Jada Martin 4 December 8, 2011 Descriptive Writing about the Beach Have you ever gone to the beach? If you said yes, I’m going to do a descriptive writing about the beach. The first paragraph is going to be about what you hear at the beach. The second is going to be about what you feel at the beach. The third one is about what you see at the beach. Last but not least the conclusion. This is body paragraph number one. When you’re at the beach you can hear the big waves. You can also hear a lot of people laughing. Some people are even splashing in the water. When it’s quiet everyone would be able to hear the seagulls. Lots of people like to play volley ball, so you can hear the ball being hit over the net. You can also hear kids screaming really loud. In this paragraph you’re going to learn about what you feel at the beach. Sometimes you’re just sitting there and all of a sudden this cool wind comes right down your back. When you’re playing in the sand it feels hot and smooth. When people stand in the water and a wave comes it gets really high. It makes you cold. When people are at the beach they like to feel the hot sun on their backs. Did you ever wonder what you would see at the beach? Well, you would see water, sand, rocks, people, waves, splashing, swimsuits, and sunglasses. There’s a lot more things you would see at the beach, but there’s to much to put on one paper. You can see tons of things at the beach! Well, you’re at the conclusion. It looks like you read about what you hear, feel, and see at the beach. Did you like my descriptive writing?
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