Note: The highlighted portion below (in “Bring all necessary medications with you”) is useful information provided by Christina, but it still needs to be fact-‐checked. (Also, my paraphrasing of what she said might have altered the meaning.) My other concern: I’m afraid that the first point of “Know Before You Go” and the sidebar might be too similar. Tonya Johnson and Ryne Steinacker 10/5/12 ELang 430R Word Count: 482
Is There a Doctor in the House? Meeting Travel Medical Needs Tara Walker 10/10/12 11:29 PM Comment [1]: This still seems a little awkward, but I really like where it is going.
Every international traveler cringes at the thought of getting sick or needing to find health care in an unfamiliar place. Even if you’re not frightened by the thought of illness, the prospect of spending a couple of days in bed during your vacation might take the wind out of your sails. Follow the tips below to help you avoid illness and spend your trip the way you planned it.
Know Before You Go •
Get to Know Your Destination
TEC Lab 10/10/12 6:16 PM Comment [2]: I think labeling the tips as “informative” might be tooting our own horn a little too much. (Though of course , we DO hope that they’re informative!) Tara Walker 10/10/12 11:49 PM Comment [3]: I don’t think it is at all, but if you really think it sounds that way go ahead and keep it out.
No two countries, or even regions of the same country, are identical in terms of healthcare. Check out the US State Department’s website for country-specific information about health, safety, and a variety of other important topics for safely traveling abroad: http://travel.state.gov/travel/cis_pa_tw/cis_pa_tw_1168.html. The article sidebar contains more detailed information about finding healthcare providers during your trip. •
Get Your Vaccines Go to the Center for Disease Control’s website to learn about vaccinations specific to your area of travel; http://wwwnc.cdc.gov/travel/default.aspx.
TEC Lab 10/10/12 5:53 PM Comment [4]: The website has information about LOTS of topics, not just hospitals. Does removing that intro sentence solve the problem? (It DOES make the article shorter…) Tara Walker 10/10/12 11:49 PM Comment [5]: Keep the text if you need the article to be a little longer, but I think it reads better without everything else.