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3.4 Detail 3.5 Detail 3.6 Reason 4

Topic: London has been … Restatement: For many centuries … Reason: Its dominance is due to Detail: 500 years ago …

5.1 5.2 5.3 5.4 5.5

Topic: The new Leisure … Detail: Mark Roberts … Detail: The opening has … Reason: This was because … Detail: The architects …

6.1 6.2 6.3 6.4 6.5

… was developed in the 19th century. … to isolate, punish and reform. … there has been a steep rise in the number of prisoners. … as being ‘universities of crime’. … how effective prisons are today.

7.1 Prisons appear to offer society three benefits. 7.2 Firstly, they punish prisoners by depriving them of freedom. 7.3 In addition, offenders are segregated from society so they cannot commit further crimes. 7.4 Finally, they offer the possibility of reform through training programmes. 8.1 Topic: Prisons, however, appear to many observers to be failing in the 21st century. 8.2 Detail: In many countries the prison population is rising steadily. 8.3 Detail: Furthermore, many prisoners return to prison after their release; they are repeat offenders. 8.4 Reason: This suggests that few prisons offer effective reform programmes. 8.5 Detail: In addition, prison conditions can often be brutal and degrading. 12. Organising the Main Body 2

Order & titles:

2.1 Methods (b) 2.2 Findings (d) 2.3 Case study (c)


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