Wonderful_CPJ Sem 2

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EVALUATION

CRITIQUE BY ME Personally, I agreed mostly with my peers’ feedbacks. I’m a big fan of white space, thus love the simplistic layout of the website. New logo looks good to me. I definitely like the revised brand name and logo as it sounded more positive. (Refer to Sem 1 for branding process). Previous brand name “LIMIT” has a negative connotation to it so decided to change it off to better suit my project intentions and direction. Below listed changes that I thought it ought to be made. Changes that I would like to make: • The length of the search bar is a little too long. Search bar & subscription to newsletter area seems very tight. • Logo (Main header) probably can be reduced to give more breathing space at the top of website. • Maybe I should do something about the lines. Seem a little too many? • An animated flash banner in the index page so get to feature different studios and also include an intro of the project. • Revised website layout. The index page layout could be used for archive page instead. A new index page will be created soon. Can’t wait! But first I need to do more research and planning...

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