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Redundancy return = back garbage = debris as = equally new = innovation introduce = first time each year = annually whole = entire while = at the same time and = also repeat = again completely = totally


• Wordy Sentences •  The reason is that he shouts… / Due to the fact that he shouts •  Because he shouts… •  In spite of the fact that she came late… •  (Although / Though / Even though) she came late.. • And that was when •  when •  They arrived late and they started to unpack. •  They arrived late and started to unpack.


• Practice – Redundancy • - Correct the error(s) if found. • 1- When we have a project, we can refer back to history. • - When we have a project, we can refer to history. • 2-The new innovation was displayed in the science fair. • - The innovation was displayed in the science fair. • 3- After a lengthy debate, he refused the whole entire concept. • - After a lengthy debate, he refused the entire concept. • 4- Its common for people to send emails while at the same time they continue to correspond via “snail mail”. • - Its common for people to send emails while they continue to correspond via “snail mail”.


Redundancy & Wordiness  

each year = annually garbage = debris whole = entire repeat = again completely = totally and = also introduce = first time as = equally • ...

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