Draft 1 Comment.
0.24 Not a very nice green of the soccer field. Would it be possible to re-colour otherwise you can cut this scene off.
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1.21 The basketball doesn’t have the net. pls cut off
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1.32 Would you please hold the scene longer
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2.14 Pls cut off. His can is painted.
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2.19 Better change the photo. The script is talking about World Language.
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2.56 Pls change the scene. One of the student is laying down.
3.16 Should mention High School Students on Valedictory day.
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3.20 Pls change the scene. We concern about nail colour.
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4.22-4.24 Would it be better if we’d present the Cooking Studio.
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5.55 The colour of the logo isn’t the same as the beginning.
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4.25 Should pan the camera to the shop as well.