Simile Poems 3L have been looking at how similes are used to emphasise and exaggerate descriptions. We looked at some different examples of poems and wrote our own poems inspired by what we had read.
Today I Feel Today, I feel as: Fit as a FIDDLE, Bouncy as a BALL, Sharp as a NEEDLE, Deep as a WELL, Cool as a CUCUMBER, And as healthy as a VEGETABLE, I’M SO HAPPY - I AM JUST LOST FOR WORDS. By Jay Senghera
Vampire Burn The burn in my throat is too much to bear, If I don’t feed soon, I’ll pull out my hair. The scent of sweet human wafts in the air, Should I feed, do I dare? No! I can’t, it’s sunny outside For I have rules to abide. The Volturi, our royal family, They shall come for me, If I step outside. ‘I need to feed!’ I cried, Then I layed down and sighed. Then night fell over, So I ran to Dover, Five hours later, My stomach was satisfied. I’m sorry poor dead humans, I couldn’t help myself. You were all so deliciously yummy, And now your blood’s in my tummy! Hana Dhanani 5MB
The Writer of this Poem The writer of this poem, Is as wonderful as the sea, As fresh as a daisy, As busy as a bee, As As As As
good as gold, sweet as honey, sparkling as a diamond, lively as a monkey,
As As As As
fit as a fiddle, strong as an ox, bright as a button, cunning as a fox.
The writer of this poem Is purer than a pearl, As glamorous as a film star, But not a modest girl! by Bhavan Amar