so grateful for someone who reminds them of Mom. In Vietnam, I took care of these boys. And they were boys. When they called out for Mom, I’d try to get them onto my lap, as best as I could, or sit next to them so I could cradle their heads on my shoulder. I knew they weren’t going to see their moms on this side of heaven. I always hoped they’d feel my heartbeat while someone held them one last time.”
JUDGE’S COMMENT
Honorable Mention Literature The chaplain’s badge gives Maggie access to parts of the hospital she had not known before, and it opens other doors to her as well, as people share parts of themselves with her through their stories. This glorious piece brings to mind what Martin Luther King referred to as “the miracle of personality.” The voices here ring out with the urgency to tell––and to be heard. This lovely writer listens beautifully, and her listening in turn invites such rich telling. These stories carry the grace of gratitude, and each one delights us with surprise––each one a miracle of personality.
Let Her Soul Float Like Clouds Across the Sky Allison Weinstock MSI
Let her soul float like clouds across the sky, A tiny light that flickers through the night. Freeze her as a memory in your eye. A young child, confident that she can fly, Shakes with innocence before that long fight— Let her soul float like clouds across the sky. Paralyzed by the thought of death so nigh, She dons a fierce façade to make the flight. Freeze her as a memory in your eye. Yet, far away, she crumbles to the cry Of Spring’s past flowers and Winter’s fresh might. Let her soul float like clouds across the sky.
JUDGE’S COMMENT
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This stunning poem is a villanelle, one of the most challenging of poetic forms. Notice the complex repeating rhyme schemes and the two delicate refrains. Here the poet is drawn to a series of elaborate formal constraints to achieve a poignant exhortation: the poet seeks both to release a soul “across the sky” and to “freeze her as a memory in your eye.” The villanelle form invites an inflation of language that is not typical of free verse, and the effect is magnificent.
I conjure a calm, brave front for her; aye, My futile attempt to ignore our plight. Freeze her as a memory in your eye. Praying for Death’s austere peace to come, I Now drink to faint music of the child’s light. Let her soul float like clouds across the sky. Freeze her as a memory in your eye.
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