Vocabulary
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Score: 7
Again this is your strongest area and today you used these notable words and phrases: Design Construction Spacious Banners Commercials Device Lens Widespread Rate of development Broadly speaking Overseas
Grammar
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Score: 6
There wasn’t the variety of structures that you need to score higher than a 6. If you can show variety and some accuracy with them, then your score will rise to a 7. In part 2 some of your structures were repetitive – lots of I can… In part 3 you started to use some If structures – 2 inaccurately, and 1 accurately so this is why your score is lower than you want. If I wanted to catch/take a photo I can use it… If it (is) used by teenagers or young children it (negatively) affects negatively… If children also use it for games…it also affects There need to be more examples of relative cluses and passive which you can add by using the types of sentences that you could use for any topic: Relative clauses There are some people who believe that… There are many places where … I remember the time when I was… Conditionals For example, if you want to take a photo you don’t need extra equipment, you can use your smart phone.