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ideas A pattern that fits in my life Who: Cousin(2years old) & Me What: A walk outside in the rain Where: outside of my grandma house(India) Why: For fun Setting: Outside in the rain Onomatopoeia Lead

12/6/12 2:24 PM


Walk in the Rain

12/6/12 2:24 PM

“It’s raining!” I mumbled. “Lets go outside!” yelled my little cousin who was six years old. “Me too, me too.” pleaded my baby cousin. “Fine.” I scowled with a sigh. “Can we get ice cream to!” remarked my six year old cousin. “NO!” I shouted . “Its so cold and you want an ice cream? We are not going to buy an ice cream, but we can see what we will get on the way.” At the same time I didn’t want to spend my money but I guess if I spent a little would be fine. So we went outside and met some of my cousin friends on the way we asked them if they would like to come but the said they have to go somewhere. So we went along the road we past by a lot of ice cream carts I guess my cousin was just staring at them, ”can we ice cream he asked again.” NO!” I remarked. After a some time he stopped asking me.

I was enjoying the rain so much, I could feel the drops of rain touch me I felt so relaxed and for the first time I felt the joy of the rain. I was lost in my own world full of happiness until “whhhh!” A sound of crying came to my ear, that exact moment I knew went wrong I opened my eyes and I saw my baby cousin on the ground. “What happened !” I asked in fright,

I knew if anything happened I would be in trouble even if I did not do it! What do I do, What


do I do? And out of no where I yelled at my six year old & he started crying well that made it even worse I put my hand in my pocket and I felt something hard I had a couple of candies in my pocket that made me have a idea I handed a candy to my cousin and he stopped that didn’t really work for my baby cousin.

So I picked her up and stared to spin her around it always work but not this time. So I made same exact face has her and it just took three seconds for her to crack up with a laugh and we all started to walk once again I felt the breeze blowing my hair and the rain drops on my skin. What a nice day I mumbled in my head but I guess it had been one hour or two because Mr. Banana head crack up REVA! REVA! What? I’m right next to you, you do not to yell I yelled I am telling you yelled at me “Oh no you are not”. “Yes I am” he cried as he stuck his tongue out at me “Really BOB!” “I am not BOB you are BOB” he crack up laughing but I did not find it that funny! “Well BOB you might have eaten a little to much sweets because you look fat!”


So it was Bob’s walk in the rain. After a while the rain stopped and we went home soaked we all took. We all took a hot water shower. Hey said Mr. Banana head well my six year old cousin “We did not have something to eat!” “Well we are going to have something to drink” I said What? “Milk I hate milk!’ remarked my six year old cousin “Well I making hot chocolate if you do not want it that is your Problem.” I yelled. All of us were in our blankets watching T.V and drinking hot chocolate Happily.

BOB!

I will always remember this moment it was not the best ,but one that always made me remember the funny names we use to call each other and we still do!

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12/6/12 2:24 PM


12/6/12 2:24 PM

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