Add comma before “and leadership”
add a comma after “Charity”
remove the comma after “school”
ADD “In 1938, Charity would graduate from Wilberforce receiving a Bachelor of Arts degree.”
change quote: “no mail, LOW morale”
space after “duty”
Add comma after “Colonel”
Change end of first sentence to “…Eight, that she was promoted again on December 26th, 1945.
remove comma after “earley”
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