the story with an intense scene to capture the reader’s attention. So, what if an armed — or unarmed man walks into the Credit Union during rush-hour, and robs it. He gets the money, escapes the bank, jumps into an already waiting getaway vehicle, a Mustang, and drives away as police sirens approach. DAREN I’m ok with that. everyone else?
What about
TOM Whatever man. I’m fine with it. JORDAN What if we start our story with a wild, crazy, frat party with lots of alcohol and girls. Everyone is drunk and partying. But then someone dies of alcohol poisoning. TOM (Laughing) You have smoked yourself retarded Jordan. But I like it. RAUL You are a pot-head and you need to concentrate on our story, we really need to get this done. JORDAN Fuck you guys, I don’t need this shit, I’m going home. DAREN Settle down everyone no one is going anywhere until we get this done.