not so easy my friend, we first need a plan for resolve this case.There saying that the guard of the lab that it was robbed knew the password and stole it and ruined here to Venice as fast as possible. “then I said “why he would like an element for something “then a stranger rushed into the door. He was a tall man with black hair and looked very educated like a president of something important, also seemed very worried. After being quiet for at least five seconds then he said “mr.Delin. I have a problem.Im the president of the lab that lost the element. My name is OSAN GLOVER. The cameras recorded that a man about forty years old with a hood and with the jar that contained the element. Please Mr.DELIN, you are the only one that can help me and the only good detective I know” then my pal said”Mr.Glover I wouldn’t miss this case even I would be a baby. I will meet you in the hotel five galaxies at five blocks from here, at 3:05 this afternoon “the the man said” thank you mr delin I don’t know how I will pay you” then the man left with a big smile in his face.Jhon I will ask you do not talk me “said my friend. After a half a hour he jumped from his sofa and said”Mr.Gosgos, would you mind to accompany me to the hotel Five Galaxies to meet Mr.Glover the president of the lab that was robbed?” When we were at the Hotel we saw Osan and when he saw us, he said”Mr.Delin I have good and bad news. Which you want to hear first” ”The bad ones “said my pal.Then Osan answered”Well the bad ones are is that I know who robbed the element.It was the guard of the lab named Giampaolo Meeazza aka bouncy. He lives in a street close here named gruel at the house number 12.”then I said” but that is a good new so what is the good one” ”the good one is better “said Osan”is that he is in Russia for a couple of days so we can investigate his house” Ones we were inside the house we saw so much rob things . there was a Japanese armor by the fire and a sable of China above the armor. After a couple of hours investigating the house we left.Osan to the Hotel MARRIOT and my friend and I to our house by the river. The next morning I waked up like at 4:50 at the morning I wasn’t sleepy so I started to reflect about this case, I thought that: if we go to Russia and capture him with the element,no.wait, how did Osan knew that he was going to Russia and the house wasn’t locked and how he entered with no problem and …..then the bell rang, it waked up my friend and it put me on alert and when we opened the door he was a little man probably he was 1.50 tall and probably weight like 57 kilos and was like he was dehydrated and if he was lost in the Sahara. Then he said” I am….am the…..guard of the lab “it seemed strange and he talked with pauses. But when my pal heard that he was the guard he let him in gave him food, water, and whisky with konoac.THEN he said”now I can talk well “then he continued” I was doing the guard as usual but I heard that the place were was the element was….was robbed so I entered and saw footsteps and followed them but then I was attacked by the same Giammpaolo Meeaza the president of the lab, he says that his name is Osan but is not true. Well he attacked me and closed me into a closet.I was 1 week there and escaped and came here to Venice and to tell you what happened. The only thing I know is that He will take a plane at half night to San Petersburg and he is with the element. “then I said” so lets go to the airport”. When we were there we waited for Giampaolo in the waiting room for entering the plane.Then my friend asked”so which is your name? “then he said”it’s a long name but I am called Hydrogen danny ujoi meleden they put me Hydrogen because am little “then we saw “Osan” and then Hydrogen said “return the element and you will go to jail “then my friend said “so it seems you were not intelligent and let us find out you robbed the element “he was going to punch my friend but the police stopped him and arrest him and tolled him he was going to spend 49 years in jail He thought it was a dream and was almost crying and said “me I didn’t did nothing “Hydrogen said “so if you didn’t did nothing why you have a new element in the hand and you escape from the police with a false


name “then “Osan”said”Alright,you captured me and by the way sorry Danny now im not a good friend is that I said it was you for winning some time for escaping. So , I robbed the element because I need it for giving it to my kid. She is very sick and she is going to die and that element can cure her “is that true” I said. Then Osan said “well not true what I said, my family is in Moscow so we were going to meet in San Petersburg for throwing a nuclear bomb from the highest building of that city.That element can be radioactive so I will throw that bomb and destroy half of Europe. “but why”? said Hydrogen. Then Osan said “well ha-ha I wanted to be a villan of those stories “well no more explications, instead of 49 years……….you will have life imprisorment”said the boss of the police. Then the boss of the police said “well Giampaolo you are going to go to the prison of Saint Germain in Paris, is one of the most high security of the world.You are going to be under secure by 5 police of high level the 24 hours of a day,so lets go.”so the last time we saw him was with a very mad face and saying” I will get revenge you idiots I will get revenge, and then disappeared into the plane. Then I told Hydrogen “are you happy? “then he answered”happy,no,I am more than happy. I got rid of that slob, thank you very much”. Then we went back from the airport and left Hydrogen in his house with his wife and 3 children at Saint Bobby street, then we left and went to our house and watched some time the news at the TV and then went to sleep. The next morning it appeared in the newspaper the new of the element, all of us were happy. We recibed some congratulations and important titles and Hydrogen, now known as Danny has a new job as owner of GAP in all Europe .And me and my friend will still be detectives. Let me tell you that this is the most exiting case me and my friend had resolved. But also we heard a strange new.Giampaolo was killed. They said he was trying to escape but he got shot by seven bullets: two on the head, one on the side of the heart and one on the side of one lung, other two on the neck and the last one on the backbone, he was going to be buried in Turin, his born city and he died immediately after the fifth shot on his body, but we continued with our normal life’s.

THE END THE END THE END THE END



The steal of a paile of nitrogen Felipe Gonz. One day a detective named Felipe buy a bucket of nitrogen. After went home he study reports. Then the detective put the pail on the table and go to call his scientific friend Mario. Mario was a scientific of the national institution. The other day Mario invite Felipe to the institution lab to study the nitrogen. That same day a chemical thief scape of prison. At the night when

all go the chemical thief broke

the glass and stole the nitrogen. The police go but was to late and the thief scape. The next morning Felipe and Mario saw the cameras and began to investigate. Then they call the army and courts began to follow the thief and the paile of nitrogen. The chief of the Air Force to seach at the best are plane to see of the sky.

When the pilot of the airplane saw the thief call the army to follow the thief and recover the land by the bucket of nitrogen. The army fallow the thief until he scape to his house. The police and the army no rested until the other day. The thief costume of a normal people and go to the


mall. When the guard cross of the front of the thief the thief scape to the bathroom. Felipe see the costume and call the general to throw the network an catch the thief.

The army enter to the house an see if the paile an they was a group of them an they change the paile to a paile of marbles an the real thief ecape with the nitroge. Felipe asked the thief where his partner and the thief said to rob the bank. Philip went to the bank and there he saw it in the safe and I capture and nitrogen bucket and solved the case. Mario and Felipe take reports of the bucket and the thief went to the prison community.

Felipe the receives goal of being a good detective. The other month Mario died because he smell the hydrogen and he have a cancer of lung an die Felipe was sad by he receives a honor and life happy.

END The mystery of Hydrogen and gallium By Gabriel P One Day like all the others the detective Johnny Gat And his partner face of nun. Were in the building of mafia. Was a man called Charles Miller was big and fat he was intelligent and strong he have too much aim and he is right handing he can eat what he want. He have too many guns because he is of mafia. Charles Miller, also known as god father of Buena Aventura. He said that the face of angel was going to


destroy the world with his laser of hydrogen and gallium. Then they call the best friend of the angel face, the killer and also Matt Belk also known as kill bane. They say that a mysterious band killed his brother one year ago. Also all things that he did went wrong. They threw him out of the mafia. Also his lover got married whit his lawyer ten years ago. I think that was because he did the weird ray that could kill bane. The killer also said that his animals of zoo escape but one still there a little frog and face of angel eat that frog. You think that hydrogen is the element? No is the man that is so dangerous. Also another man called gallium they call him like that because he is very fragile then they go and say face of angel that stop. But what he do was only throw a tea on gallium and gallium melt. Then he throw oxygen to hydrogen and he explode, and whit the impact face of angel activate his mortal ray but Johnny gat throw a piece of cheese and the ray explode and face of angel go to jail. And then face of nun said Johnny out smarted all of us he now that throwing that cheese he will make the ray explode, but then Johnny gat say there is a case in Norwegian. There are killing people whit a weird gun that look like a flower, but is mortal like an sting of 90000000000000000 bees


Then we se the news in the airplane. They said that they catch the criminal and Johnny said o i think that we have vacation. Face of nun said that he is so happy to be in norwey. O god we are in a vacation of face of nun. Would be a large vacation said Johnny.

The end.

The mystery of the diamond Jer贸nimo L. One day a detective named watlms was in a reunion in Orlando Florida and someone call him he seed hello a person named Watson watlms said what happen Watson seed someone in new York robe a bank with a diamond. Watlms go to new York in a plane he was taking his bag pack and he jeered some one chautin and sayng there is a criminal in the airport. He go to look if the criminal fight the girl the girl seed the criminal robe me. Then he loock in the airport the criminal he ask but no one see the criminal. One young man seed to watlms I see the criminal he seed to the young man where do you see the young man said his going autside of the airport. Watlms run so fast he look at the autside and he see the criminal watlms start running but the criminal take so fast a taxi and the


taxi start going so fast that watlms stop running. Then watlms find a briefcase of the criminal Watlms go to his office he investigate and in google he find that the criminal when the criminal enter to the taxi he forget his briefcase. Criminal was named Felipe was the worst criminal in the new York. Then a young man enter to his office and say my name is luigman I live here in New York. Then luigman and watlms start talking about the criminal. In a moment luigman seed I know some thing about felipe the criminal like to consume drug. Luigman was always amazed by the ideas in watlms head. They start thinkin about how they will capture the criminal and no one now about what they do and how they capture the criminal. They found in internet that felipe know how to control the hydrogen he can use the hydrogen to do a gun that is so bad for the health of the people. Thet big criminal can kill any one in only in 3 minuts. And always in internet seed that felipe do explosive bombs all ways with hydrogen. They imbestigate in the airport and in the cameras they found a video that was the Felipe taking the portfolio. But Felipe take all the thinks of the girl but they found a gum in the the back of the portfolio and always they found in the floor the footprints of Felipe they follow the footprints but in a moment they found the road but they found the marks of the tires of the taxi. All ways they found in the camera that Felipe take a diamond of the portfolio and he take the diamond to his house. One day they found in internet the direction of hes house they catch Felipe and they give the diamond to a bank. 2 years ago Felipe come out of the jail and became a good person he see that the jail is not a good place soo now he live with his mom he have a little kid that have 4 years he like to pley a ot with is father and now


Felipe is thinking that is not good to do that bad things he will not do that again THE END

One Day in Hollywood Juan David V. One day one man was with his best friends in the movies watching one movie about crimes of HOLLYWOOD. At that time they were 10 years old. The names of the friends were Friend 1:Spencer Friend 2:Kike Friend 3:Toby Friend 4:Roby Friend 5: Jack


10 years later they knew more about HOLLYWOOD crime movies. They learn a lot about detectives reading all stories like the ones of Sherlock Holmes. When the 5 friends had 22 years old they obtained 5,000,000 of dollars they went had the money to HOLLYWOOD and had the money to buy 5 cars and 1 mansion, they also bought a copy of 50 meters of the HOLLYWOOD sign. The ticket to travel to HOLLYWOOD had a price of 1,000 dollars, the 5 cars were 50,000 dollars, the little copy of the Hollywood sign 100,000 dollars and the mansion cost 10,000 dollars. Also they want to buy a secret underground lair that cost 1,000,000 dollars. When they have all that they convert in CSY HOOLLYWOOD investigators. One day during a normal day of work Kike disappear he said that his going to be at 5:00am but the hour were 12:00 so they go to find him. They found him.


CSI MIAMI Martin H. There was a very beautiful day in Miami but not for the Green family, then Jack Green, the son said, dad was killed by a crazy maniac. The crazy maniac went to the church to kidnap the rest of the family. Then came a great detective named Horace. He investigated and said, no one goes home without discovered this case. They just find a little of blood and of gunpowder. The Green family rarely appeared in a capsule in which a valve rang explode and started to leave toxic gas. There is no oxygen here, mom said and she die. Children have a serious problem, since they are orphans and are dying, they will not survive except for a miracle, Horace felt a calling and a presence and he decided to follow that, he went to where he was called, he always knew that it was the mother who had died, Horace found like a capsule very particular, he feel a lot of curiosity and there was, the two boys dying. Horace go into the capsule and take the boys, he look in all sights but don’t found the crazy maniac.


He said to the police to search the place and Horace go to the hospital with the two boys but he will arrived at time. He was so clous and… he arrived, was a miracle but the police don’t found the crazy maniac. Those this case will discover… Horace adopted the boys and the crazy maniac the police take to a madhouse.

SHERLOCK HOLMES IN LONDON Martin S. It was a fantastic day in 1956, when I decide to visit my good friend Sherlock Holmes, I am Watson, Dr. Watson, I am the assistant of my dear friend Sherlock Holmes. I walk over Baker Street. When I was on the front of Sherlock’s house I rang the bell and Sherlock open, he was exhausted and he was really bad, he was messy hair. I ask him ¿why are you so crazy, friend? He was like stress, I don’t know why, he answer my with a strange voice, he said “there is a case that a man put me, but it’s different it is a crazy that escape from jail, he enter to a laboratory


and steal a experiment he steal helium atoms and hydrogen atoms to make something I investigate and I think he want to split it to make a atomic bomb, his name is jerry, jerry Clark. He was in the jail for making atomic bombs. I was confused and I ask him “do you want me to help?” yes he answered, he told me lets go to the lab that jerry steal. When they were there we ask what happen. They answer we making an investigation, and he enter he has a gun he shoot someone. Sherlock was hearing, and he saw something, it was strange it was a strange substance with a green color. Sherlock confused, it wasn’t part of an investigation. While Sherlock see that substance, I was hearing the man, I ask him “how does the man enter????” the scientist tell me, I don’t know it was a surprise we were normal and he enter and said heads down I have a gun! We got down, he steal my experiment of atoms. Ok I said, while I was hearing the man Sherlock find something he said “Watson come and see this.” I went immediately. I was surprised, Sherlock said I know how they enter. They make a tunnel under the floor, that’s how they enter without noise. I have an idea to find the man jerry… but it was actually not so good, I decide not to tell Sherlock, then like in three day there were another steal, thy steal thing to make an atomic bomb. Sherlock know it was jerry and he know he want to exploit us. We don’t know what to do with that, we were confused but then Sherlock remember something there three ways the laboratory the bombs and other one the criminal will attack again, I decide to tell Sherlock the idea I have in the laboratory, and I said lets enter to the tunnel, Sherlock said oh what a good idea Watson, we immediately went to the laboratory and we enter to the tunnel it was good elaborated, we decide to take the way to the third place. After an hour we get until the place we saw it was a jewelry, this man wants all jewels and a bomb we got back again and we cover the tunnel with stones. When we were getting to the laboratory again, we see another way, we decide to fallow it. It was dark and in the way we see a shadow in the wall it move like an animal, but then we actually see it wasn’t a shadow it was someone we thought it was jerry but the thing have a strange form. It was jerry, I don’t know how jerry is but I know it was jerry because I thing he is the only one that know that tunnel. Sherlock said lets approach slowly. The shadow was moving, when we were three cm close to the shadow it talk it was a strange voice it said “you


can’t stop me I will win, I will have all, and kill you all.” I get afraid but Sherlock no. Sherlock said, you lose… you can’t win us. We know where you are. In that moment the shadow disappear and it became a men, but no a me10n it was a beast. It was a mutant, I was really afraid of that but Sherlock no. he said me I have an idea, lets distract him, I on the right and you on the left with that he distract and we attack. I said ok. I was really afraid to do that, but I have to. We fallow the plan and the beast get confused and we attack. We beat him. After that we go away and let him there we also call the police, and some scientist and military, but when they arrive there the beast go away. The scientist see a blue trail, it was of the beast of the body of the beast. The scientist said it was cells of atoms and cells of bodies of human, so Sherlock said he don’t used to make a bomb, he used to be more strong and have all. But I remember that he steal two atoms of hydrogen to make a bomb and to be strong. I said it to Sherlock and he said yes, that’s true, oh yes that’s true it make sense, immediately someone yell, another steal!!!!! Immediately Sherlock said to me, jerry scape and make another tunnel. We doesn’t know where the tunnel was, but we will find it. I ask the man that tell us the where does the steal were, he said afraid, in…in…in the military base. I yell no, he have guns now!!!!!! Sherlock said, ok we can with this, we never lose a case, and we are going to trap him. Then we try to go out of the tunnel but it was close, all of the exits. I yell, he trap us!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was really scare, but Sherlock is so intelligent that he said let’s make another exit. I said ok, but if it doesn’t work. he answer it will work dear Watson. The people that are with us, help to make a way to get out, at the final it work, and we get out of the tunnel. But the beast continue… we don’t know what to do with that. I think he is going to be out of the jail, Sherlock said no… he has to be on the jail. We investigate for months until we find him, but it was late he already make the bomb we can’t stop him. He is so strong. We were with him, but we can’t, we can’t. I try but we can’t, he do it he activate the bomb, and he go away… To be continued…


THE CASE IN PARIS Nicolas R.

Once upon a time in Mompelier a family was making bags to go to paris today at 11:30 his travel began .Am Bob .In the airplane wen them food pass the pilots sad the airplay is failing but now we enter to paris we are going berry tall and wen we land the airplane do BOOOOOOOOOOOOOM all the peoples showed AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH WE ARE GOIN TO DED .ALL MY FAMILI DED OF SORVIVANRS ANLEY STAY MI BRODER AND ME MY BRODER NAMES JUAN.JUAN AND ME GO TO A SHOP OF FURNITURE AND IT MAQUE A CUESTIONE TO THE PEOPLE THAT BE THERE .Wen we see the peoples have face of murdered and we seed ho are you he respond your worst nightmare he tuque to bob in a bag i bigan to run but he in the carbines me I proms a am going to capture him. I talk with the polis but they don’t seed mi no think so I seed am going to investigate only.

I was walking in the city and I see the people just take my border so I see the lader on the balcony so step by step an the man see me he seed come come I see your border came I will tell you the story am the border of the wan jus take you border his name are Wilson the police is trading to arrest him . He is my twin ,but how do you now the name of my brother seed bob . your border names Juan I now because I works for him WAT seed Bob but but way : because if not he is gain to kil me . OK I habe a plan sed to Wilson that some one solisitate to a trip he is gointo understand Ithik sed Jorge


with a bad expretion 2 dais before Jorge sed to Wilson some one nits me in Colombia okay wen do you com in 23 dais WAT DO YOU SED IN 23 DAIS sed bob and jotge sed yes in23 dais ok go sed to your some one dat wen he com am goin to jkil him ok sed Jorge ok. It dont trep to Colombia it trable to montpelier in the house of bob we are goin to libe hear wen we habe the plan rery.But Ised to Wilson that we are goin to go to parís in 23 days Bob sed I dont know wat are you goin to do with wilso we are goin to plan that in my hows.Wen they arive they eat some food and to the next day they behgato plan his plan about Wilson.

Wen I habe a macnifice aidia We can yous some elements of the table periódica my mom before she ded she sed me you can use all the elements to do all for example we use the oxigen to bread . That are we can use the hydrojen but to wat we can use the hydrgen sed bobi s obiusley we use the helio dat is a caind of hydrgen is maid of a sustanse and the hydrogen it helps all to elebate so how Wilson is going to kill the men hos inbitate me to the trep so am goin to give you some boluns oy helio so when Wilson go to take you you made that the baloms elebate you ok. 18 days before they go agan to parís and Wen Wiloson was out of the arport He se to gorje and in two seconds Wilson go to me in the erplain we have all the plan reare sow Wen Wison go to me I take the balons so I go flaing to the polisa with Wilson and then the polisa tace to Wilson and the mpolisa sed thencs bob your welcome and all the parís was god because bob faind to his brodes so bob and his broder juan live with gorge , 2 weeks den the hospital call to GORGE and seed we need to bob and Juan to what seed gorge to see to his parents they are hear oaky seed ,we go now so gorge seed your parents are in the hospital gogo faster we go to see to your parents I go to take a airplain for


you ngo to your cyti 3 days ladder thy go and GIORGE go with the family of bob to thy cyti.

THE END

One day in TEXAS there was a boy names Andres, he was a detective. In TEXAS is another boy that the names is Tomas but there are is bat boy, because they steal things. They live in a talon in TEXAS. The father died in the hippie day of Tomas and the mother also died His mother have 41 a years and fathers 42, and Tomas is 18 years old but the main is like one boy of 29 years old. Andres are in one apartment of TEXAS, like in tow seconds they see a boy Thad the names are Tomas they are take one thing Thad is not yours. Andres go to help them bat Tomas distract Andres to not follow them. The other day Andres take inform motion for Tomas in the computer set Thad are a boy crazy because deaths


of your father and mother. Then in a other day Andres see Thad Tomas are consuming drug in one alley. Andres lock for one boy Thad is specialize for the maniac boy. The man expecilized maniac names are Juan Pablo they are 48 years all. They go to the house of Andres. The other day Juan Pablo estate in the house to see Tomas because they all ways in this alley. In this day the tow see Thad they can like do spades with the hands, all ways they kick a door with the hand, and in minutes why see the hand that is of IRON in the other day they go to face to face Anders and Juan Pablo against with Tomas………!!!Tom tom tom tom!!!!!!!!!!!!....

They are kicking, bat they discoing that they cannot kick the boy bat they can kick the things to like fall on to died. The other day they call polis man to put on a jail and also the call FBI, bat they cannot put on in the jail The other day they com police mans to help to put other the jail with very pretention. This day was very


bat because they died many boys that bat…………. They capture Tomas to a very protector jail. Juan Pablo and Andres to discovered that is the only boy with this powers incredibly The other day Tomas escape of the jail, and they this covered democracy in BRACIL. They this covered that in 12 o’clock the BANG are going to have 12345000’000´000’00000 they seed I will go to steal the BANG OF TEXAS. The other day at 12 o’clock they go to the street of THE BANG OF TEXAS, Tomas put on like a mask to the police man don’t see them. They enter to the BANG and set gave me all the money. The boy give them the money, and Tomas take a car and Juan Pablo and Andres follow Tomas. But Tomas can escape BRACIL.


In 20 years Juan Pablo Andres go to BRACIL and Tomas have a family and a son that names are Alexder………..

THE END Phillip B. detective (the blue hydrogen falls) One day I was walking to the home of my best friend and I saw that my friend Paul Anthony Bloomer had company, her name is Mackelsy Falls, and her nickname is Mac, his favorite color is blue, she likes the pasta for eat. I enter to the house of Mac and all the things of mac are broke, her bead, butin the table eats is is a note My dear Mackelsy I took your hydrogen blue to steal a bank. I am going to grave all the money and if I cannot steal the bank of New York City I am going to kill you. You and me we has 2 hours to steal the bank or if cant not steal the bank I am going to kill you. MR Santiago MAC said what I am going to do Phillip and Paul help me pleas. In her house a zoo has lion, snakes, tiger, tortoise but is not the crocodile on the zoo. There is a tunnel in the habitat of the crocodile MAC,PHILLLIP AND PAUL enter to the tunnel and is other note that saying


My dear mac if you are read this be care because I has your boyfriend named Juandaniel Colmenares you need a other note and you has your hydrogen your boyfriend. MR Santiago Mac is scare of what is happen and the tunnel is connected with a bank abandoned of New York City. We enter to the bank and we saw another note said: If you enter to the bank you need to go to the second floor and you are going to has a surprise to all of you Paul Phillip and mac has a surprise ok I am going to kill you if you are not in the second flour by. Mac and Paul are waking in circles but my I saw some strangers spots of blue hydrogen I wake and I saw a stranger creature with hydrogen in all the body he saw me and he think that I am a pizza with hydrogen. He lifted a rad and eat the rad I run and I tale run is a creature!!!! Run!!! But the creature is like saw all in hydrogen. 2 part!!

The creature saw and kick mac and Paul I want to kill him but is said no kill the creature, Paul and mac wake up and kill the creature, and explode, we go up and we saw guns, knife, pump to protect his and herself, they came and saw Santiago with the boyfriend, the best friend girl of Paul and the dog names coco that is mine. Santiago said to us you need to defeat has what they want so he said “cache me� all the group of Santiago runs and we runs to and me and Paul we saw a jacket black like the same that has Santiago graves the jacket and is GAVIRIA I pull let and Santiago said to me plays don t kill me but mac said we are not going to kill you but mac kick in the face and he stays 555 years in the jail and all are good in all the life.


Sherlock Holmes and Luisa the assassin of The sodium swords IN 3D Santiago R. IT WAS A OCTOBER DAY WHEN I HEARD A SCREAM IN THE NEIGHBOR HOUSE AND I WILL NOT GOING TO STAY HERE SO I GO RUNNING AND I SEARCH AND NO ONE WAS THERE I WAS GOING TO EXAMINE THE HOUSE I WALK TO THE PRINCIPAL ROOM AND I SEE A BODY WITH A SWORD I EXAMINE THE SWORD BUT IT WASN’T A NORMAL SWORD IT WAS A SODIUM SWORDS IT WAS ELEMENT 11.i don’t see it a long time ago I bring it to the hospital the doctor said that sodium in that amount can kill a person because it’s a very dangerous material when I go to examine the house I only see a footstep and a giant scarf that said “this belong to Luisa the assassin in maiden street “ I don’t know to who belong the but I know that the people that belong the scarf was the assassin but I doesn’t have any clue so I investigate the crime scene but I don’t find any so I go to ask help to porky the Mafioso that in future will be bacon Sherlock need help of a pig that have weapons and is black belt on karate but he also know how to deduce a crime something strange of the pig is that he love bacon so in a different sense he eat animals like him but I go to slept. When I wake up I go down I to drink coffee and I go out and I see a cadaver that have another sodium sword but this one was different it have a different shape it shape was with a more sharp and it have a yellow part so I call the police again but they thing I was the assassin so they were going to take me to jail but when it was to late porky arrive with a gun and kill 3 polices and 2 escape because they were scare of the little pig but when more arrive and we need to go to jail in the jail they passed me a newspaper that said they was a third murderer with a sword that was wavy I always carry a map so I draw all the swords in the location that was the murders and they point to Rockefeller mansion I want to go but I can go. So I record that I read that this prison have a secret escape so I go to the secret escape and I left porky when I arrive to Rockefeller mansion I see someone running so I go to catch he or she I go to catch he but when I trapped I saw something


incredible it was porky my partner has betrayed me I stay lost and porky intent to run but I come up and I grabbed his leg and he fell and he faint so I tie him at the tree and I go to advert Mr. Rockefeller about that when I arrive his servant opened the door I said that I need to talk Mr. Rockefeller but he said me that he go to sleep so I go but no to give up I go to the backyard and climb until I arrive to his bedroom I enter in silence and in that place I can see the tree were porky was tied but it don’t see normal so when I see it wasn’t a real porky it was a doll so I was observing the door when something kick me in the head and I faint when I woke up I was tied and in front me it was Rockefeller in front of me and porky was with a sword that have my name on it he said me that “the sword have my name because he want to kill since he met me “ but I said I said him why so he answered me that he have the help of his girlfriend Luisa the assassin and both want to kill me porky was going to kill me I move my feet and he fell and the sword finish in his hand and he die. And I untied and go to trap Luisa the assassin sword and I liberate us and all finish good the end? But later I discover that was a treasure map in my garden so I called Watson because this will be a good mystery. Three days later Watson arrive with 1 cop and his gun he said that he want to see the map I pass him the map it was a map of the dorado´s treasure so we go to Colombia and when we arrive Watson said me that he want to drink coffee so we go to a cafeteria and we examine the map and we discover that we need to go to the Bogota’s river to found the Muiscas when we arrive they think I was a bad people and it will continue…

SHERLOCK HOLMES Martin S. It was a fantastic day in 1956, when I decide to visit my dear friend Sherlock Holmes. Oh, let me introduce, I am dr. Watson, I am Sherlock assistant wall, Sherlock and me share rooms before I get marriage. I walked over the baker


street, when I get to Holmes house, I rang the bell, and Sherlock open the door. He see me and said me “ Watson what a surprise, I see you enjoy your marriage.” I answer “yes, but today I want to visit you, friend.” He smiled. He was happy to see me. He said me “ enter I need to talk with you.” I enter, I sat on the sofa. He begin to talk, he ask me a lot of questions. Then we begin to talk more. In a moment the newspaper came. I said “ Sherlock your newspaper is here. I begin to reedit and I saw something, in a section said like “STEAL… A STAEL IN THE LABORATORY… STEAL!” I as confused. I call Sherlock again, he came and said “ what happen Watson?” I answer look the newspaper.

I show him the notice he said “oh a steal, I hate that people that steal, ok Watson I have to investigate.” I want to help him so I ask “can I help you?” he answer “of course you can like in old times.” We went to the laboratory. When we get there us I ask “what happen?” a man answer: oh no, we were working normally and someone said heads down, I don’t know how he enter the door was close. Wall I was hearing Sherlock begin to see the laboratory. Sherlock see something and call me “Watson, come here now!” I went immediately. He said “I know how he enter. Then I ask “what the crazy steal?” the man answer: an atoms of hydrogen. I ask “for what?” I don’t know someone said. Sherlock was analyzing the thing he see, and he get to the conclusion that it was a tunnel. I said “it was a tunnel?” he answer: yes. I decide to told Sherlock an idea I have “ lets enter to the tunnel” he answer yes let’s do it. We enter. There was three ways there. Right, left and middle. Sherlock said there will be an other steal. I get scared. We walk in the left because is the side of the heart. we walked like three hours. And we get to the other way. We get to the exit. And the exit was the stealer house. We enter but he wasn’t there…


The Neon Killer Antonio Jose S. One day a detective called Archibald Vanderwall , noticed of the murder of 12 people Well Archibald said a detective what are you doing here ? well I am investigating the case of the mourder of that 7 people

Victim 1: Fred

Victim 2: Chuck

Victim 3: Stan

Victim 4: Mille

Victim 5: Phineas Victim 6: Bart

Victim 7: Jeanie

Then a dog start to bark and they found a Knife with Blood in the top 多 Were this knife comes? said one police This knife is from Poland , it was polished said Archibald So we need to go to Poland said one Police Yes said one police

In Poland The next day Archibald and one police get 2 Poland They get to a pawn shop and they saw a fat man Good Morning said the police Hi what I can help you? Can you said to who do you sold this knife Wait that I see to who I sold it the man go to a room When he get there he get back with blood in his chest the he fool with a book Oh my good they shoot him said the police Here is the book that he said to us here is the knife said the police He sold it to an Argentin a man called Roberto Romero where he lives? Said the police He lives in the Bones fly street in the house 10. Then they go that house it was white like snow big at the other side it was a lake and a forest then they ring a bell Hi said a maid Good morning lady said Archibald 多Is Sir Romero here? No said the maid He is in a bar ,


Which bar ? said Archibald The happy duck Where ? In the forest know leave me alone in need to go to go with mafia connections to play poker and bet Guns.

He is the one The next day they go to the bar it was full of people this place is a disaster can we go know of here ? said the police No said Archibald we need to find Mr. Romero Look he is there said the police It was a tall man dressed all with white , black hair and smoking a crack pipe Hi have you ever seen this knife in your life ? I buy it to a man the a glowing man with a smoking and a clown mask Ok where is he? Said Archibald NO WAY HE IS THERE said Mr Romero Who? Said the police the one that I sold the knife for a mansion and gems for my sister Follow him then he take out his mask it was a Neon gremlins reddish orange he fall a paper look he fall a thing what are they They are two tickets to Viena So he is going run to Viena we need to arrest him

Fall in the roof The next day in the train they go to a restaurant we need to find the gremlin of neon now said Archibald hey Archibald Wait Archibald look there he is there


Oxygen The lord of the gold ring Cardozo Chapter 1 One day a boy name Andres was with his family one dad, one mom and one brother. He liked to play soccer with his brother and dad, his mom is a investigator for periodic table about oxygen. The mom is going to teacher of the school and will grade hard. How is the periodic table? My dear Andres: ď Š Your friend will wonder in many years. He is going to university. You have news friends and the name are: Mike and Daniel. They your best friends. Signature: Jorge Andres said: Dad I like the card. I love you dad. Jorge wrote to me. I'm going to meet best friends at school and my friend is going to university. My friend is going to die. I understand your letter and the other people. I am going to miss a friend to in the university. My dear Nicolas: ď Š I am the brother of Andres. I am going to talk with your dad and mom said Jorge. Italy is the team of the soccer that I like. Italy have a group of scouts. They like scouts. The scout had a big book. The book has 10000000000 pages and they have read until half. Signature: Jorge Nicolas and Andres like the scouts. They learned from page 1 to 100000 in the following month. Nicolas and Andres parents took them to the scout trip when they neached second grade. Both very very exited to go on the trip and could not wait for that day to come. While they in the scout trip, their parents went to see the Italy match that ended 5-0 with 5 goals of super Mario ballotelli. One moth later, the boys came back from the trip and re-entered school. They were very happy to see all their friends and parents again.


The day they arrived, their parents drove to the airport to pick them up and take them home. Nicolas and Andres taught their parents many different things they learned at the trip.

0THER CASE Romero In a normal day, Sherlock decide to go out of the house and start to walk and he saw a lot of people going to the semen Teri so he also enter to the semen Teri and when the family start to said the things that the person who die said to the persons said that kill a lot of people and one of that was the president of U.S.A. that don’t like to be the president again. When Sherlock go out of semen Teri he think where is the information of how kill the president?

Sherlock go to the white house and ask to people if they know the information. Sherlock ask a lot if someone have information of the man. When Sherlock go out of white house and enter to his house he


listen a carriage he see out of the window and nothing is out there. Then when Sherlock sat in the sofa the door rang. Sherlock open the door and was a men with a large hat and a large jacket and enter to the house of Sherlock and sat in the sofa of Sherlock without permission. When Sherlock close the door ask to the person what are you doing here and what you want? The person said I need your help a lot of people think that I am dead but am not so I need that you help me and someone know that am not die and want to kill my and I need that you catch him and then I can go to my house to tell my family that am not die and and to be with my boys. Sherlock said ok am going to help you but I need something that prove that you don’t going something to me. I am going to take a lot of your blood and no more so we can start in 2 weeks. Sherlock go to the house of the man. He leave running the house because his wife was trying to kill hem and said me that all morning was crazy with all she found try to kill hem. When we go to investigate I said I NEED SOMEONE TO HELP ME TO INVESTIGTE THE CASE I know we need to go for Mr. Watson. When we arrive for Watson was someone in the door was like a person of iron or a element that convert like in a person and said that Watson was not here was in the supermarket. When we go out we found the woman of the man she was angry have a bat and a pistol in the hands. The man said that sorry of anything he do to she and wen Sherlock see that like sparks go out of his head and het she in the face and was the president the man spouts kill and was revenge. Sherlock was so scared and the man was really scare of the president push Sherlock and the man to the flour. When the president take the genes when Sherlock saw a shadow like a figure of a person flying. When they are like close to die the iron person hit the president and take out to fly. When all finish they go to the respective house. When Sherlock arrive to his house. Sherlock sit in the sofa and the apartment rang DING DONG a lot of times Sherlock open the door and was a lot of persons that want that he solve the cases that are really hart and he solve all cases but Sherlock said that was the best day of hes live and that never is going to forgot. When Sherlock was thinking on that moment the apartment rang. Was the best friend of Sherlock Mr. Watson. When Sherlock and Watson was in the sofa they toak about a lot of thins but when Watson was going out of the house Watson tell that he was the person of metal that save hes live. And how you now that was going to happenthat ¡aaa! That man kill and yougoand the other man that was with so I can go to the past to save andmore I was with When pastyou a time a with person a structure that you you and have days with live. you and that’s why are here me a create and why you don’t tell me why go to the past an I can do a don’figure no no ok mehave that’s good ok by I see you and later when I havecan another case like that one in ofdon’t metell and super strength nothing destroy my live am going to forget and am going to solve with my friend Watson and am going to need your help and that case was the best one in the live and am going to do with you and I need that you bring a lot of help cous some person tall me that was the same case but with like 7 but not presidents robots with a lot of gone and they conquer all Europe and are giant and they cnvert people in robots and eat the meat of people and have a dogs with large teeth’s and they are like 3 buses and the robots like 5 and thy are

coming here and their king is Mafioso pig and they has the most big brain and said that they need more meat and they need more robots and to conquer all the world and I need your help and I go to your

house and tell you to come and help me to resolve the mystery of why the pig do that and to return


The Famous Robbery

people to Europe and do that the persons don’t remember and continue the life like a new person and do the things they and they are going to pay me and I can help people by see you.

Santiago M One dayin 600082 at USA in the royal academy of ofisers the solider enumerated55442 was a young and realy but one day in mars the old enemiews of the planet ad all people hate him ok lets get to our teme alll the solider was called mastred von sbanstiger or most called sirius the sirius family was:bart,jony and he do not haved wife because she was dead in a terrorist atrack in a mall of munich so then siriusn dediqued to be a militar guard in diferent ncountries of the world he dediqued top lay with mercury in his free time so the something rare hapened one normal day sirius was in one turn of vigilance when he sawed something extraĂąe it was a men runing in the lab whit a cuple of mercury and a pease of a grun the first guard that see him rana ll


the way to him but it was too late it was ingecting the mercury to another guard then the general declared that it was a inactive solider all the por familia was woried that something else cud hapen to another solider the (forense)oir most called by his especial work on the crimes and inbestigations in dead cases of something with a sustance that are dangerus in all tipe of human body but thats not all of watt he forense) cud do of all of so many things he cud do but he told us it was a aswessin that loves the chemical elements and experiment6s and allso told us he killed his own family with mercury he told the adress and his name was jhon tesnoww he first was a happy man that worked on a message company called fed ex and he like eny other man was fall in love with ca woman callesd kaqterina and they where boyfrieds but she got killed by6 an offiser because she was drugged and drunck in the Street and she was a criminal that was dressed of nurse and


ingect mercury to theyr buictims by a siringe that allwais kill them so whet the oficer see she die because of the plomo and then he or the killer was too sad and decfided to kill all ofn his bictims and he ran away the unic person who was the oficer who killed his girldfriend and he gift him a venom thaty makes first told him h i i m mm

wa n t t o k i l l m e and then he yust tall this n n n n n

n n n n n n n n n n n n n n n n n and hem yut fell down and die with open eyes and the forense founds a peace of salt mercury in his heart and began sort of cases in houses with mercury but we dont found the fif by most we searched no digital footprint so til today we foud him and had some proves and then now we can get info vand send somne clues to the for4ense and get the name of his band that is called smirt so he cud theclu8b was horrible and the case was of sirtius and not of sanderson that was there trating to see something suspicius but he was so desconcentrated that he


was like a stupid man stand out there and the club is so disgusted that woud tell it was a porno club but it was a porno cub sirius enter in action and call some p贸lice oficers to resguard him in cubert and in very silence way he told its mising 45 min to the action enter this club he go to tree romos and he just found somepeople making love in the romos and in the last room it was a sound of a weapon so sirius enter and in exact time that the p贸lice enter the room and they get out a giaqnt box then they brugth the box to my giant cuple and i have to examined and it was practicly imposible to open that freaken box so i decided to do the operation outside then i called a famus detective called sherlok Holmes it was a great6 my friend so we mer at the elegant restaurant wen all the asigned officers were there so we coud talq about the extra帽e box that was in煤til to open it so i decided to do the operation outside but there was the presi so i coud not tell nothing


about the plan and i was bery proud of my company but if i toldf something i cud get expulsed so i decided to talk wen they ask me to talk so lets get bak to the point y was worry y cud be something rare and danerus was in that box so i go erly in the morning to do my worki out with sherlok it was hig levels of mercury in the box so i decided to gov and see incide the box to realy checdk the incide box to bwe insid ethe inveswtigations of the crime wen i was a kid y decide to be a investigator of mercury but that oportunity never come to me but ok lets go again vto the tem y enter the box and y fell do0un and i go down in the flor an then mi bos was so angry with me that he fired me so i was a por man that desated a zombie Word war. Begin in a por house y was helping the Word foundintg the cure.i all the dais fell culpable of wat i did but y never leve my work aoll the people hate me and my family leave me.all the days y wak up and see me in tyhe freaken hell so i


observe all the people dieng in front of me but i found some cure i sufred of cáncer the zombies do nota atac me soO i was so exited that ofm 3 years of investitgation i discobered the cure was a some tipe of cáncer that dure a limit time so i shoed to the people hit me and send me to jai i callen mi mom so it was too late mi family was the first zombie humans i was scared all the days a zombie come and trate to kill me but it was a tv on my jail so i all the deays see my tv and it still was a noticiero mexican but it was like 75% zombies in earth and 25% so i give the cure toevery one so we kill zombies.

THE MAGIC IRON Nicolas B. Hello my name is Nicolás B. and I am one of that mans that rare things happened. And I decide to tell you one adventure that I have in South Africa; I face with a criminal band! The national operation of scientists (NOS). It began like this…


One day I was walking in Bogota and I saw a paper with hieroglyphs. When I take to see it, I identify that was the South Africa map so I think that was about a treasure (do you find a South Africa map every day?).When I get home I search information about mysteriously treasures of the word. When I finish reading, I saw one that says “The magic iron” so I clicked and read, read and read. At the last part I saw that says “in South Africa a man get kill. The iron spirit is the first suspicious because the last 1000000000 years he Kill people that draw near.

So I set apart one ticket to South Africa. The, in South Africa I hired a guide to help me to find that spirit and know what is protecting. Two days later my guide and I went to the island that were the last attacks. There were a mountain, so we think there we need to search first. Before we get in the mountain we see a note that says “if you are rearing this is so late, ha ha ha!” We scare but we continue because we know that that mean that someone very dangerous is protecting something very valuable. When we get in the mountain we take a short brake, and an acute sound began to sound very hard, I think that was an iron trumpet, because my nephew fabricate strange instruments and one day when I visit him he was making one trumpet with iron that sounds like that acute sound. So we go out said to look what was happening and we saw a tall man with tow swords, “he is not a human” I said, he was like 3 meters tall and was covered with a metal, I think was iron because the color was grey or black, and if is not a human maybe he do the trumpets sounds. So we approach him and ask what does he is and he answered “I am the iron spirit and I want revenge of the national operation of scientist (NOS).


Two days later I decide to investigate the NOS so I forget about the “treasure”. I found in the greatest source of knowledge (internet) that the NOS is an illegally company that take one kid of whatever part of the world and put in a special machine that can melt whatever transition metal and combined with a body can made a phenomenon.

They live in Colombia, so I think: if I found them the police need to pay a lot of money and I´m going to be famous. I took a flight to Bogota and began to search the NOS. I get a contact that work with the NOS 30 years ago so he help me to found them. When I finally found them I call my best friend of the childhood, (he is a police man). And with a strange travel in plain them resived a conviction of 65 years in Washington’s jail.

THE ELEMENT STOLEN Samuel S. One Day a detective named Samago that Works in a detective’s company, named. One day, a normally day the company assigned to samago a case, it was a very important case because it was a case in the hold Word. Albert Einstein discover something new in his career, a new technology and it is made of hydrogen, that can change the form of the world because this will have another type of technology’s the danger is that some people that translate cocaine enter in the laboratory of Einstein and they steal that new technology and the robbers also take Einstein with all thus people and send a message to the government with Albert Einstein and the new technology all the governments of the world are very distressed because the robbery’s got Einstein.

All the governments do a conference in the united states in Chicago and all the presidents where very elegants, with the purpose of attack all the robbery’s and rescue the planes and Einstein. So they organized an proyect in on the hold world that incorporate all the policeman’s and the ejerjity. The rescue start, all the policeman’s start to do questions to all the people that they see, in all the countries the people where answering questions of the policemen’s .One day they find a robbery very suspects so Samago that is the one how do the


questions to him. They brought to all the presidents. In fact it was the correct robbery because he have the planes of Einstein, they go to her home and also find Einstein so the war was over They do the purpose of the hold world. When Einstein start to work, in New York was a catastrophe some murders with a plane destroyed the statute of Albert Einstein and with that they start a war, the world war III. The time of Albert to finish with he’s project.

The war was in the present, six months next Albert finish he’s project the new technology was ohm so they do arms with the new technology the technology is kind of a blue thing that disappeared the things that are shot with that. It was the best technology the new thing so they start to do more and more arms to win the war.

When the ejercity where ready they start to liquidate persons with the arms II years next the war was over Einstein win and confess that he do the technology with hydrogen. The end




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