Reflection on Final Version I'm really happy with outcome of this paper, and I made some grammatical errors in my first draft that I fixed up in the newer version along with some added descriptive details in the second story titled Superior because I felt that was the story that was lacking the most in details. I do admit it is my smallest story but I think the changes I added in there are enough to make the reader see what I saw what happened in during that day. Other than that, I think I wrote a strong paper that shows people times in my life that are significant to me, but without telling it a story kind of way. I'm also glad to see that I wrote very descriptive stories, because that is what I was worried about from the beginning, and at the same time I had to make it snapshotty as well. So the focus was to make it really descriptive whenever a snapshot occurred so the reader could follow along without getting lost. Of course while I was trying to do that, some grammatical mistakes just slip past me and get onto my draft, but I corrected all if not, most of them from my paper. Since I really feel confident about this paper, I might make this my multimodal project which will be up shortly. I have lots of pictures that I could actually implement into my project, and theyâ€™ll really bring out the snapshot in this paper. I'm going to try my best to add some videos, but we'll see how that goes. Other than that, I have tons of ideas to tell this paper differently than just reading it.