caesura the caesuras play with the theme of time, delaying a start, hoping, delaying a thought, a plan. The placement of the caesuras leaves a want for more, in both the language and in the reader’s mind. The purposefulness of the caesuras placement show the intention of the writer XXXXXX
main theme points time / order everyday actions / things definition / reference to
In these sentences lie the main points of this poem. Stop loving blank / faced bullshit. Becoming an obvious point where earlier lines (After eleven, you’re in the territory / of individuals.) meet lines about to be revealed (Top hits for “easiest suicide” are takeout hope spiels). shift
This also begins to mimic in form, repeating a Google search, an on and off theme (Specifically dealing with light). A didactic Stop, and Help begin to Play together from the beginning, Stop appearing in the title and Help before the first shift mimicking what has come before, and what will come after.
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In referencing everyday actions (i.e. flip the light or checking emails) Young gives the reader something they are familiar with, giving a familiar place inside the abstract language. Referencing popular websites (Facebook and Google) creates a sort of familiarity which become self aware references when he says “They make remembering / off”. In the end realizing this was a video all along, we realize he is referencing how everyone shares their everyday amongst everyone. Facebook, Google, and email connecting all sorts of people in different ways. Google saving searches, Facebook giving multiple outlets to connect, and email being a way to directly reach someone.