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Taylor: 1) What am I missing? I agree with your peer reviewer that you should add another example or two of "scandals" to support the scholarly research you have done. It is a good approach. I wonder if you provided one from "each type" or social media? Is there a twitter one... and or a facebook one? Or maybe a tabloid? 2) It is organized? I think you have a clear set of organization, and your thesis definitely connects to your paragraphs At times, you may need to either add additional sources or find additional quotes within the sources you currently have. That will help you clarify your organizational pattern. Molly E. Daniel PhD Student & TA Rhetoric and Composition Florida State University

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