This Week You Continue Writing Your Journal Entries This Journal Is
This week, you continue writing your journal entries. This journal is designed to give you practice in academic writing, which is very different from the personal essay writing that you have been practicing. Academic writing entails making a point and supporting that point with information from a reputable source. There are three ways to support a point with information from a source: quoting, paraphrasing, or summarizing. This week, you will practice summarizing a source and citing that source in your journal entry.
Please be sure to read and review the “Example Journal Entry – Summarizing” (Links to an external site.) which shows how summaries can be integrated. Note: The journal assignment should not be confused with a personal journal. This activity requires organization, effective stylistics and grammar, and proper source incorporation. It is not a free-writing or reflective writing exercise.
The personal essay we have read this week, “Consider the Lobster” (Links to an external site.), uses narrative and/or descriptive elements (sections 6.3 and 6.4 in Essentials of College Writing), and each has a clear purpose.
Write about one of the essays assigned in this week’s readings. In 250 to 500 words:
- State the purpose of the essay.
- Describe one descriptive writing pattern being used in the essay (refer to section 6.4 in Essentials of College Writing).
- Explain why you think that descriptive writing pattern is used well by the writer. Incorporate a summary from the essay and properly cite the essay.
- Explain how you plan to use the same descriptive writing pattern in your personal essay.
Paper For Above instruction
The essay "Consider the Lobster" by David Foster Wallace explores the morality and ethics surrounding the practice of boiling lobsters alive for human consumption. The primary purpose of Wallace’s essay is to provoke readers to consider the ethical implications of their dietary choices, especially as they relate to animal suffering and rights. Through detailed descriptions and thought-provoking questions, Wallace challenges readers to reflect on whether culinary tradition should override concerns for animal welfare.
Within the essay, Wallace employs a descriptive writing pattern known as sensory detail to vividly convey the experience of cooking lobsters. He describes the physical sensations and the environment surrounding the boiling process, including the sounds, smells, and visual cues. For example, Wallace details the "hard, shell-like bodies" of lobsters and the "horrific shrieks" they emit when placed in boiling water. This pattern heightens the emotional impact of the narrative, evoking empathy and discomfort in the reader.
Wallace’s use of sensory details is particularly effective because it immerses the reader in the scene, allowing them to viscerally understand the intensity of the lobster’s pain. The detailed description of the boiling water’s heat, the lobster’s reaction, and the environment surrounding the cooking process all contribute to making the scene both tangible and unsettling. This descriptive pattern draws the reader into an ethical contemplation that is difficult to ignore, thereby fulfilling Wallace's purpose of encouraging moral reflection.
I plan to incorporate this use of sensory detail in my personal essay by vividly describing scenes or emotional states that are central to my narrative. For instance, if I write about a significant personal experience, I will include detailed descriptions of sights, sounds, and sensations to help the reader feel immersed in the moment. By doing so, I aim to make my writing more engaging and emotionally resonant, similar to how Wallace’s detailed sensory descriptions strengthen his ethical argument.
In conclusion, Wallace’s strategic use of sensory detail in “Consider the Lobster” effectively enhances the moral questions posed in the essay. This descriptive writing pattern not only creates vivid imagery but also engages readers’ emotions, making complex ethical issues more relatable and impactful. Employing this pattern in my own writing will help me craft more compelling and immersive narratives that evoke a visceral response from my audience.
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