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Note: The highlighted portion below (in “Bring all necessary medications with you”) is useful information provided by Christina, but it still needs to be fact-­‐checked. (Also, my paraphrasing of what she said might have altered the meaning.) My other concern: I’m afraid that the first point of “Know Before You Go” and the sidebar might be too similar. Tonya Johnson and Ryne Steinacker 10/5/12 ELang 430R Word Count: 482

Is There a Doctor in the House? How to Meet Your Medical Needs While Traveling Every international traveler cringes at the thought of getting sick or needing to find health care in an unfamiliar place. Even if you’re not frightened by the thought of illness, you’re probably still depressed by the thought of spending a day or two in bed during your vacation. Follow the informative tips below to help you avoid illness and spend your trip the way you planned it.

Tara Walker 10/9/12 2:47 PM Comment [1]: I like this title idea. Here are a few more: • Tara Walker 10/9/12 2:45 PM Comment [2]: This sentence needs a little bit of work. It doesn’t quite connect with the opening sentence. Try replacing it with something like, “the thought of spending a day or two in bed during your vacation might take the wind out of your sails.” Tara Walker 10/9/12 2:46 PM Deleted: ing Tara Walker 10/9/12 2:46 PM Deleted: are a few Tara Walker 10/9/12 2:47 PM Deleted: that will help you Tara Walker 10/9/12 2:47 PM Deleted: to

Know Before You Go •

Tara Walker 10/9/12 2:50 PM Comment [3]: I would suggest tightening these up a little bit more. Maybe something like, “Get Familiar.”

Check out information specific to your travel destination before you arrive

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No two countries, or even regions of the same country, are identical in terms of healthcare. Take the

Tara Walker 10/9/12 6:31 PM Comment [4]: Are there other things aside from hospitals or other healthcare providers? If not, change the heading to be about providers only, and not just general info. Then you can have the sidebar focus on everything else.

time to investigate the type and availability of health care at your destination—for instance, available hospitals or clinics of repute—before you even arrive. This will prevent a mad scramble in the event of


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