It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Most people think that some children are given different sport or musical aptitudes. while others were born without theses characteristics. On the other hand some people believe that through education every child can learn sports or music. It is important think about these opposite points of view and consider some important facts that influence our childhood. A good introduction should have three things: First, it should paraphrase the question. Secondly, it should include a clear opinion and lastly it should outline the main ideas you will discuss in the main body of your essay. You have not really done any of these things. When a child is born there are several facts that influence him, such as his genetically and cultural background and the place where he was born. There are some physical characteristics that can be an advantage in sports like being tall, corpulent or agile. For example, afro-descendants are usually really good at running. There are also some children that have a special ear for music, and some of them can even follow a song before they learn to talk. I think this child it special abilities should practice a sport that allows them to use their advantage. You have too many ideas here and they are not fully developed. It would be better if you limited the number of ideas to one or two (at the most) and developed them with explanations and examples. Despite of the fact that some chidden children have a natural advantage, some people claim that if we provide enough training, any child can learn how to be a good sport person or a musician. It is well known that people usually are usually good at learning something when they like it, . in this order of ideas, kids Kids will become good on at a particular sport or instrument just only if they like them. If the children enjoy while they are learning, they would have a better change chance to success succeed in this area. There are some examples, like kids that began singing in on Disney TV channel and now they are famous pop stars. What question are you trying to answer? The question does not ask you about this. You must answer the specific question. Your example is not specific enough.