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FINAL PRESENTATION FEEDBACK FURTHER DEVELOPMENT Overall, the final presentation went well and the feedback given were constructive for the group if there was a chance to further develop our scheme. The presentation of the other groups gave us many new ideas on how we can improve on our design and concept. The designs of other groups also gave me many new insights from learning from each other. The panel liked the idea of the blurred headlights which represents the lines and density in our model. The physical model was nice as it shows the unintentional bending of wires which the panel liked. The use of materials were a good selection as it shows a contrast between the two materials and the presentation was good. If the scheme could be improved, there could be a variation in the density used and more layers could be introduced. The idea of the australian livestock fence was too general as it is located all around australia, not only the site. The model tend to look like an installation placed on a garden or nature instead.

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Final Journal Air12s2 Michelle Lee  

Design Journal

Final Journal Air12s2 Michelle Lee  

Design Journal

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