Collaborative Writing
Year 8 Class E - g2 2019
Y8 - CLASS E - GROUP II - STORY I
The Old Haunted Farm I remember when I was too young. I was about 10 years old and in October was having some days off, enjoying the fall break at my grandparent’s farm. I didn't want to be there alone, so my parents allowed me to invite a close friend, since we both enjoyed a lot of riding horses. On the second night, after a busy day full of outdoors activities I got a bit tired after hectic hours. After a delicious typical dinner and a nice chat, most people had decided to go to bed. My friend and I were woken up, instead. It was when we wanted to look after a legend that my grandpa had told us the night before. This legend had to do a fierce unknown creature that was haunting the farm and killing the animals of it for a long time. The attacks were violent; the hens, the ducks, the lambs, the cows had been the creature favourite victims for a long time. So, my friend and I decided to leave the house and go hunting the creature at midnight, when the beast, could run in the farm, while waiting for an opportunity to attack the animals of the farm. We went to the highest hill of the farm and we chose to stay still between two big old oak trees, we could see the moon from there, it was a really beautiful dark night, but we weren't admiring it. My friend and I were looking after the terrible monster, but we couldn't find it, after hours being stuck for it, so we decided to go back to the house, get some guns for our own protection and hunt the beast with my grandpa in the following day.
When we woke up, the next day, grandpa did not seem to agree with our ideas and adventures about hunting the beast, but we got to convince him using sharp arguments and so there we went out the house to get the horses and go for our plan. When we got to the horse stalls we saw something grotesque there it was, a dead horse right in front of us. The smell in the stall was awful and there was fresh blood everywhere. We were dizzy and pale in shock. We tried to recover from the whole terror scene. We cleaned everything up and discovered a fierce attack and bite in the horse’s neck. In the following day, overnight we went hunting the creature again. It was dark and foggy, we couldn’t see well. Suddenly we saw a shadow far away and we were a bit frightened, but we were brave enough and decided to wait until it got closer. We shouted desperately so out loud so that grandpa would come to help us. He came and told us to wait that he would check something out. After a quarter minutes we could hear screams and soon we could see his shadow approaching slowly, until we saw him without an arm. Grandpa was bleeding and begging us to quit the adventure and just go away. We got really scared so we ran to the house and we started shouting so that some other workers would come and join us to help to save grandpa. Grandpa was a man who would not give it up. He wanted to end all this killing story, so he stayed there fighting the beast. On our way home, we were worried about him.
Y8 - CLASS E - GROUP II - STORY I
There was blood running down the little river a fine stream that crossed our family farm, all that blood was just making the water completely red. We were shocked and couldn’t figure it out what it was happening. It was getting dark and late and we did not have any news We were so frightened that it wasn’t a comfy atmosphere. My friend was so stressed that he fell asleep sleep, but I stayed awake. I wish I didn’t. I started hearing strange noises coming from the outside. Suddenly, a deep dark shadow appeared on the window. I could see it clearly, it was thin and tall and it was moving towards the window of my room. I freaked out and I hid myself under the bed. The shadow approached each time more and more, and it stopped looking like a shadow. I could see the creature, and it looked like a weird human. I wanted to get my friend out of the room and run, but the fear I was feeling didn’t let me do it so. The strange human being crashed the window glass and entered the room. He had giant white teeth, red skin, sharp pointed big ears and I could see him through the mirror in front of the window. The fierce creature was a vampire. The silence filled the room. I tried to wake my friend up, but I couldn’t. The vampire was getting closer while laughing at me. I put my body behind and made a lot of strength to run, but the creature grabbed my arm and pressed my legs to the ground. He forced me to turn my neck so that it could bite me. I fought with all my forces and when about to lose the battle I closed my eyes. He opened his big red mouth wide and CRUNCH!
He bit my thin neck. I felt I was slowly dying, as he drank my blood and soul. Soon, he would just leave to drink my family's blood. My last words were ‘See you in hell, evil. When I got to the place I took as hell, the first thing that I remember I saw my family. I was petrified. But I also saw the evil beast, the creature , the vampire with a gunshot in his chest, but wasn't a regular gunshot. The gun had some powerful poison which could kill exterminating it. For the first time, I was truly happy. I was glad to know that he wouldn’t haunt no one anymore more. It was very sad that I had to live with him now, but at least my family and I died doing something noble. Back to the farm, a baby cried. But not just any baby, It was a new beast. A new creature, a vampire baby! We couldn’t let another creature haunt the farm again. So my grandpa gave the idea of killing the baby vampire, but I thought again and said: -We can keep the baby and take care of him, this way he would obey our rules and wouldn’t haunt the farm, and he will be a new member of our family. After a few moments, I heard a big noise and then I woke up. It was nothing but a nightmare! I heard grandma calling us for a big meal. The smell of coffee, baked muffins fried eggs and bacon made me the happiest child on Earth!
Y8 - CLASS X - GROUP II - STORY I
Y8- CLASS E - GROUP 2 - STORY 2 I
Shh....Keep Quiet! A few years ago, I was a happy girl, living in a huge chase in a big happy family. Everyday, the sun shone, the birds tweaked and nothing seemed to be different. But one day, something strange had happened, the sun didn’t shine. I’ll never understand the horrors that happened later, that day. All of a sudden I noticed that the birds were silent and my family had disappeared. Don´t you ask me why or how, but I just knew one thing. We had to be silent to live, something my family didn’t do, my brother who used to shout too loud, had died, my mother used to listen music, she had died too. I was alone. It was a dark night. There were no lights in the city of Kimball. There was blood spread all over the house. ‘They were here’. I heard a loud scream of death. ‘They had been silenced by them’. I felt it. I ran, but couldn't scream, or make any noise. The bodies of my family were hung up on the white house, which now turned to be as red as fresh blood. I held myself to not cry. I was only worried about saving my life, keeping myself silent. I started thinking about what to do, because there was no one with me anymore. I went outside to check what was going on, then I saw a lot of big and weird shapes of birds flying over the city. These creatures were blind but too good at hearing noises, so I needed to live quietly to get to survive. I had seen a girl who told me that I needed to be quiet to live and try to search for some food and a safe and quiet place to sleep because the city was a very noisy place to stay in such a situation. On my way out of the city, I met a brave friend of my family. A person I could trust. He was a friend of my father and he had promised me to give me a hand and help. After several hours walking, we saw a little farm some miles away. So, always quietly, we decided to go there.When we arrived, we faced an old lady who was afraid of us and started threatening me with a shotgun. We warned her with gestures to keep quiet, otherwise the birds could hear us, we were not her enemies.
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Suddenly she started to scream atI us to leave and because of that, the big birds came and killed her. There was hundreds of them, however they couldn’t see us because they were blind and we hadn´t made any noise. We were thrilling death and my partner couldn’t be there anymore, so he went out of the house to take a breath. He tripped and fell on the floor, making noise, suddenly the birds came and attacked him, taking his life away. I heard him screaming, however I couldn’t help or either cry, otherwise I would be the next one, eaten by them too.I was terrified, but I needed to face my fears. I left that house. I continued walking, until the sun was down. I was feeling tired and hungry. I needed water and food. I was walking for almost thirteen hours and I hadn’t seen anyone since the crazy farmer. I needed to sleep, so I laid down under a tree and I slept for a long, long, long time. I woke up and still there was nobody. Where was l? And what was going on? I woke up in a completely different place, in a empty room, in a house that I had never been before. It was very dark and I didn’t know exactly the time it was. The only thing I could see was movements from the other side of the window.At first, I thought I was safe, because it was completely silent and those movements were quiet. However, I saw a light and the door opening. And a big strong man entered the room. He started to hit me and make me scream. Suddenly, all the birds came into the house and killed me. When I opened my eyes again, I had become one bird. A Ravenous creature who is ready for a fierce attack.
Y8 - CLASS E - GROUP II- STORY III
The Palace Cruise Mystery
The Palace cruise was very luxurious. All the richest families travelled there. It was huge, with chandeliers, stairs and gold ornaments, but it had a very mysterious energy. And I am going to tell you why. 1903, that’s when it happened. A well-known, respected, sophisticated English family, the Brights, was travelling in it. They had a precious daughter, Janice. w She was a lovely teenager who has just turned fifteen. But then, one day after they got in the cruise, she mysteriously disappeared. Her parents got desperate and searched for her for many days. One day, in the middle of a storm, they were returning to their room. The cruise was shaking. Janice was still missing and the trip was coming to the end. They were worried, didn't want to leave without her. When they opened the room's door, Janice´s body was lying on the floor. After that, Mr. and Mrs. Bright died. Nobody knows what actually happened. If they were murdered, if they died of sadness, or if they killed themselves. It was a mystery. Years later, it was the summer holiday season and many rich families were going to the Palace Cruiser to have a great time, but the american family, the Sprouses were not there to do that. They were a modern and typical american family. They weren’t afraid of anything or impressed about the things of unexplained. They knew that everything had a solution. Mr. Sprouse was a famous detective and his wife Mrs. Sprouse was a very intelligent lady. She had a very sophisticated repertoire. They had two teenager sons, Nicholas and Rasmus. They were the smartests respected kids at school. They read the best books all the time while improving their knowledge and becoming wiser. When the family heard about the mystery of Palace Cruiser, they soon wanted to buy a ticket for a trip to try to solve the enigma. And so they made meticulous plans before going for it. When they got to the famous Palace Cruiser, everything looked fine. They spent two days searching for some clues that apparently didn’t exist. However, on the third day, it would be a special date they would celebrate Christmas. And on this day, they knew something could happen. It wasn’t a typical Christmas, when people would stay with their families and relatives, enjoying the moment and having fun. The Sprouse family were rather nervous and attentive. Meanwhile the other families were having a great time in the dining room, the Sprouses couldn’t stop searching for the dark facts, spots of crimes and further clues. Close to midnight, Nicholas was walking through the balcony and heard a beautiful female velvet voice singing. He was attracted and followed it immediately when saw a beautiful girl in a fluttering light pink long dress. It was when he fell in love with her. It was such a strong strike, sure ‘Love at first sight’. They started to talk and in the amusing breeze conversation, after a while, he asked her for her name. She looked at him terrified and said “NO”. The girl ran away as fast as she could. The young Romeo got shocked and did not get to understand her tempestuous attitude. In the next day, still worried about the previous night, Nicholas went back to the same place to see if he could meet the girl. For his surprise, she was there. same light pink dress, waiting for him. They had a lovely conversation, but when he asked her for her name, she denied revealing it. She had got pale lips and she turned to have a crying voice.He got very upset. What did he do? Was that anything wrong about it? Was it a sin? Their meetings worked like that for several times. He was trying to understand her psychological inner and each time more, he was even more in love with her. One night, this young lovely girl did not show up same time, same place. He came back to his room miserable and disappointed.
Y8 - CLASS E - GROUP II- STORY III
Nicholas was called to meet his family in a special room. The household folks were all glad and excited. They let him know they had captured all the ghosts. When Nick looked at them astonished open eyes, he got to see the love of his life among the ghosts. Nick could not believe his eyes and tragic fate. Janice, the lovely teenage girl, wearing a fluttering light pink dress was the one who had been murdered a hundred years ago, by her own father. Janice became an unrest soul haunting the cruise, willing to go back to life and experience her golden teen years. Nick got devastated and in a mix terror atmosphere, at the same time surprised, but still very sad. He had truly fallen in love with a the girl. She did not exist as a human figure. She was a shade, she was not real a dead ghost. He left the room crying and confused. He didn’t know what he was going to do. In the middle of the night, Nicholas made a wild decision. He woke up and set all the ghosts free. He let them to go away, but he had a serious request. The ghosts, being set free, needed to leave the cruiser, otherwise, they could´ve been rescued and punished by the family. Nicholas wanted to give Janice freedom and his first but last kiss. Nicholas had his heart beat so strong, sweat rolling down his face and the chills. He got closer and closer. He looked at Janice deeply and both were caught by a deep sensation and emotion. Nicholas looked at her face willing for her lips. Her lips were rather pale He came closer. He closed his eyes willing for his first kiss at last. He felt as cold as ice, but he Nicholas would not feel Janice or her mouth. He crossed her body instead. A week later, Nick and his family were getting out of the cruise. It was such a big trip and odd experience, they had together. Nicholas got kind of down and depressed for the rest of his life, as if like he was an empty box inside. Nicholas was young and handsome, but he had got cursed for the rest of his days. He had no feelings. He lived his life alone, dreaming of meeting Janice, alive and human. Nicholas lived his life as a ghost while waiting to meet his dearest loving girl.
Y8 - CLASS E - GROUP II - STORY 4
THE CURSE THAT NEVER ENDS Not so long time ago, a teenage girl called Nicole lived in a modest hut far away from the city. In front of her humble house, there was this enormous forest. Although its size was rather extensive, the forest was empty. Everybody was frightened of going there. Nicole´s parents had never let her enter the forest. They said there was a mysterious myth that a very brave man once went exploring the forest, but nobody had ever seen him again. On a typical weekend, Nicole’s parents went travelling and so she stayed in her house with her grandma who was older now and getting a little deaf lady. Grandma lived a very simple life in the closest town. She loved knitting and drinking tea. While the grandma was at Nicole’s house, grandma let the girl do anything because Nicole was her only grandchild . When the grandmother was already sleeping, Nicole started to hear some strange noises which were coming from the woods. She felt scared at the beginning, but rather curious, then Nicole decided to check if everything was okay outside the house. While she was getting closer to the door, the sound was getting louder and louder. She started to follow it, and without realising, Nicole entered the forest.
Suddenly, she felt cold. Freezing skeleton hands touched her face. Nicole had a tremendous chill that made her faint just after that. In the following day, Nicole turned conscious back again. She felt the sunlight on her body, and it became so shiny she could barely see the colour of her skin. Nicole could feel strange pains all over her bones. Unexplained feelings that she had never experienced before. Her eyes hurt the most. She could feel like they were burning. She couldn’t see anything anymore and the pains continued for some more hours. When her grandmother woke up, the parents were about to arrive. The grandmother, Zizza, looked everywhere, but couldn’t find Nicole. Desperately, she searched for her only grandchild outside the house. At first, Zizza didn’t find Nicole, but as she approached the forest, she started seeing a shadow of a human. She realised that the woods were the only place Nicole could be. She went toward the shadow feeling very scared. And there was Nicole. With buttons in her eyes, a sewed up smile and big black nails. She wore a black robe and boots that went up to her knee.
Y8 - CLASS E - GROUP II - STORY 4
Zizza was frightened and really afraid. She brought her inside the house and started screaming for help but there was nobody there. Nicole started laughing at her. All of a sudden, she jumped over her grandma and brutally attacked her. Few minutes and Zizza was dead. Wait, was she? Zizza started to breath strangely, her body was shaking, her face was changing completely. Her eyes were bloody, they became different… they turned as if they were bottoms, red bottoms. What was going on? Was that a curse? A forest curse that never would end? The girls´ parents arrived some hours later and faced their daughter all messed up and unconscious. Her face was weird and different, and the buttons on her eyes _ it was the weirdest thing that made the parent most scared. The grandmother was also messed up, with her bloody eyes and strange appearance. The parents started to cry and both got desperate. They called the emergency immediately. After they got to the hospital and the doctors examined both, Nicole and Grandma, very carefully, the incommon look of the patients, made the doctors and nurses worried, but the parents knew exactly what happened.
They remembered an old myth typical of the town that their great grandparents had told them long ago. The myth was that there was a mysterious spirit in the forest that did strange things on people’s face to get their souls to join him. The parents never believed in the myth, it seemed to be a silly one. However, now, it was the only explanation for such a strange look of the young Nicole and grandma. A couple of days later, both had died, but the doctors could not come to any clear conclusion. The parents got devastated , but they knew they had to burn Zizza’s and Nicole’s body in the woods, and hope to free their souls. They did that and remembered it everyday and every night. They heard voices and were able to feel the presence of Nicole and grandma´s spirits _ everywhere for the rest of their lives...
Y8 - CLASS E - GROUP 2 - STORY 5
The Story of a Mysterious Man The wind was blowing in a cold winter night. Mr. Lodge was feeling the wind like the sea waves striking on his face. Was that guilt? This guy smelled like money. He boasted about it. He had just come back from a trip with his family in their sailing boat. And now, he was alone at his enormous mansion. It was a quiet place like it had never been. He could hear his heart beating fast. Was that guilt? The rain started to fall and the sound was echoing. Exactly like that night, that one night, the night he would never forget. Was that guilt? The terrible memories came fast to his mind, and he couldn’t stop thinking about it. The feeling he had that night, it seemed like another person. “How could I’ve done this?! I was completely out of my mind! That wasn’t me. It ruined everything…”, he thought. Mr. Lodge was getting nervous and stressed out. He started shaking more and more. He couldn’t get that out of his head. He looked at his backpack and a drop of sweat rolled down his face. He got the papers and burnt them. He got a hose and cleaned his knife. In the next day he woke up and went downstairs to eat his breakfast. Suddenly someone knocked on the door. “FBI, open up!”- They shouted from outside.
Y8 - CLASS E - GROUP 2 - STORY 5
Mr. Lodge ran to his bedroom and moved the corpse from the bed. He unlocked his wardrobe and took out a gun. He looked out the window and shot every officer. There was a lot of blood on the ground, all the officers were dead, and he just became more guilty, what he had done and now this. He had to ran away as fast as possible, he couldnt́ be caught, he would most certainly get a death penalty. He got his most important things and ran away, he got his car keys and drove away to Mexico. On the road, the memories came to his mind again, just that image from the dead body of his mother on his bloody arms. He started feeling it again. Mr Lodge stopped his car with a thrilling will to kill. He saw a trailer parked in the middle of the street and slowly walked towards it. Mr Lodge knocked on the door, then a sweet couple answered: ‘Hello Mr, are you lost?’. They were rather gentle, however this only increased Mr Lodge will to kill. He got in the trailer and shot the two of them, but they were still alive, they weren't a normal couple. What were they? The sweet woman said: “Mr Lodge, are you trying to get to hell?” Mr Lodge was scared, why did they know his name? Everything was a confusion. He soon realised that the couple was dead and it was all from his imagination. Was that guilt? The memory of killing someone will never come out of your mind. Try not to do something you know you’ll regret later. You don’t want to feel this guilt?
Mr. Lodge
Y8 - CLASS E - GROUP II - STORY 6
The Look of Death There he was. He reached his camera and got out of the car. Robert was about to enter the front door when he realized it was locked. ‘How stupid!’, he thought, ‘A reporter trying to get in a asylum by the front door.’ He saw a wide window. It was open, so he climbed the wall and reached it fast. He was inside. Robert tried to record every little thing he could see, however it was rather dark, at this moment he remembered his camera got a special night vision function. So, he click it and saw a terrifying thing. A person was beating its face through the window multiple times, leaving blood everywhere. Then, the thick glass finally broke and the man fell all the way down to the ground. Robert went down and there was nothing. He couldn't find the corpse of the dead body. Anywhere. And the doubt remained _ Where is the dead body? And who was this person? Robert wondered about it, he wanted to know more about that unusual person. He thought it was so interesting and rather intriguing, that he wanted to search more about it. Once again, Bob climbed the wall and sneaked through the window. When he was searching for the window to see if anything strange and suspicious was happening. He saw a table. There was a letter on it, and for his surprise, it was directed to him.
In this letter it was written that he needed to close all the windows and doors and never, ever look outside again. But it was too late. Corpses were all over the streets. The town of Mikville was no longer the same. Robert was almost sleeping when someone knocked on the door. When he opened the door, he saw a child, it was a little girl. She was crying a lot, but he remembered that she could be a ‘strange girl’. She entered the house as if it was her own. Robert asked her, if everything was okay, and she answered that it wasn´t. Millie told Bob that all her family had been killed, because they had seen the thing. Robert didn´t understand, so he asked again: What it is the thing? I don't know very well, but if you see or look at it, you die! How do people die? How come? I don’t know, she said. Just don’t take a look at the thing.
Y8 - CLASS E - GROUP II - STORY 6 People ran out of food and medication for a long time, so they began to think about how to get food and medication without being killed. The idea was to cover the car windows with an old newspaper to avoid looking at the thing while driving the car. But the problem was how Robert could drive the car without looking at the road. So the smart little girl had the idea of using GPS, but couldn't help but crash the car into corpses or even other cars.
People were without food and medication for a long time, so they started thinking how to get food and medication without being killed. The idea was to cover the windows of the car with old newspaper in order to avoid looking at the thing while driving the car. But the problem was, how could Robert get to drive the car without looking at the road. So, the little smart girl had the idea of using the GPS, but they couldn’t avoid crashing the car in dead bodies or even other cars. There they went. They started driving, the wind was blowing strongly and so the newspapers started to come off. There it was, the thing was there, all around the car. They saw it, both of them and suddenly Robert started driving very fast and soon he reached a cliff, he couldn´t stop or control it. Millie threw herself out of the car and hit her head directly on ground. She had died, unfortunately. Robert survived the crash, he quickly closed his eyes and started calling for Millie. There was no answer, but he couldn’t leave the girl so he open his eyes, looking for her, but the only thing he could see was death. The fear took care of him, and Robert was caught. The thing reached his throat and gave him a deep bite. Robert was bleeding to death. ‘Don´t look at me. I am the only creature still alive...’
Y8 - CLASS E - GROUP 2 - STORY 7
Who is killing at the hospital This is a true story from something really strange that happened in the hospital I used to work. I was a young resident doctor in my first month of work, I was loving my job, I had already made some new friends, I had a good salary, everything was going fine. One day I was the only resident in the hospital on duty for the night, I was responsible for a woman patient who was not feeling well. I was about to get to her room, when I realized that the corridor was empty and the lights were blinding. I looked at her room and, for my surprise, there was no woman! I started hearing her voice and along with it another voice and another one and another one‌ I realized I was going crazy so I locked myself in the room and threw the key in the toilet. Soon, all the voices stopped and I started crying, however my tears were pure blood and seeing the blood gave me a thrilling will to kill. Why was that happening to me? What had I done? So I broke the door (I had never been so strong like that!) and started looking for people with my bloody eyes. The first floor was the ER, full of people wanting to be attended. Then, I saw a beautiful little girl, and went to talk to her. She said she had a terrible headache, but I didn't care about what she had, I just wanted to hang her to death. So I took her hand and said she could trust me. But could she? I was fearing myself and what I was capable of. My desire to kill her kept increasing.
Y8 - CLASS E - GROUP 2 - STORY 7
I told her that everything was going to be fine and I would take care of her, she followed me to the surgery room. I figured that there was the perfect place for a murder, there was so many sharp objects that I went insane. I told her to close her eyes and imagine something that made her feel good. Meanwhile, I was preparing the tragic scene, my thoughts went on and on but all I could feel at the moment was rage, I couldn’t understand where it was coming from and the reason I was feeling it, the only thing that I was sure was that I was going to kill the girl. Just before I reached her body with the scalpel, I started hearing those same voices I heard before. I suddenly couldn’t move anymore, and in that exact moment, she opened her eyes and looked at me. She was also crying blood. The feeling that I needed to kill her was getting bigger and bigger. And I thought she was feeling the same necessity. I needed to kill her before she kills me But at the same time, we were both afraid, petrified. It was a very strange situation, but that feeling was filling in my whole body, so I took the scalpel and hit her neck, she stopped crying and had a scared expression in her face as her life faded away.. When I woke up, I was just me again, in an empty scary hospital, I couldn`t understand what was going on, where was the girl? So I started searching for her, my clothes were full of blood, when a nurse entered the room and was surprised to see me that way. She asked me why I was there and I answered ‘I don’t know’.
Y8 - CLASS E - GROUP 2 - STORY 8
A ghost is born A few years ago, when I was alive, something strange but interesting happened to me. I was at my uncle's farm, playing cards at night in his basement. I remember was 13 years old, a young teenager, full of life, when all of a sudden I heard a strong noise. At first I thought it was a thunder. Then I realized it was different one. I went to check in the bathroom and everything was just fine. Then when I was coming back to the basement, I felt something different, as if someone was watching me. I turned around but saw no one, so started getting scared and felt goosebumps. I thought I was getting crazy, then I came back to the basement and continued playing cards. The noise had stopped in that evening, so I went to bed. I woke up overnight almost in the morning, but the moon was still there.
My bedroom door opened slowly and I saw a shadow coming out of the dark, but it was just my uncle. He was walking in a different way, I started calling for his name when I realized his eyes were closed, so, I took he was having other sleepwalking crisis. That was something dangerous! But, wait. My uncle started to come closer and I realized it wasn't him _ uncle Sam. It was someone similar to him, but I just knew it wasn't him. It wasn’t! Each step he took he looked more stressed out and it seemed like his bones were all breaking! It started to grow thick fur on him.I looked at the window and the full moon was still shining. Was uncle Sam a werewolf? I got so scared that I rushed to the closet and hide inside. I thought I was alone and safe, but I started hearing a different breathing near me. I looked back, and there was my ‘uncle’ Sam. I paralysed. I was pale and speechless. Suddenly, I couldn’t feel my body. I started shaking without controlling it. I quickly opened the closet door to run away, but the thing grabbed me.
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This creature was too strong _ mighty and I couldn’t escape. I yelled nonstop but apparently he didn’t care. He took me under his arms to a smash me in the middle of the dark and throw me into the spooky woods that existed near the house. I had never been there and that made me more terrified. The creature locked me in the old house, without saying or expressing anything. I didn’t know what it was about to happen that moment. The shack in the old house had no windows. I started to get breathless. Luckily, I used to practice martial arts and so I got to break the door. When I got out of the shack, my ‘uncle’ was there watching me. He started to get closer to me and he grabbed my leg. He looked at me with his big blue eyes, strange, because they used to be brown. I started to get sleepy and finally fell asleep. I don’t remember what happened next, but I woke up feeling strange and different. I was in a familiar place, but I couldn’t recognize it. I started hearing some unusual noises.
I was at the farm, I saw my family and I went there to talk to them, but they could not hear me. I realized that I had turned into a ghost myself Then, from that day on, I got to scare and haunt people at the farm I am staying… Be aware of the beast! HA HA HA!