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Por tfo lio Arch251202 Dr. Aly Kandil Hala Dardir-900221260 Fall ‘23

The Five Year Plan

Syllabus

T a b l e

E-waste

Birdhouse

Typography

Urban

Filler

biophilic

Rectilinear

o f

Curvilinear

C o n t e n t s

Curvi/Recti

Fragments

Planar

Wires

Break rules

I-selfie

Express

Final Project

E-waste

Professor Feedback: The inside of the cube should’ve been on the outside. It would have given it a better look. The circle had a good form but I should’ve added more elements to it.

Personal Reflection: I struggled a lot of this project because of the choice of e-waste. I believe that I should’ve added more e-waste elements to the circle to make it fuller.

7/10

Rectilinear

Professor Feedback: the compositions were not neat an the needed some more work Personal Reflection: this was my first time using clay to create compositions so I had a difficult time creating these compositions.

6.5/10

Birdhouse

Professor Feedback: It’s planar. It should’ve been closed off more so it could be rectilinear.

Personal Reflection: This was the third time I do this birdhouse and I tried my best to create something that would meet the criteria.

8/10

Curvilinear

Professor Feedback: Interesting compositions, the cone should be straight not curved Personal Reflection: these compositions were easier to make because it was easy for me to create the curvilinear forms and make a compositions out of them.

8/10

Typography

Professor Feedback: Nice composition, the execution could have been better. the model wasn’t stable Personal Reflection: This was the second time I did this assignment so i had some background info on what I have to do and I tried being careful with the execution so it could be clean.

8/10

Curvi/Recti

Grid

Radial

Cluster

Central

Linear

Professor Feedback: The grid could have been connected. overall compositions were good Personal Reflection: This assignment was a bit tricky because I didn’t know how to represent these 5 words but I tried my best.

7.5/10

Urban

Professor Feedback: Nice composition, the execution could have been better Personal Reflection: The painting was a bit rushed and I didn't wait enough to color the second coat. However the composition was nice.

8.5/10

Fragments

Professor Feedback: Interesting compositions, could be cleaner.

Personal Reflection: I enjoyed this assignment because it allowed me to think and form compositions that follow the requirements of the assignment.

8.5/10

Filler

Professor Feedback: The filler idea was good but the execution wasn’t good at all.

Personal Reflection: I struggled with this assignment because I thought that I couldn’t melt the bottle, so I stopped midway and instead I added plasticine to make the filler shape which turned out really bad.

7/10

Planar

Uber

Toktok

Monorail

Submarine

Professor Feedback: Interesting composition and good execution Personal Reflection: This was very tricky because it was my first time creating compositions with paper especially with these words but I think I did a good job with the executions.

9/10

Biophilic

Professor Feedback: The composition was very nice and achieved the requirements. more paper could have been added to give it some volume.

Personal Reflection: this assignment was a bit difficult because the paper was very thin however I was able to compose a nice composition.

9/10

wIRES

Professor Feedback: Some repetition with the compositions Personal Reflection: This was a bit tricky because while listening to the music we had to create hte compositions and we had to be fast before the second song begins.

8.5/10

Break rules

Professor Feedback: broke all the rules and met the grading requirments, Personal Reflection: This assignment was very fun because we were given a set of rules that we had to break.

I’ve never had such an assignment so I enjoyed it very much

9/10

i-selfie

Professor Feedback: Could be better but nice sketch Personal Reflection: This assignment very difficult in my opinion because I don‘t have any experience with designing furniture, however after many trials I was able to come up with this side table that somewhat matched the picture shown on the right.

8.5/10

Express

All

Float

Left

unlock

None

Sink

Right

Lock

Professor Feedback: The compositions could have been better. some compositions are too direct.

Personal Reflection: I was surprised with my grade on the midterm. I thought I was going to do better. However, I think what made my grade low is the composition that were too direct.

73/100

Final Project

Professor Feedback: The composition was very executed. The bubbly effect could have been more exaggerated so it could show more.

Personal Reflection: I was happy with the results. the hard work paid off in the end.

96/100