Issue 27 - Junior Issue 2

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Volume 118 Junior Issue #2

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April 30th, 2021

Students vie for English Department Writing Prizes Audrey Carbonell Staff Writer

Upper Division (UD) students will have submitted poems, essays, and prose fiction pieces to the yearly English Department Writing Prizes by the deadline tonight in hopes of winning an award. These awards include the Paul Block Award for Creative Writing, the Alan Breckenridge Award for the Personal Essay, the Edward Simpson Prize for an Essay in Literary Criticism, and the Pandemic Writing Award. Every submission is read by various English teachers at the school, who then select a winner based on their evaluations. “Unlike in the past, students this year are only able to submit one piece per prize,” English Department Chair Vernon Wilson said. This will encourage students to take the time to go through their writing and select their best work, he said. By doing so, judges will have to read fewer submissions. The only exception to this new policy is the Paul Block Award for Creative Writing, where students can submit two works — one in prose and another in poetry. The English Department receives over 150 submissions each year, Wilson said. Due to the large number of submissions, two or three teachers from the English Department read for each prize, he said. The submissions are judged anonymously. To decide on the winners and runner-ups, the judges choose their favorite pieces, make a case for the one they think should win, and then take a vote. English teacher Dr. Jonathan Kotchian, who has reviewed essays submitted for the Edward Simpson prize in the past, looks for brilliance

in the essays he reads. “I look for something that has the potential to genuinely change how readers see a literary work,” he said. “This includes something that’s well argued, makes a lot of sense, but will also really make the reader reevaluate their relationship to the literary work being discussed.” When judging, English teacher Dr. Andrew Fippinger looks for a specific, compelling voice from the author, he said. “I’m looking for some sense of style or flair,” he said. Fippinger has different criteria

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for each prize. In analytical essays, he looks for precision of writing, as well as the depth of analysis drawing from the language and evidence of the text, he said. In personal essays, he wants the reader to “show, not tell” and hear the specific anecdotes to feel as if he is in the moment, he said. “Poetry is a little harder to put my finger on exactly what I would be looking for, but it’s really an interesting, vibrant use of language and surprising terms of phrase.” Tomoko Hida (11) plans to submit a series about breathing for the Paul Block Award, she said. A good friend once told Hida that

the point of poetry is to convey to someone how one feels in words and to express a specific emotion, she said. “When I write, I try to grasp exactly what I’m feeling in two or three words with specific connotations and specific nuances that will allow the reader to imagine exactly what I’m imagining while I’m writing it.” This year, Vivien Sweet (12) plans on submitting an analytical essay and a personal essay. Last year, she wrote a short story and was awarded runner-up for the Paul Block Award for Creative Writing, she said. However, Sweet does not submit essays simply hoping to win an award, she said. “For me, the purpose of the essays is not about placing highly, but rather it’s about reading things about people you’ve never heard of before, and sharing what you’ve been writing with the schools community.” Mekhala Mantravadi (11) is submitting a short story about an Indian woman that she worked on over the summer. The story reflects her mother’s life experience, she said. “I wanted to write about someone who is often overlooked, like the female immigrant who’s a housewife and following her husband, and the bravery [in this act].” When assessing the essays, the judges are able to see students write in genres that they might not typically see in their English classes, said Kotchian. “I get to see lots of different student work, and a wider range of really good writing.” “The judges and I look forward to reading the submissions,” Wilson said. “It’s great fun.”

Courtesty of Vidhatrie Keetha

INTERFAITH CLUB Students connect over Zoom.

Interfaith club holds dialogue with Al Noor School afterwards.

Ariella frommer and vidhatrie keetha Staff Writers

“I come to the dialogue sessions because it’s a great, really informal way to be honest, to talk to people, and to get to know other people that follow different religions than me,” Michael Shaari (11) said. Members of the Interfaith Club engaged in a dialogue with students from the Al Noor school, which has a predominantly Muslim population, over Zoom on Sunday. The Interfaith Club holds two to three discussions each year, during which students learn about each others’ religions, upbringings, and communities, Maya Nornberg (11) said. After students introduced themselves at the start of the dialogue, Co-president of the Interfaith Club Yana Gitelman (12) presented the group with a list of nine categories: friends and family, health, education, freedom, making a difference, security, happiness, wealth, and religion. Students indicated which category mattered the least to them through the chat and discussed their choices

While the activity did not require personal responses or reactions, it did facilitate an important discussion about students’ values, Co-president of the Interfaith Club Leyli Granmayeh (12) said. Granmayeh said that an important part of the activity was the variety of categories presented, which helped lessen the emphasis on religion. “That is, I think, one of the most apparent differences between our two schools and what the foundation of the relationship is built upon,” she said. “But I also think that it’s important to sometimes acknowledge the other similarities and differences that we have.” After this activity, both the leaders of the Interfaith Club and a similar club at Al Noor posed a number of questions to the group relating to the intersection of religion and political beliefs, as well as how religion is portrayed in the media. Fisher was surprised to learn that many students did not consider their political beliefs to be influenced by their religion, she said. Shaari said that dialogues facilitate an intercultural understanding of people who grew up in different environments and have different moral priorities, he said.

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Jiya Chatterjee Staff Writer Since the senior class did not have the opportunity to experience many typical senior traditions due to COVID-19 restrictions, the administration wanted to do something for the graduating class that would make them feel celebrated, Class of 2021 Dean Susan Groppi said. Last week, the school installed a tent on Alumni Field as a space where seniors can spend their free time during their last semester with their classmates. The tent is stocked with different forms of entertainment, such as spin bikes, snacks, bean bags, a television, and more. It also has various board games, such as a life-sized version of Connect Four. Coffee is also available in the tent every Friday, Upper Division Library Department Chair Caroline Bartels said. “The best part about the tent has definitely been the food,” Mabel Runyon (12) said. “It’s a nice place to just take a breather and get a Starbucks coffee.” The seniors have been asking the administration about having another space that could be just theirs for some time, Dean of Students Michael Dalo said. “Some students had mentioned it

in passing during the fall, but due to the pandemic, it just wasn’t possible at the time,” he said. “Now that more students are in the process of getting or have been vaccinated, it was something that we could finally consider.” Due to the limited capacity in the library’s Senior Lounge, Bartels is excited that the seniors will have another space where more students can gather, she said. “Only so many kids can fit in [the lounge], so we really hope that students will take advantage of everything in there and the fact that it’s outside.” Head of School Dr. Tom Kelly and Director of Facilities Management Gordon Jensen spearheaded the project, setting up the new space over the two week online period following spring break, Dalo said. The Maintenance Department provided an artificial floor and carpeting, the Tech Department provided a large television, and FLIK committed to stocking the tent with drinks and snacks, Kelly said. The senior tent came as a surprise to members of the Class of 2021. Students take advantage of the group-friendly activities available in the tent, like playing board games together, Mitchell Yu (12) said.

“The tent is nice because my friends and I all share a love of games, so it’s fun to have video games and other stuff that we can do together,” Anthony White (12) said. The tent has become a regular part of many seniors’ lives. “A trip to the tent at least once a day to get snacks and meet up with friends has become a part of my daily routine,” Srijani Shreya (12) said. While students are appreciative of the effort the administration has put in for their class, the tent does not replace the senior traditions that were lost because of COVID-19, Sonja Cooper (12) said. “What was great about those past experiences was that they united the class, but all this tent does is create another space for individuals to hang out with friends, and not necessarily interact with other people in their grade,” Cooper said. Nonetheless, most have felt the positive impact of the new addition, Shreya said. “At the end of the day, we just want [our seniors] to be happy,” Groppi said. “This has been such a hard, weird, and disruptive year, but despite that we just want them to graduate with some really great memories.”


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