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- This picture has profound sensemaybe the artist had a conflict with the nature during he had been drawing it. - I have a profound cut on my left arm. - Once upon a time the fat angry dwarf was living in the profound cave. - The shoping was worthless, I haven't bought anything. - It is worthless to force me to study bible (rofl) - The animals don't have the fith's leg becauseit is worthless. - If you have futile things at home it seemsbetter to rubbish them. - My alarm clock is futile I don't hear it. - It is futile to discussthe movie until you haven't watched it.

- This picture has profound meaning. Maybe the artist had a conflict with the nature during while he had been drawing it. •

The blue words is either I changed the vocabulary or added a word.

The red marks are to be taken off.

“with the nature” does not sound right. I think, it is only when its noun; like the cat, the door. Like an object.

- I have a profound cut on my left arm. - Once upon a time, the fat angry dwarf was living in the a profound cave. - The Shopping was worthless. I haven't bought anything. - It is worthless to force me to study the Bible. •

Julia your funny )))) It is good to learn about the Bible

I think everything that you write with the Bible, the “the” has to be in front.

And the Bible should always be capitalized.

- The animals don't have a fifth's leg becauseit is worthless. •

I do not know why “a” should be in front the fifth. It sounds good ))))))

‘s is a possessive. A fifth can not have a leg DDDDDBut the animal’s leg, yah )))


- If you have futile things at home, it seemsbetter to rubbish throw them. •

Rubbish is more like another word for a waste object. Rubbish is what you throw away. “You should throw that rubbish furniture away.”

- My alarm clock is futile. I don't hear it. •

There has to be a period at the middle.

- It is futile to discussthe movie until you haven't watched it. •

This sentence is explaining this is worthless not talk about it if the person has not seen the movie. But you wrote “until” so there cannot be a negative and negative. There has to be a negative, until, positive.

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