Joshua Weinzweig Review of Writing 2020-2021

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W I N N E R O F T H E J O S H U A W E I N Z W E I G S H O R T S T O R Y C O N T E S T, M I D D L E S C H O O L

PUNISHMENT WITH NO END ____________________________________________________________ by Emily Zalewski, Grade 8 “Everything you do will be seen. Everything you say will be heard.” The words ran through her head. Although only attending the Education Centre for six months, the daily, cold, monotone voice over the intercom was engraved in her memory. “You must be prompt, and we expect full focus on education. Proper uniform is mandatory. We will run a further uniform check at 12:00. Read the Education Centre’s book of regulations.” Of course Nora read the book. Well, it was read to her. She never learned to read. Every child had to know the rules. Every child had to be “formed into a proper adolescent” with formal manners and etiquette, and attend an Education Centre. Breaking a rule meant punishment. Nora had broken rules before, but they were always small. Silly regulations such as not wearing her hair in the correct two braids. The smaller the rule broken, the smaller the field, and the easier the task of finding the pin on the blade of grass. This time, it was different. The field was 8,016,000 square feet large, 167 times the size of a football field. Nora had broken the most valued rule. “Do not defy the Government.” Any act of defiance or disobedience of the Government would result in prodigious punishment. Only when you place the lost pin into a rectangular compartment on the right side of the locked door is your punishment complete. Nora had been alone for over two years. Her only contact were the meals served to her three times daily. No one to talk to, nor to learn from. She was behind her whole class at the Education Centre, who’d be starting the third grade. If Nora ever completed her punishment, she’d have to start from the beginning. All of this torture, and Nora sat wondering what she’d done to deserve this. After the first year of attempting to complete her punishment, she’d given up hope of ever escaping. Now, every day, she would scream out for help. “Please let me out! THIS IS IMPOSSIBLE!” The memory of her last day with civilization was starting to fade. One second, she was talking to her friends, and the next, she was being dragged by guards into the largest field she’d ever seen. “I’m sorry,” she would say in between sobs, in an attempt to breathe through the tears running down her face. “I don’t even know what a hoax is. I’m sorry for calling you a hoax. That’s what my dad said. Please let me out.” That night, she cried herself to sleep, and in the morning, found catharsis in sprinting full speed at the forcefield around the grass, hoping her rawboned body would break it. She tried at this for an hour. Once again, Nora started to run, but came to a halt dashing towards the ground, overgrown grass breaking her fall. At first, there was a scream of pain, followed by tears of joy after Nora realized she found the pin. It created a small wound in the sole of her right foot. With no moment to waste, Nora ran towards the door. It was only a mile away, but it took her what felt like an eternity with the burden of her leg slowly bleeding out. It throbbed with pain

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Beverly Zeng “Opportunities Given”

1min
page 74

Monica Zhu “Introduction to Immorality”

1min
pages 75-78

Victoria Zalewski “The Day We Visited Father”

4min
pages 72-73

Emily Zalewski “Punishment with No End”

3min
pages 70-71

Jake Wu “Unsteadiest”

1min
page 69

Tessa Veerbeek “Hey, Little Man”

3min
pages 67-68

Isabella Tan “Mirror”

2min
page 65

Sophie Trussell “Protection from the Hands of Time”

1min
page 66

Shyam Subramanyam “The Fortress”

1min
page 61

Thera Sze “I Am (What I Eat)”

7min
pages 62-64

Grace Still “A Spoonful of Sugar with a Hint of Spice”

6min
pages 58-60

Anh Huy Nguyen “My Odd Issue with English”

7min
pages 52-54

Ella MacAlpine “Film”

1min
page 51

Omar Ozturk “Golden Gate Summer”

1min
page 55

Cora Pataran “Death By Blue Silk”

1min
page 56

Aaliyah Salyani “The Bird’s Eye View ”

1min
page 57

Alyssa Lucchese “Captivity to Freedom”

3min
pages 48-49

Deanna MacAlpine “Repair Your Bridges”

1min
page 50

Shianne Liang “Four Blank Walls”

3min
pages 46-47

Louis Li “Just Do It Later”

5min
pages 43-45

Krish Gupta “A Mother’s Worst Fear”

2min
page 34

Sophia Jeffery “Scars of the Ice”

2min
page 37

Justin Jeong “Tear-Ridden Mask of Tithonus”

1min
page 38

Kyu Hun Lee “26th of September”

7min
pages 39-41

Amy Graham “Recovery”

3min
page 33

Kyu Hun Lee “Hope”

1min
page 42

Kailey Houle “Les Yeux De L’Amour”

4min
pages 35-36

Sarah Golding “Playing on the Snowy Hills”

4min
pages 31-32

Moira Boland “Little House of Glass”

1min
page 23

Tyler Da Ponte “Broken Silence”

3min
pages 26-27

Sarah Asgari “Grade 12: Just Keep Going”

6min
pages 20-22

Doga Erdemisik “Good Days of Ramadan”

1min
page 28

Harrison Frank “There Is Warmth Under Frost”

1min
page 30

Sarah Asgari “Circle of Life”

9min
pages 16-19

Weston Foulds “The Forest”

1min
page 29

Ethan Bonerath “Lost Hope”

5min
pages 24-25
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