IMROVEMENTS (p14) To complete it you must: • Explain how the quality of the design could be improved •
Explain how the quality of manufacturing could • be improved – think about alterna/ve methods of
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construc/on, choice of materials, skills needed, and industrial processes. Diagrams can be included to help illustrate the answer Include the opinions of others -‐ partners (see page 4) and/or target market
AAainment Several relevant sugges/ons for improvements to the design together with sugges/ons of how quality of manufacture could be improved. Quality of wriaen communica/on is basic, some errors of grammar, punctua/on and spelling Well-‐founded sugges/ons for improvements to the design together with sugges/ons of how quality of Refer to is the results of aw with earer / uuse ser manufacture could be improved. • Informa/on well organised, good of ttrial echnical language/ vocabulary. Wriaen communica/on is good, presen/ng mainly appropriate material in a coherent manner, few errors of grammar, • punctua/on and spelling. Photographs of the final product should be Well-‐founded sugges/ons for improvements to othe esign together included n pdage 15 only with detailed sugges/ons of how quality of manufacture could be improved. Informa/on is well organised, with very good use of technical language/vocabulary. Q uality of wriaen communica/on is good, presen/ng appropriate material in a coherent manner, and largely error-‐free