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Learning Aims:

Writing

1.Finish a composition part by part

an

2.Be cooperative in the Group Competition 3.Enjoy some sentences written by peers

Improve writing skills


Warming up

Sentence of the Week

你给了我个惊喜 You gave me a pleasant surprise. 1.__________________________________

What a pleasant surprise you gave me! 2.__________________________________ It is you who gave me a pleasant surprise. 3.__________________________________ What you gave me is a pleasant surprise. 4.__________________________________


假设你是李华,你的美国朋友 Tom 上个月来到 北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生 英语演讲比赛( speech contest ),你在资料搜 集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下 要点给 Tom 写一封电子邮件: 1. 询问 Tom 的生活和学习情况; 2. 谈谈你的困难并请 Tom 帮忙; 3. 告诉 Tom 你打算赛后去看他。 an e-mail to Tom Style : _________________ Person :I _________________ Li Hua Tense :the _______________________________ past/present/future tense Four Main point : ___________________


1. 你的美国朋友 Tom 上个月来到北京学习。询 问 Tom 的生活和学习情况; 你上个月来到北京学习。现在的生活和学习情况如何 ?

2. 七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲 七月份我将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比 比 赛(赛speech contest )

我在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难,不知你 3. 你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难 能否 。 在这些方面给我予帮助。 谈谈你的困难并请 Tom 帮忙; 赛后我会去看你。


Who is the best ďź


Team1

Team2

Team3

Part1 Group1 (5 Ss) Part2 Group2(5 Ss) Part3 Group3(5 Ss) Part4 Group4(5 Ss)

Part1 Group1 (5 Ss) Part2 Group2(5 Ss) Part3 Group3(5 Ss) Part4 Group4(5 Ss)

Part1 Group1(5 Ss) Part2 Group2(5 Ss) Part3 Group3 (5 Ss) Part4 Group4(5 Ss)


1. 你上个月来到北京学习。现在的生活 和学 习情况如何? 2. 七月份我将去北京参加暑期中学生英语 演 讲比赛 3. 我在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了 困 难,不知你能否在这些方面给我予帮助。

4. 赛后我会去看你。


Sentence1

1.Neat handwriting? 2.No mistakes? Team2 3.Graceful Team3 Sentence1 sentence? Sentence1

_________

_________

_________

Senence2 _________ Sentence3 _________ Sentence4 _________

Senence2 _________ Sentence3 _________ Sentence4 _________

Senence2 _________ Sentence3 _________ Sentence4 _________

Team1

The winner today is Team_____


What makes a good essay? Structure Right form of the composition?

Good beginning? Good ending? Is the essay divided into parts? content Are all the detailed stated? Is everything to the point? language Does the writer use any linking words? Are there any mistakes? Is there any advanced vocabulary? Are there any good sentence patterns? others Neat handwriting? Proper number of words?


学生 作品 现场 秀

假设你是李华,你的美国朋友 Tom 上个月来到 北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生 英语演讲比赛( speech contest ),你在资料搜 集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下 要点给 Tom 写一封电子邮件: 1. 询问 Tom 的生活和学习情况; 2. 谈谈你的困难并请 Tom 帮忙; 3. 告诉 Tom 你打算赛后去看他。


Summary ďźš Choose one composition on

the blackboard and then make some comments on it.


Today’s homework 1. Polish your composition 2. Revise your partner’s composition and write some comments about it. 3. Hand in

how to write a compostion  

compostion

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