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Bài viết của whitecat Ther're four people in my family:my father,my mother,my elder brother and me.My father is fifty years old,he's a director.He's handsome,good-natured,he can dances or plays guitar and tennis.My morther is forty-seven years old,she's a B.O.M(Board Of Managerment).I'm very admire my mother.Because she's very beautiful,gifted,she's teaches me a lot of good things.She's the best in my eyes!My elder brother is nineteen,he's a student.He's study at Inustry Infomation Itermediate.He likes Game Online and plays it well.He swims very good.I'm thirdteen years old,i'm a pupil.I can swim and love ocean so much!

I love my family so much!Because it always makes me in security and happy!

Bài sửa của bluewatergal Ther're four people in my family:my father,my mother,my elder brother and me.My father is fifty years old,he's a director.He's handsome,good-natured,he can dancesdance or plays play the guitar and tennis.My morther is forty-seven years old,she's a B.O.M(Board Of Managerment).I'm very admire my mother.Because she's very beautiful,gifted. Sheshe's teaches me a lot of good things.She's the best in my eyes!My elder brother is nineteen,he's a student.He'sHe study at Inustry Infomation Itermediate.He likes Game Online and plays it well.He swims very good.wellI'm thirdteen years old,and i'm a pupil.I can swim and love ocean so much!

I love my family so much!Because it always makes me in security safe/ secure and happy!

Comment 1can +V_inf 2, chơi nhạc cụ _ nhạc cụu phải đi kèm với mạo từ "the" play the piano play the violin 3, "admire" là động từ nên câu "I'm very admire my mother." bạn sửa thành I admire she so much Bài sửa của wellfrog chú ý các lỗi spelling : morther => mother thirdteen => thirteen Inustry => Industry Infomation => Information Itermediate =>Intermediate Managerment => Management admire she => admire her