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Film title Draft 1 - Date

Shot No. 1

2

Location Molly's Room

Molly's Room

Shot Type Angle extreme close up

close up

eye level

eye level

Movement (handheld unless stated) static

static (tripod)

equiptment Length (secs) 6

4

(camera and tripod in all)

Dialogue

music and sfx

description of action

actors

radio in the background

She is putting lip stick on her lips.

Sophie

radio in the background

She pulls the lip stick away. We see her full battered face as she stares down straight down the camera (the camera being the mirror she's looking at).

Sophie

lip stick

make-up. condom. 3

Molly's Room

cu

birds eye view

static

2

radio in the background

4

Molly's Room

mid-shot

eye

static

10

radio in the background

5

Molly's Room

cu

birds eye

static

1.5

radio in the background

6

Dad's Bedroom

Establishing shot

slight high

static (tripod)

5

radio in the background. Very faint.

Shows make-up set. Puts the lip stick down on it. Condom is on it, too. Putting her jumper on nervously. Filmed from behind, we see now that she is in her room, looking at her self in the mirror whilst doing so. Back to 2nd shot. She picks up the concealer. Dad in background of shot. Napping in chair.

Sophie

Sophie

Sophie

Dad

She has conceler brush in hand as we film side on. Camera tilts down, following. She pulls back sleeve to show scar on wrist. Conceals scar on arm Conceals scar on finger

Sophie Sophie

make-up. Jumper. Mirror. bedroom facilities.

Concealer. Makeup set. Condom. Bedroom facilities, i.e bed, wardorbe, chair etc Brush

7

Molly's Room

close up

high

tilt down

6

radio in the background

Sophie

8 9

Molly's Room Molly's Room

e-cu e-cu

eye eye

static static

2 2

10

Molly's Room

e-cu

eye

static

3

Conceals scar on neck

Sophie

11

Molly's Room

e-cu

eye

static

2

radio in the background radio in the background radio in the background. Gasp of pain. radio in the background

Conceals scar on eye

Sophie

12

Dad's Bedroom

Est.

slight high

static (tripod)

5

radio in the background. Very faint.

Dad tosses slightly in chair, but still asleep

Dad

Brush Brush Brush Brush Bedroom facilities, i.e bed, wardorbe, chair etc


13

14

Molly's Room

Molly's Room

cu

birds eye view

She closes her curtains. Switches on the light. Closes her cupboard.

radio in the background. Very faint.

static (tripod)

3

Tilt down

3

est.

17

Molly's Bedroom

Full

slight high

20

10

radio in the background. Curtains being closed. Footsteps. Light switch. Cupboard door shut.

eye

16

Dad's bedroom

radio in the background. Nervous breathing.

mid

slight high

19

4

She takes the make-up and dumps in it her handbag and then closes the bag and puts it round shoulder. Camera tilts to show her looking around the room.

follow her movements

Dad's Bedroom

Bedroom to Upstairs Corridor to Staircase to Front Door

Back to 2nd shot. She grabs all the make up set in one sweep of her hand. She doesn't get all of it.

tilt down. Then tilt up.

Molly's Room

Dad's bedroom

radio in the background. Sound of make up tools rubbing against a table and some dropping to the floor.

2

eye

mid

15

18

static

slight high

static (tripod)

Mid

eye level

track movement of radio, then tilt up to Molly. Now follow her

Est.

slight high

21

By the Front door

Full shot

High angle

22

Upstairs Corridor looking into Molly's Room

Long shot

23

By the Front door

cu

24

By the Front door

Full shot to Close Up

Est.

Dad tosses slightly again

Molly goes to turn volume up on radio and then picks it up. Dad moves his head and looks at his door tiredly Faint radio increases in volume (which is in direction of camera) as he notices volume change. Molly is carrying radio then places it near her door, Footsteps, radio (which then then walks out her room, decreases as we move away shuts door. Starts to walk from it). slowly to her front door, trying to not wake her sleeping dad. radio volume increases

2

17

make-up. condom. Sophie Make-up. Handbag. Sophie

Sophie

Dad

Radio

Dad

Bedroom facilities, i.e bed, wardorbe, chair etc

Radio.

Sophie

Bedroom facilities, i.e bed, wardorbe, chair etc

1

radio in the background

static

4

Dad: (shout) Molly!

Her footsteps, radio in the background

She's putting her shoes on by the door. Radio stops. Then Dad shouts viciously.

Sophie

low

static

2

Dad: (devilishly sinister) You sneaky Footsteps little bitch.

We see that Dad is in Molly's room. He's awake and he knows she's gone.

Dad

high

static

2

Molly: (trembling) No.

Shoelace tighten. Dad's groans. Molly's breathing and She ties her laces nervousness.

eye

track forward until close

4

Molly: (trembling) Shit.

Molly heavy breathing. Dad's groans. Door handle being turned.

She stands up after tying shoes then hurridley goes to door handle and turns it.

Bedroom facilities, i.e bed, wardorbe, chair etc

Sophie

We see Dad's room and now he's not in there.

static (tripod)

Curtains. Light switch. Cupboard.

Shoes

Shoes Sophie Door handle Sophie


23

Dad: (shouts) Go on then, go.

Footsteps

Dad walks out of her room, towards camera

Molly panting. Door opening.

She opens the door

Molly's Room

mid

eye

track back

2

By the Front door

cu

eye

static

1

25

Staircase

Long shot to Close Up

low

tilt up

3

Dad: (shouts angrily) Just watch when you Footsteps get back, you little tart.

26

Staircase looking at Front Door

Long

high

static

1

eye

Track right. Follow her run but then slow down to become static

27

EXTERIOR Street.

Long shot

8

Molly: (shouts)

Dad Sophie

Dad walks from room to banister and leans over it and shouts to Molly

Dad

Door slam

Molly slams door behind her.

Sophie

Panting. Near crying.

Molly runs away from her Dad. Realising her plan to sneak out failed, she runs and runs, away and out shot to her friend's party.

Sophie.

Door handle


shooting script