AUDIENCE FEEDBACK Magazine advert
The quotes from famous magazines make it more believable and real. It ties in with the typical conventions of a magazine advert.
I like how the background image is the same as the Digipak front cover as it allows the audience to link the two together easily.
I would maybe change the page scale to portrait as it may allow you to fit in more information on the page.
I would maybe include some forms of social media to highlight how you are changing with the times and encouraging technological convergence.
The institutional details are quite hard to read as their very small and also the font makes it unclear.
The font looks effective as its feminine and links with the picture well and makes the poster look less harsh
The image across the whole background makes the writing unclear. You could possibly change the layout of the poster, or change the opacity of the photo.
The website in the corner stands out well against the background in black and also highlights how you have thought about the different institutional things to include on the page.
The release date was a good idea and reinforces that the poster is trying to promote the new release of the CD.
The drop shadow on the text makes it look professional and also makes it easier for the writing to be read against the background.
I think the photo distracts too much away from the writing, so I would change the layout to separate the two and make it easier to read.
The stars underneath the reviews makes it quick and easy for people to realise that its a good album and has had good reviews so far.
I think the thin white border around the edge is subtle but effective as it ties everything together on the page.