INT. KITCHEN – JENNY'S PARENTS' HOUSE
DANA (drunk)
BETTE We just can't stop looking at her.
Woo!
Tina covers Angie back up. Shane and Carmen walk over.
Shane walks up, laughing. Alice is laughing as well. SHANE Wow, Dana, impressive.
SHANE Look, it's the responsible section! CARMEN Hello mommas, anyone need anything?
JENNY Out for a little while.
Dana burps. ALICE Come on let's walk it off.
The group laughs. BETTE, TINA AND YOUNG LESBIAN COUPLE No.
DANA No, I want to do it again! I am the champion! ALICE (pulling Dana's arm) Dane, you're gonna get sick.
CARMEN I'm gonna put out more food. Shane points to a group of people doing shots and being rowdy.
DANA No, Alice cut it out. Alice walks away. Shane follows, but her phone rings. She answers it.
SHANE I'm going to go see what that mess is about.
Jenny walks through the house towards the front door. Her mom is in the kitchen, alone now. SANDY Where are you going?
SANDY Your father wants you to go to temple with him. It's Paul Daniel's birthday and they are having a get together for him JENNY I don't want to. SANDY Jenny, please, you're not a child. JENNY I know, that's why I'm going out. Jenny leaves.
Shane and Carmen walk away. INT. SHANE AND CARMEN'S KITCHEN – MOMENTS LATER
SHANE Hello? Hi Jenny! Thank you! We miss you! I can't really hear you. Can I call you back in a little while? Okay, bye. INT. JENNY'S ROOM – JENNY'S PARENTS' HOUSE
PARTY GOER 3, 2, 1, go! A group of people drop shots into their beers and start chugging. Dana is playing and Alice is standing next to her, but not chugging. People are cheering and yelling. Dana slams her beer down first.
Jenny hangs up the phone. We hear yelling from outside her door. Jenny picks up her purse and laptop bag and walks out.
COMMENTS ON THE WINNING SCENE #6
INT. SHANE AND CARMEN'S HALLWAY, NEAR THE BATHROOM – SAME NIGHT Alice is waiting in line for the bathroom. Shane walks up. SHANE Hey, you okay? ALICE Yeah, I'm fine. I just have to pee.
Game Over
"This is tight." - angelsbitch "Smile, you made it." - Meow12
"Ok, Dana is HOT... and a funny drunk. I am so over Jenny's drama; and I love Bette and Tina-The MOMMIES!!! Alice is so genuine with Dana." - snl23 "Great scene! Carmen couldn't be any sexier!!!!" - gale26
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