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Film Title Battered and Bruised

Written Syria

Cycle

Strengths

Weaknesses

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Mise-en-Scene Good camera work when fighting

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Bad camera work Not suitable music for British Social Realism

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Good editing Good credits Good Storyline Mise-en-scene is very bland and clear and makes it seem very believable.

Not obviously British

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Very British Starts off well and then, very fast and a lot of action. Seems like it would have been a good storyline

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Original music On task Good steady pace Not a lot of dialogue

Straight Edge

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Wasters

Would have been good if it was a trailer Was given permission to use the music

Mark

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Stole the song Bad continuity when they are in the living room as it starts off as daylight and ends up being dark. No camera language

I think the music should of faded out before the main title as it seems quite sudden

Like a trailer, seems like it shows the whole film Voice over which isn’t very likely in a British Social Realist film Credits come at the end

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