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Robert Staines "Sea Kelp and Ciggarettes" Draft 1 - Date Shot No. Location 1

Shot Type

School Hall

CU

Angle Movement High angle

Pan

LS

straight

3 School Hall

MS

straight

4 Bedroom

LS

High angle

6 Bedroom

CU

straight

7 Bedroom

MS

straight

8 Bedroom

CU

straight

9 Bedroom

CU

straight static

10 School Hall

MS

straight static

11 School Hall

MS

straight static

CU

Description of Action

3 seconds

Robert S. Playing opening piano keys Pan to Robert S. Playing piano and singing Robert S. Playing piano and singing

N./A

"Sea kelp and Pan 2seconds ciggarettes" 2 "Track marks in her Pan and zoom seconds arm" 3 static "red stripes" seconds 3 static "lost her head" seconds 5 static "Candy braclet" seconds 4 "Walks around with static seconds glass"

2 School Hall

12 Bedroom

Length Lyric

straight static

13 Bedroom

CU

straight static

14 School Hall

ECU

straight static

15 School Hall

MS

straight static

16 School Hall

LS

straight static

17 Bedroom

ECU

straight static

2 seconds 4 seconds 4 seconds 2 seconds 4 seconds 4 seconds 3 seconds 3 seconds 4 seconds 3 seconds 3 seconds 3 seconds

"says it over"

Actors

Equipment

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita laying on bed

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder

Brigta turns to the camera and blinks slowly

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita getting up out of bed

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita's feet touching magazine Brigita K. ad on floor. Brigita walks away from magazines, camera focuses in on Brigita K. magazine ad

HD Camcorder and tripod HD Camcorder and tripod

"man who dying to meet her"

Robert playing piano

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Pinao playing

Article about anorexia or bulimia

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

"Likes to wear when heads in a mess"

Brigita grabbing her make-up

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

"no-one wants as a wife"

Brigitas face as she wipes off old running mascara Roberts fingers as he continues playing piano Robert playing the piano surrounded by stage lights Robert playing the piano surrounded by stage lights

"call cat"

Brigita putting on lipstick

"makes her feel" "Loooveeee" "everyone wants"

18 Bedroom

OSS

straight Zoom out

"camp fire"

19 Bedroom

CU

straight static

20 Bedroom

MS

straight static

21 Bedroom

LS

straight static

5 seconds

"don't make her bed"

22 Bedroom

MS

straight

3 seconds

"kill all demons"

"bad soul" "portion of chips"

Brigita looking in the mirror at her body Brigita's face becomes sad and she looks emotional Brigita grabbing baggy jacket from chair Brigita putting on jacket and walking away from the chair where laptop is. Match on action as Brigita walks away from the chair the shot jumps to being closer to the laptop.


23 Bedroom

ECU

straight static

4 seconds

24 School Hall

CU

straight static

3 seconds

25 School Hall

MS

straight static

26 School Hall

CU

straight static

27 School Hall

CU

straight static

28 School Hall

BEV

straight static

29 Bedroom

CU

straight Pan

30 Bedroom

MS

straight tilt

31 Bedroom

MS

straight tilt

32 Bedroom

LS

straight

33 School Hall

MS

straight zoom out

34 kitchen

ms

straight static

35 School Hall

CU

straight static

36 kitchen

CU

straight static

37 School Hall

ECU

straight static

38 kitchen

ECU

straight static

zoom and track

3 seconds 2 seconds 3 seconds 2 seconds 2 seconds 3 seconds 4 seconds 3 seconds 3 seconds 2 seconds 3 seconds 2 seconds 2 seconds 2 seconds

"scare out all monsters"

"Walks around with glass"

Laptop screen on a social networking site where the girls been left messages on a photo Brigita K. saying things like "ur so ugly" and "fat cow" Close up of an article in a magazine ad near the piano of Robert S. statistics Robert playing piano and singing

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

"man who""

Roberts feet at the levers on the bottom of piano

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

"dying to meet her"

Robert's face singing

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Piano

Robert falling back to piano to play Robert S. keys with more energy.

HD Camcorder and tripod

"likes to wear"

Brigita grabbing Sea Kelp bottle

HD Camcorder and tripod

"when her heads in a mess"

tilt from face to Brigita pouring Brigita K. tablets in her hand Tilt from pills to face of Brigita Brigita K. contemplating to take the pills Zoom into Brigita taking pills and then tracking her as she walks out Brigita K. of the room.

"makes her feel" "chance in lifee"

HD Camcorder and tripod HD Camcorder and tripod HD Camcorder and tripod

Robert playing piano

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Piano

Brigita pushing plate of food away Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Piano

Robert playing piano

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Piano

Brigita pushing plate of food away Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Piano

Robert playing piano

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Piano

Brigita pushing plate of food away Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

LS

straight

tracking of Brigita

6 seconds

Piano

40 brick lane

OSS

straight

tracking of Brigita

6 seconds

"Walks around with glass"

41 School Hall

MS

straight/ 180 degree high rotation angle.

3 seconds

"Likes to wear when heads in a mess"

42 School Hall

LS

straight static

"makes her feel like shes got a change in"

43 School Hall

MS

straight\ static

"love"

44 School Hall

CU

straight static

4 seconds 3 seconds 2 seconds 3 seconds

straight static

Brigita K.

"Lovee"

39 brick lane

LS

HD Camcorder and tripod

"says it over"

Brigita walking down the street past shops with models in them, she holds her stomache. Brigita rubbing her hands over the stomache. She walks straight into camera. Zoom out of darkness to Robert on piano, titlt over his back to a high angle Robert playing the piano surrounded by stage lights

45 School Hall

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Robert singing

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

"love"

Roberts face singing

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Piano

Robert continuing to play piano surrounded by stage lights

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod


46 brick lane

CU

straight static

47 brick lane

MS

straight static

48 brick lane

CU

straight static

49 brick lane

ECU

straight static

50 School Hall

MS

straight static

51 School Hall

CU

straight static

52 School Hall

ECU

straight Zoom

53 School Hall

LS

straight Pan

54 School Hall

LS

straight Pan

55 study room

MS

straight Pan

56 study room

MS

straight Pan

57 study room

CU

straight static

58 study room

CU/MS

straight tilt

59 study room

OSS

straight static

60 study room

CU

straight static

61 study room

LS

straight static

62 study room

MS

straight static

63 study room

MS

straight static

64 School Hall

CU

straight static

65 School Hall

LS

180 degree straight rotation

66 School Hall

MS

straight low angle

67 School Hall

LS

straight static

68 School Hall

MS

straight static

69 School Hall

CU/MS

straight static

70 School Hall

ECU

straight static

3 seconds 2 seconds 4 seconds 2 seconds 3 seconds 2 seconds 2 seconds 4 seconds 4 seconds 2 seconds 2 seconds 2 seconds 3 seconds 3 seconds 2 seconds 4 seconds 3 seconds 4 seconds 3 seconds 4 seconds 3 seconds 2 seconds 3 seconds 3 seconds 2 seconds

"walks around"

Brigita's phone receiving a text from Robert

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

"glass slipper"

Brigita glancing at her phone

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

"says it over"

Brigita opens text message that asks if she wants to meet up, he drops the word "beautiful" in the message.

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

"to meet her"

Brigita deletes the message

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Piano

Robert playing the piano with his head downwards

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

"in a visable"

Roberts fingers on the keys

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

"wedding dress"

Roberts eyes closing

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

"Likes to wear when heads in a mess" "makes her feel like shes got a change in"

Pan to the right away from Robert into a transition Transition from Robert to Brigita in study room. Laughter from group who have thrown a paper ball Brigita is hit with paper ball on the back of her head.

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K. and extras

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K. and extras

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K. and extras

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K. and extras

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K. and extras

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K. and extras

HD Camcorder and tripod

"Lovee" "Loveee" "Lovee"

Brigita reaching for paper ball. Brigita begins folding out the paper ball,tilt to see her sad expression Note has "Cow goes moo bitch!" written inside. Girls laughing together.

Brigita K. and extras

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita gets out of seat and storms Brigita K. and extras out.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K. and extras

HD Camcorder and tripod

Pan of Brigita walking out of study Brigita K. and extras room

HD Camcorder and tripod

Robert playing his piano

HD Camcorder and tripod

Robert S.

180 degree rotation around Robert Robert S. playing the piano Robert playing piano, magazine Robert S. ads in foreground

HD Camcorder and Steadicam

All the magazines on the floor

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Robert playing piano and singing

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Robert playing piano and singing

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Roberts face as he plays beginning to smile

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

HD Camcorder and tripod


71 School Hall

LS

straight Pan

72 girls toilets

MS

straight static

73 girls toilets

BEV

straight static

74 girls toilets

MS

straight static

75 girls toilets

CU

straight static

76 girls toilets

CU

straight static

77 girls toilets

MS

straight static

78 girls toilets

OSS

straight static

79 girls toilets

MS

straight static

80 girls toilets

CU

straight static

81 girls toilets

MS

straight pan

82 girls toilets

CU

straight static

83 girls toilets

CU

straight tilt

84 girls toilets

CU

straight static

85 girls toilets

MS

straight Pan

86 girls toilets

MS

straight static

87 girls toilets

MS

straight static

88 School Hall

MS

straight

89 girls toilets

MS

straight tilt

90 School Hall

MS

straight

school hallways

LS

92 School Hall

MS

straight static

school hallways

MS

straight

CU/MS

straight static

MS

straight

91

93

94 School Hall 95

school hallways

360 degree rotation

360 degree rotation tracking of straight Brigita

tracking of Brigita

tracking of Brigita

3 seconds 3 seconds 3 seconds 7 seconds 2 seconds 3 seconds 3 seconds 3 seconds 2 seconds 2 seconds 3 seconds 4 seconds 4 seconds 3 seconds 4 seconds 3 seconds 4 seconds 3 seconds 4 seconds 3 seconds 3 seconds 2 seconds 3 seconds 2 seconds 3 seconds

Pan from Robert playing piano and singing into a transition fade.

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita opens door of the cubicle

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita sits down on toilet seat crying Brigita crying and wiping away tears Bottle of sea kelp in her hands.

Brigita empties sea kelp pills into Brigita K. her palm Begins looks down at the pills with Brigita K. concentration on her face

HD Camcorder and tripod HD Camcorder and tripod

phone buzzing on her lap

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

She turns to her phone.

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Screen reveals it's a text from Robert She gives a slight smile and out of frame presses a button Text saying "Meet me in the hall beautiful x" Brigita slowly raises her head with a smile Brigita wipes away her tears Brigita walks out of toilet cubicle towards mirror Looking in the mirror she says to herself "I'm beautiful" She looks towards the door and gives herself a little chuckle of happiness Robert playing piano and singing with more energy Brigita walks out of bathroom, tilt down to see sea kelp tablets in the bin. Robert playing piano and singing with more energy Brigita running through the school hallways Robert playing piano

Brigita running through the school Brigita K. hallways Robert playing piano and singing Robert S. with more energy Brigita running through the school Brigita K. hallways

HD Camcorder and tripod HD Camcorder and tripod HD Camcorder and tripod


96 School Hall

CU

straight static

97 School Hall

MS

straight static

98 School Hall

CU/OSS

straight static

99 School Hall

CU

straight static

100 School Hall

CU

straight static

2 seconds 3 seconds 2 seconds 6 seconds 6 seconds

Robert playing piano and singing with more energy

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita opening door to hall

Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Robert playing piano and singing with more energy

Robert S.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Robert smiling at Brigita

Robert S. and Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Brigita smiling at Robert

Robert S. and Brigita K.

HD Camcorder and tripod

Shooting script  

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