Years 5 and 6
English
Descriptive writing
National Curriculum links Writing – composition • plan, draft, write, evaluate, edit and proofread their writing (a description of the school grounds) • select appropriate vocabulary, understanding how such choices can change and enhance meaning
Vocabulary
genre, description
Resources
notebooks or clipboards/lined paper and pencils/pens for each pupil; contrasting extracts of descriptive writing about place, e.g. A High Wind in Jamaica by Richard Hughes (Chapter 3: ‘Exeter Rocks’), The No. 1 Ladies’ Detective Agency by Alexander McCall Smith (Chapter 21: ‘The House Behind the Trees’), Hard Times by Charles Dickens (Chapter 5: ‘Coketown’, starting ‘It was a town of machinery …’), My Family and Other Animals by Gerald Durrell (Chapter 2: ‘The Strawberry Pink Villa’)
Prior learning
an understanding of the different genres of writing and their characteristics and functions
Cross-curricular links
Art – painting from a description, painting in the school grounds; PSHE – independent learning and working
Writing a picture Activity Settle the pupils in a quiet place and read one of the descriptive extracts to them. Ask them what type of writing it is and invite discussion about the use of language and how the author brings the scene to life. Tell the pupils that the best descriptions ‘write a picture’ and that they should be able to close their eyes and see the scene. Ask them to close their eyes and read the extract to them again. Can they see it? Read a contrasting piece and ask them to close their eyes as they listen. Again, discuss the use of language and the way in which the author brings the scene to life. Tell the pupils they are going to ‘write a picture’ of the school building and grounds so that someone who has never visited can close their eyes and ‘see it’. If the building and grounds are extensive, pupils can be split into groups and given one area to describe. 26
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