Page 1

FEEDBACK ON RUBEN’S MONOLOGUE: “A PERFECT DAY IN SANTIAGO” http://vocaroo.com/i/s15mS8ev9Sn7 ADECUACIÓN: 2.5 Very good! All the points were covered with very relevant information. COHERENCIA E COHESIÓN: 2.5 Your monologue was well-structured. Ideas were well-organized and it was very easy to follow. Very good use of connectors to sequence plans, like: after that, afterwards, later… CORRECCIÓN: 2.25 You are very accurate. I have only detected two minor mistakes (mistake in red, correction in blue: Visit the Cathedral is free Visits to the cathedral are free/ Visiting the cathedral is free Franco street is full of restaurants where eat or drink something Franco street is full of restaurants where to eat or drink something/ where you can eat or drink something FLUIDEZ, PRONUNCIA E ENTONACIÓN: 1.75 Fluency: Ok for the level Pronunciation:  

Try to pronounce /t/ and /d/ as alveolar consonants. Mispronounced words: cathedral /ka’θ i:drǝl/, world /w3:ld/, months /m˄nθs/, placed /pleisd/, century /’sentri/, included (in’kludid/

Intonation: A bit flat, it should be a little bit more spontaneous. You can improve it paying attention to the stress and rhythm: stress important words and expressions and mark clearly the separation of ideas with a pause. RIQUEZA: 2.5 Very rich. Good use of vocabulary and structures related to places in a city and the expression of plans. TOTAL SCORE: 11.5/12.5

Ruben's monologue  

A perfect day in Santiago

Read more
Read more
Similar to
Popular now
Just for you