Writin in N ā Manu Nui

This man will not stop snorin ! I can not sleep and I want to sleep somewhere else. I have tried all the cures in the book. It is hard work curin the snorin ! Shared Writin by the Tui Manu Group The flies tried to land on my pie! “Keep them away ” cries my mum. And she squashed them to bits until not one fly came in the house. Blake, Year 2 The baby chick was scared and he wanted another mother. He went to ox. He went to hare. It started rainin . He elt sad. The mum hu ed the chick with her win s and eathers. Shared Writin by the Kereru Manu Group The flies tried to land on my pie! “Keep them away ” cries my mum. The flies try to et mum! Jack A, Year 3 Tim had a pie shop. “I’m Tim, I have a pie shop. ” “Oh no!” said Tim. “Ma pies! Get the ma pies! Stop now, ma pies!”

Flynn, Year 2 The flies tried to land on my pie! “Keep them away ” cries my mum. The fly tried and tried to eat the pie and the flies ot squashed. Harvey, Year 2