5) Brian J. Morris' second set of reviewer comments (February 25, 2011)

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REVIEWER REPORT FOR REVISED VERSION OF Frisch et al. “Male circumcision and sexual function in men and women: A survey-based-crosssectional study in Denmark In my original Reviewer report I pointed out numerous factual errors, as well as the presence of distortions, bias and possible statistical errors. Few of my criticisms or suggestions for improvement has been addressed in the revised version. If the authors wish their data to be taken seriously they need to remove the erroneous statements and appearance of overt bias. Not to do so will mean that their data will be dismissed by most experts in the field. At present the manuscript remains unpublishable by any journal. The extremist views are not needed. An honest, accurate, and scholarly presentation, and a focus on the particular subject at hand, will assist in communication of data, albeit being at variance with most other research findings in this area. Moreover, the apparent bias of the authors seems to have led them to a conclusion that is not valid, when my reading of the manuscript in the context of the field leads me to quite a different conclusion. The study involved 1,893 uncircumcised men and 103 circumcised men. As to the issue of my criticism of the authors’ statistics, it may be that a Bonferroni correction is not needed, especially given that they adjusted for confounding factors. My main concern regarding the statistics are the sheer number of predictors in their model versus the relatively small number of circumcised men and of men with difficulties. This may be a case of overfitting … and could therefore cause instability in the model. Indeed, at the bottom of page 19 (Discussion para 10) they state that “some associations were statistically unstable because only 5% of Danish men are circumcised”. While I am concerned about possible overfitting, it is possible that the authors might have found an association, although this still depends on accurate collection and recording of the data, something that is worrisome, given the manner in which the data are discussed, where the authors immediately jump to conclusions and disparage and misrepresent the literature in this field. Their interpretation of the data is likely to be wrong and in fact less generalizable than the authors appear to think. It is, moreover, highly likely that their finding of sexual difficulties in 10 of 95 circumcised men for which data are tabulated is probably NOT due to physical factors, as I will now explain. *** A major reason for the unusual findings could be because they emanate from a population in which very few men are circumcised. If the authors thought about their research and findings, then examined the literature, they would realize that a better explanation for their findings is readily apparent. In Denmark infant circumcision is rare, being confined to Jews and possibly a small proportion of Muslims for whom age of MC is not particularly important so long as it occurs in childhood or early teens. The latter represent a small proportion of the study population, as the authors acknowledge, where they state only 8 of the circumcised men were Jewish or Muslim, with 14 men who were non-Danish being circumcised. When circumcision is performed in Denmark it is mostly to treat a medical condition caused by foreskin pathology (phimosis being one reason, and paraphimosis another). Elective MC for a non-medical reason is rare. When the authors read the references I listed and summarized in my original review, there is no evidence in the rest of the world for any adverse effect on sexual function, etc in men whose circumcision took place in early childhood (mostly infancy), nor is there any evidence of adverse function in healthy men who elect to be circumcised as adults (now confirmed at the gold


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