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European Citizenship Creative Writing: An Ideal World

Probably everyone has thought about an ideal world where all the values are respected. As in our planet it is hard to find an ideal world, we decided to go to a new planet “ELOVES”. We believe that on that planet people will change their approach to life, making it happier. There the inhabitants are physically similar to humans but their moral is much more advanced. Aliens on this planet will try to attract as many people as possible to live there. Elovians will try to talk to humans to convince them to change in order to reach a better and more meaningful life. Elovians will use a really strange but useful way to attract people from the Earth. They will use a mind machine through which they will be able to enter in people’s dreams. While someone is sleeping, Elovians send signals to their minds in order to reach people’s dreams. These signals are the key to open people’s minds. They receive messages from idols and that is how they will change their minds and values.


Story 1


Team 1 in Bulgaria (Chrysi (GR), Agne (LT), Zofia (Pl), Pavel (BG), Mia (BG), Iva (BG), Alexandra (BG))


In the dreams people only see the beautiful side of ELOVES, the nice people and the amazing scenery. It once used to be like that until Ares, the evil emperor took over. He built a huge black castle in the middle of the capital Elovia. He built an evil machine that changes people’s minds while they sleep. He convinced his subjects that the people had stolen a holy stone but actually Emperor Ares is blood-thirsty and wants to enslave the humans and rule planet Earth. He started making people from Earth evil and made them destroy important artifacts. Sometime later he gathered his army and marched on to the Earth‌


Team 1 in Slovakia (Francisco (PT), Nikodem (PL), Jakub (Pl), Jakub (Sl), Patrick (Sl), Hanka (Sl), Adrian (Sl)

When the Emperor army came to the Earth, antiemperor rebels gathered people and created antiemperor dictatorship army. When the emperor heard about the rebels, he built a giant Death Star to destroy all the rebels. But when the bad emperor was in the Death Star, it exploded due to Death Star software glitch. The emperor probably died but nobody could find a wreck of his starship.


Team 1 in Lithuania: Zofia (PL), Lucia (SL), Oksana (LT), Maksim (LT), Jogintas (LT)

When Giant Death Star exploded, people on Earth were really happy that their place of life wasn‘t destroyed. Their dreams were safe. But people knew that not everything was okey. Nobody knew what happened to the aliens who were on the galactic ship. One guy of the


humans wanted to know the truth. He went on a long and dangerous journey to find the wreck. The journey ended with success. Ares did survive the explosion, came back to the planet and rebuilt his army. Then he went to the Earth to destroy it. However, people had thought about that, so they were evacuated to ELOVE planet. There, they rebuilt the ELOVES planet by their rules. Now everyone was equal, respectful, happy and independent.


Story 2


Team 2 in Bulgaria (Ioannis (GR), Sniegoule (LT), Katarzyna (PL), Asen (BG), Maria G. (BG), Nia (BG), Anna (BG)

10 years later people had already abandoned planet Earth. They didn’t work for money but for their own good, so they didn’t have any conflicts or problems. Generally life was better and happier than it had ever been. It was really


the Ideal world. All Earth’s blessings were combined in one. There were tropical forests, nice oceans (and lots of surfers). On the other hand, there were big, steep mountains where people could go skiing. People loved each other, there were no wars. Instead of going to Hell, you were exported to a war zone, which was a virtual reality. Every day people went to work and when they got back in the evening, they used the mind machine. After using the machine, their dreams came true. People were forbidden to use cars, therefore there was no pollution at all. In their free time they used all the blessings of the new world. They went surfing, skiing, exploring etc. But then this happened‌


Team 2 in Slovakia – Sarah (SL), Sofia (SL), Katka (SL), Marek (SL), Dalibor (SL), Miguel (PT), Mikolaj (PL), Ugne (LT), Evgenia (GR)Anna (BG)

One day everyone was getting back from their jobs, and a usual boy, named Magnus, used the machine. He was only 14 years old, he was only a child, but a child that dreamed to be a professional surfer. While he was using the


machine, he wished to have a huge wave to surf and then become the best surfer in the whole Universe. But that huge wave was getting bigger and bigger, closer and closer and everyone in Asia was going to die. This was in all the news around the globe. Magnus was regretting as he hadn’t asked for that but everyone understood and forgave him. On the other hand, many people were going to die. Everyone wanted to help so they all used the machine at the same time and wished that the wave turned into candy. Union makes strength. So with the help of everybody they could save an entire region of the world.


Team 2 in Lithuania: Fulvia (IT), Sniegoule(LT), Ugne (LT), Gabriele (LT), Lara (PT), Joana (PT)

Suddenly the boy Marek wakes up and realizes that it was all a dream and his dream is a sign which has to come true. Marek tells his friends about the dream and together they make a conclusion: Marek is trying to explain how we


can integrate “ELOVES� world into real world/reality, how values are very important to us: love, respect, morality, responsibility, freedom, flexibility, understanding, solidarity. The world is made of our actions and our wishes!


Story 3


Team 3 in Bulgaria (Marta (It), Jakub (SL), Anna (PT), Teodora G. (BG), Bojidar (BG), Maria Ch. (BG),

When humans arrived to this planet after 3000 years, they were surprised by the nice atmosphere and the kindness of the Elovians. There is a child called Riva, who has been influenced a lot by the bad attitudes of his


parents and friends, so he’s one of the rudest children on the Earth. After he arrived, he met an Elovian girl who is so beautiful that even if Riva didn’t want to admit it, he fell in love with her. But he was so bad that the girl didn’t want to become his friend. Riva needed help and the only way to get it was trying to change. He met another guy from Eloves and they became very close friends. This guy is called James. He had used his dad’s machine to change Riva’s ideas and to let him fall in love with the girl. Is the machine going to work? TO BE CONTINUED.


Team 3 in Slovakia – Francesca (IT), Cosette (IT), Dalila (IT), Simona (SL), Viki (SL), Oksana (LT), Nela (SL)

One day the boy decided to try out the machine but he was scared about the results so he asked his friend James to go with him. The two guys went to find the girl and they met her while she


was picking some flowers. Riva thought that this was a great moment to try the machine because she was distracted. The guys switched on the machine but the results were unexpected because the girl didn’t fall in love with Riva but with his friend. After that Riva was so angry that his friend decided to make the girl fall in love with Riva.


Team 3 in Lithuania: Agne (LT), Alessandra (IT), Simona (SK), Mikolaj (PL), Lefteris(GR)

James was a really good friend of Riva. He knew that Riva was in love with the beautiful girl so he decided to help. Every morning they started to do sports: running and playing volleyball. Riva started looking more fit and more attractive. Every day James told Riva to read books and to do homework.


Riva became more educated and wiser. Every evening James was teaching Riva good manners. So Riva became the opposite of his bad self and attitude, compared to the beginning of his life on the Eloves planet. Slowly Riva started to be a better person. So they tried the machine again but before they switched it on, Riva started actually falling in love with this girl, so he asked her name. Her name was Hope. After he heard her name, he actually found his hope. They started a new conversation. Hope was impressed how smart and intelligent Riva was. After some hours talking to Hope, Riva understood that if they like each other, they don‘t need a machine for it. Little by little they became a beautiful couple. After some years they became parents that had a half elovian half human baby. After 3000 years more the planet was called not „Eloves“ but „Rope“. Why Rope? Read the story again. (Rope because Riva + Hope = <3)


Team 4 in Bulgaria (Giulia (IT), Benjamin (SL), Ines (PT), Alexander (BG), Sofia (BG), Valeria (BG), Teodora M. (BG))

Elovians want people to come to their planet because they want to save them. On the Eloves everyone respects the habitats and the environment isnâ&#x20AC;&#x2122;t polluted. They want to make the life happier. The Elovians are very clever and they have a high-level technology. In the city you can find flying cars and big


televisions on the streets that show peopleâ&#x20AC;&#x2122;s life and news. There are many gardens and parks that are full of trees, animals and flowers. The streets are crowded but people donâ&#x20AC;&#x2122;t make noise. The social life is active in the city and there are many places where people could have fun. People should go to the Eloves because life there is more peaceful and happier than on our planet.


Team 4 in Slovakia â&#x20AC;&#x201C; Deni (SL), Nina (SL), Sara (SL), Mia (BG), Maria (BG), Maria (GR), Ann (IT)

But their dream machine broke down and started sending the wrong signals to the people. Elovians sent the ideas to their dreams and in the dreams people saw Elovians convincing them that Eloveâ&#x20AC;&#x2122;s planet was going to explode.


Then they woke up. People started to be afraid to stay on their planet. People wanted to go back to the Earth. But Elovians wanted them to stay and help them stop the explosion. So they started fighting.


Team 4 in Lithuania: Beatrice (IT), Lazar (BG), Vasil (BG), Viktoria (GR), Liutauras (LT)

While Elovians and humans were fighting, someone made a gas bomb. The gas had the power to make the fighters of the opposite army fall asleep. This person gave the bomb to the


Elovians because he wanted to make the humans stay on their planet. Elovians threw this bomb and everyone fell asleep. While humans were sleeping, a genius from the Elovian planet repaired the machine and it started to send the right signals again and made humans dream about good values and how to make their planet like Eloves. When humans wake up, they have headache and apologise to Elovians. Then they return to Earthand make our planet the best place to live. P.S. There is a big party with DJ PENGUIN.


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