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Draft 1

Audience Feedback • The design is really good When you put your video on, it will look to busy, so put the boy and girl together Change the colour of the title, because it doesn’t stand out


Draft 2

Audience Feedback • Looks better with them both on one side • Title colour is better • The wholes on the diary part looks really good The smoke just cuts off. Doesn’t look right You should put the trailer on the right, and make the smoke surround it


Website drafts