Persuasive Essay On Ocean Exploration

Introduction Astonishingly, Did you know that we have better maps of the moon than we do of the ocean? (#7) It's true! Scientists are working to make drones to explore the deep sea. Ocean Exploration is a developing science that incorporates the use of marine biology and drone technology. Ocean Exploration technology will be an overall benefit to society because 1. exploring the ocean is easier than before and 2. ocean exploration can help with monitoring the deep sea. First Reason Paragraph First of all, ocean exploration technology has advanced much more than before in the past decade. In the past, people had to bring everything needed for scuba diving which included hundreds of pounds of gear and photographing technology. Now, all...show more content...

(#5) This is a benefit to society because it is so light whereas scuba diving equipment is hundreds of pounds. Second Reason Paragraph For one thing, ocean exploration technology benefits us with knowing what is happening. The drone can give us reports on weather and populations of ocean creatures. Because of the new technology in the drone, it can stay underwater for weeks at a time. This gives us more in depth reports and data. One example of this is, the coral reefs. With the world ignoring the problems, the reefs are dying. (#2) With the drone we can get this data. It can also look at fish population. According to a journalist, David Hambling, from Popular Mechanics, in his article 'What Drones Did For The Sky, Robot Subs Are About To Do For The Sea' He stated that, "..low–cost ROVs should give the industry greatly improved capability for monitoring beds of shellfish, fish populations, anchors and underwater infrastructure." (Hambling, 2016) Because the drones can stay underwater for weeks at a time, we have more information on what's going on. (#5) This is a benefit to society because a certain kind of fish can be dying as you are reading and we wouldn't know. With the new technology we would, seeing it brings up data daily on how everything is going under the surface. Another example of this is, weather. With the drone you can tell whether a hurricane or tsunami would be coming. It's very helpful. For Get more content

For me, learning a language is a complicated process. It is different from learning other subjects. It involves a lot of practices and follow up. When I talk about my personal experience, I would say that I have a rich experience in learning English as a second language. English was taught to me for ten years starting from grade seven till graduation from university. After graduation, I felt that I should improve my language skills. Therefore, I did a lot of efforts personally to increase my fluency. Until now I still learn the language. Indeed, learning a language takes a lifetime.

I started learning English as a second language when I was in first intermediate. I still remember my first classes and my first teachers. I remember that my teachers changed frequently in the first year but all of them have much in common. All of them used grammar translation method. They used to write bilingual lists of words on board, then we, as students, were asked to copy these lists and memorize them by heart. All teaching concentrated on reading and writing skills, but there were no activities concentrating on speaking or listening. In addition, grammar rules were taught in that stage of learning the language as mathematics equations, and we were asked to memorize the rules as we...show more content...

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