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PALO ALTO UNIFIED SCHOOL DISTRICT PALO ALTO HIGH SCHOOL 50 EMBARCADERO RD. PALO ALTO, CA 94301 NON-PROFIT ORG U.S. POSTAGE

PAI D PALO ALTO PERMIT #44

The Campanile

Vol. XCV, No. 4

50 Embarcadero Road, Palo Alto, CA 94301 • www.palycampanile.org

Friday, December 7, 2012

English Department addresses concerns with plagiarism policy Ben Hawthorne Business Manager

Albert Lee Staff Writer

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ne of the few lectures that is common to nearly every English class at Paly is the plagiarism lecture. Almost all students are familiar with its basic idea: “plagiarism is bad, and it will be punished.” However, these lectures often fail to address a critical point: what, exactly, is plagiarism? Paly’s current official plagiarism policy defines plagiarism as “copying or closely paraphrasing sentences, phrases or passages from an un-cited source,” being determined by a teacher’s “professional judgement.” Despite the subjectiveness inherent in this definition, teachers maintain that their professional judgement is nearly always successful and that students should trust them. “I don’t know of a time when my ‘professional judgement’ has been wrong,” English teacher Erin Angell said. According to English teacher Kirk Hinton, plagiarism is simply “students not doing their own thinking.” Most plagiarism can be divided into two types: cut-and-paste plagiarism, the most common type, and “plagiarism of ideas,” i.e. stealing someone else’s idea or argument without citing it. “99 percent of the plagiarism that I see is stuff cut and paste from the Internet,” Angell said. In the eyes of some students, teachers do a poor job of explaining how they determine whether something is plagiarism. When asked how well she understood the English department’s definition of plagiarism, senior Susanna, who prefers to remain anonymous, merely replied “What is the definition again?” However, other students contend that the department is doing a better job of explaining its definition of plagiarism than in previous years. “I think that this year, [the English Department has] made more of an effort to explain their policies, but before now, they have done a very poor job,” senior Sri Ghadiyaram said. While determining whether text has been cut-and-pasted from the Internet is straightforward, determining whether ideas have been

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he results of an alumni survey were presented in a school board meeting on Nov. 19. The survey examined the strengths and weaknesses of the Palo Alto Unified School District (PAUSD) in preparing students for college. It was based on the feedback from 227 of the 773 (29 percent) Palo Alto and Henry M. Gunn High School (Gunn) graduated students out of the class of 2011. The graduates were confident in the district’s academic preparation

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rincipal Phil Winston hopes to make finals optional next year in order to reduce the immense amount of stress that affects virtually every student at Paly during finals season. In addition to reducing student stress, Winston believes that allowing voluntary finals will help transform school into a more enjoyable environment for students. If students have worked hard all throughout the semester, Winston sees no point in piling further stress on students and assigning large tests that could potentially drop borderline grades. “There could be a tremendous reduction in student stress and in the amount of time that young folks study for tests, and just an overall better experience and an easier end to the semester for everybody,” Winston said. “If you demonstrated competency all semester long, do you really need to take a final?” See FINALS, A3

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English Department Instructional Supervisor Shirley Tokheim, Ph.D. addresses The Campanile regarding the department’s plagiarism policy and how the teachers determine what constitutes plagiarism.

This essay consists entirely of my own work. Any ideas or words that are not mine have been properly cited.

or doesn’t copy the structure of logical argument from its source.” One way teachers search for plagiarism of ideas is by looking at the level of argument in an essay. For example, teachers may suspect that an essay has been plagiarized if in it, the student incorporates arguments that they would not expect a high school student to be capable of making. “It’s unlikely that the ideas that you come up with on your own as a 16- or 17-year old are going to be of the same sophistication as ideas from the PhD students writing for

going into college. From a question in which the survey-takers could select multiple choices, the survey indicated that 82 percent of the college students felt connected to their

past high school experience through academics, 44 percent through athletics, 31 percent through

clubs and 26 percent through performing arts.

“I think Paly prepared me really well academically for college,” Eloise Rippey, Paly graduate of 2011, said. “My classes are basically on the same level of difficulty as the classes I took at Paly, but Paly is also really sheltered which made leaving and moving to college really hard.” 30 percent of students felt very prepared, 38.3 percent felt prepared, 24.7 percent felt somewhat prepared and 7 percent felt

William Kershner senior Staff Writer

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unprepared. Most felt confident with their preparation. The survey was presented in the College Readiness Report that indicate high schools’ preparation for a diversity of people. There was student concern over lack of preparation over topics such as managing money. “Go into college being open minded, try new things and don’t be afraid to push yourself out of your comfort zone,” a 2011 alumni said, “If you don’t do something, no one will do it for you.” The school board is using the feedback from this survey to improve upon preparing future high school students for college.

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Every student in Shirley Tokheim’s American Lit 11 Honors class and in several other teachers’ classes must hand write and sign this statement in ink on each essay they write, prior to turning it in. plagiarized is often ambiguous and can be confusing. A common way to check for plagiarism of ideas is by looking for paraphrasing and similar argument structure. According to Angell, every essay she has seen that incorporates plagiarism of ideas paraphrases the original source or copies the original source’s argument structure in the same manner as it was presented. “When you plagiarize ideas, you are just paraphrasing,” Angell said. “I have yet to find an essay with plagiarism of ideas that lacks paraphrasing

City Council proposes Newell bridge redesign plan to replace the Newell Street Bridge on the San Francisquito Creek has begun under joint work between the City of Palo Alto Public Works Department (CPPWD), the City of East Palo Alto, the San Franciscquito Creek Joint Powers Authority (JPA) and the Santa Clara Valley Water District (SCVWD). The purpose of replacing this 100year old bridge is to improve the flood control in the surrounding area. The bridge is thought to be functionally obsolete due to its narrow width, severe vertical profile and poor sight distances. The current bridge is 18 feet wide by 40 feet long (one and a half cars distance across), and has no provision for bicycle or pedestrian traffic. The proposed replacement bridge will be a 45-foot by 86-foot structure with two 16-foot shared lanes and two five-foot sidewalks. The new bridge would be realigned to create a traditional four way stop on the East Palo Alto side of the creek. The primary goal of the reconstruction is to decrease possible flood damage. A secondary benefit of the bridge is an alleviation of traffic on University Avenue; Newell Street crossing would draw attention as a throughway and an alternate route. A major downside is increased neighborhood traffic in the adjacent region of Crescent Park. Other problems relating to bike and pedestrian safety may be present with the inflow of traffic, especially as the intersection of Newell and Dana is a major crosswalk for Duveneck Elementary. Recently there has been major pushback from the residents in the surrounding area, (from both PA and EPA sides) who have begun to mobilize an effort to deny this request. If approved, the Newell Road Bridge Replacement Project is scheduled for construction during the spring and summer of 2014.

Shmoop,” Shirley Tokheim, the English Department instructional supervisor, said. “Most teachers would not consider it plagiarism if you fail to cite other 16- or 17-year olds in class discussions.” If a student writes an essay that uses arguments that a teacher would not expect a high school student to make, the teacher may suspect plagiarism but many view this as unfair. “That [definition] seems kind of unfair,” junior Samuel Erickson said. “High school students are often

See PLAGIARISM, A3

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