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Clues Cast Joey – Victim – Wearing sweat pants and hoody. He is a Chav. Matt Schupps – Killer 1 – Wearing a shirt and pants, like he has just finished a long day in the office. He works as a photographer. Keith – Killer 2 – Jeans and a t-shirt. He is a normal outgoing guy. Keith’s daughter – Dress of some sort Vince – Killer 3 – Dominoes pizza outfit. Works for Dominoes. Michelle – Model

{Title Sequence}

Opening Scene – The Workplace (Matt’s workplace. Joey is tied up to a chair with duct tape on his mouth. Room is very dark with a light only on Joey. Matt is in the room with Joey and is tormenting him with the knife.) [Low angle looking at Joey] Joey – (Struggling, trying to get free) No, no, no, please no! Matt – (Walking around Joey, stroking the knife along his neck) I told you I’d kill you, you shouldn’t of done it. I’ll give you one choice. (Bends down in front of Joey with tip of the knife on his chin) Slow and painful or quick and painless, well less painful. (Joey gets agitated and is struggling lots. Matt walks to the back of him and is about to slit his throat when loud banging on the door) Vince – (From other side of the door) Matt! I know you’re in there you twat! Open the fucking door! Matt – (Looking at door and shouting) Piss off I’m busy! (Vince kicks down the door and points a gun at Matt. He is startled by seeing Joey tied up) Vince – (Placing gun by his side, smug look on his face and struts towards where Joey is tied up) Well, well, what the fuck is going on in here? I always knew you were a psycho Schupps! Maniac you are! You deserve to die. (Joey gets more and more agitated and wriggles more and makes more noise) Matt – Fuck off! I don’t even know what I did wrong, now leave me alone alright! Now can you see I’m busy here! (Points to Joey) Vince – You don’t know what you did? Let me refresh your memory.


{Fade to white and into next seen}

Scene 2 (Matt is in work in the studio, knock on the studio door to reveal Vince with a pizza) Vince – Hi there mate, pizza for Mike Hunt is it? Matt- (Confused) Erm...no that’s not me, I’m kinda busy here. Sorry (Closes door in Vince’s face and continues photographing) (Vince knocks again, this time slowly and loudly. Matt sighs and opens the door once again. Did you not hear me the first time? I’m fucking busy with a very important customer. Vince – I understand that but mate, I can’t go til I’ve sold this pizza. (Pushes pizza towards Matt) (Matt gets annoyed by this action and pushes the pizza up into Vince’s face, he then pushes him away. Vince falls to the floor. Door is then slammed. Matt – (Shouting) I told you I was busy now fuck off you low life cunt!

{Fade to white again and go back to opening scene, Matt’s workplace}

The Workplace Matt – So you want to kill me because of me being busy? Vince – (Getting more and more angry as he goes on) No, the respect! Just because I’m a pizza boy doesn’t mean I should get pushed around. It pisses me off and I’ve had enough! You were the final straw! You’ve sent me like this! Fucked my life over, go me fired from my job! My life isn’t worth living and it’s all because of you. Well hopefully my life will get better now, one less person in the world like you! I hope you like hell! (Vince goes to fire gun) Matt – No! Wait! Let me tell you why I was so annoyed. It’s this guys fault! (Points at Joey)

{Fade to white and into next seen}


Scene 3 (Scene starts with alarm clock going off. Matt wakes up and realises he is late) Matt – Shit! (Rushes around to get ready and runs out the house. Somewhere in house have an appointment card for psychiatric therapy. Goes to car but it won’t start. He starts hitting the steering wheel in anger. Eventually he decides he has to walk. En route a car wets him by going through a puddle. He also receives a text from his girlfriend saying they need to talk. Matt gets angrier. Joey is then walking in the opposite direction and bumps into Matt. He doesn’t apologise which puts Matt on his last nerve. Cut down of scene 2) [Change of perspective on camera angle. As door closes from scene 2 we go back to the studio] Matt – (To Michelle) I’m sorry about that. I’ve had such a bad day, that has just made it so much worse. I feel as though I could kill! Michelle – (Sitting on couch. Looks down onto lap) Oh, well I must apologise now because I’m gonna make your day even worse. Matt – (Shocked) What? What the hell are you going to say? Michelle – (Sympathetic) I, I recently found out you take psychiatric therapy sessions. Matt – Yeah Michelle – Well...erm...you scared me today and knowing that you have a problem makes me scared. I’m afraid we’re going to have to cancel our sessions. I’m so sorry. Matt – (Standing up sharply) I don’t have a mother fucking problem! Get out bitch! (Grabs Michelle’s arm and drags her out the studio) Go on fuck off! (Throws Michelle to the ground and slams the door. He then punches the wall and falls to the floor, crying, head in hands)

{Fade to white again and go back to opening scene, Matt’s workplace}

The Workplace Vince – So you want to kill him because you had a bad day? (Starts to get upset) Matt – (Getting angry again) Yes! (Starts to realise what he has done) Oh shit, what am I doing?! (Bows head in shame) (Matt goes to release Joey and Vince places weapon the ground and walks over to help. Suddenly there is a loud crash. In runs Keith) Keith – (Points at Vince) You! (Anger visible on his face) You prick! My daughter is lying in a hospital bed, lifeless! How, how can you do that? How can you run down an innocent little girl and just drive off? You deserve to die! I’m going to mash you up, chop you into bits and sit here with the satisfaction of seeing a knob like you is dead! (Sarcastic, large smile) Vince – (Stutters as if he is scared) Um...What are you on about? I, I did nothing!


Keith – (Startled by what he heard) You. Did. Nothing? HA! Let me refresh your memory.

{Fade to white and into next seen}

Scene 4 (We see Vince on the floor just after Matt has pushed him to the ground in scene 2. Outraged, he stands up and makes his way to his car. Because of the anger, he drives erratically. When driving down a road, he sees Keith’s daughter step out into the road and runs her down. He doesn’t stop and keeps on driving. We see Keith’s daughter lay on the floor in a pool of blood {Sirens are in the background})

{Fade to white again and go back to opening scene, Matt’s workplace}

The Workplace Keith – You deserve this you sick piece of shit! (Keith kicks the door shut and locks it. Off screen, Keith brutally kills Vince with the hammer. On screen, You see Joey’s and Matt’s reaction to this happening. As Keith finishes with Vince he realises that the other two have witnessed the attack and takes the hammer to them. After his attacks have finished. He realises he has done wrong and picks up the gun and shoots himself.

{Fade to black and roll credits}


Script - Draft One